Fursat ki aik Nazm (Rizwan Ashar)

new_beau

Posted on 4/4/2006 6:37:13 PM

Doctor Sam

hum to hain muztarib kai sadiyon se
tum ko sakoon paanay se kis ne roka hey..

shayad...

aap ne e roka hey...

Posted on 4/4/2006 6:54:26 PM

new_beau

Poori Nazm mainn sirf aik Line per Tabsara

Posted on 4/4/2006 7:48:00 PM

Doctor Sam

wo line zyada achi lagi na...

let me read it once again to comment on another line...

Posted on 4/4/2006 8:18:11 PM

new_beau

ok..waiting

Posted on 4/4/2006 8:41:25 PM

Doctor Sam

to b honest, nazm sari achi hey...

resham ka ik nanna sa khaliq
gungunata hey kisi shaakh par tanha
is k geeton main hey kahani kuch..
keh raha hey bharrai aankha ka
ruka hua paani kuch...

beautiful lines...

Posted on 4/4/2006 8:46:56 PM

new_beau

Posted on 4/4/2006 9:02:12 PM

Doctor Sam

lo... aapko to chammo a gai hey...

Posted on 4/4/2006 9:11:08 PM

new_beau

Baaqi Log Kahann hainn

Posted on 4/5/2006 9:53:16 AM

Doctor Sam

ab yahan koi nahi. koi nahi aaye ga...

Posted on 4/5/2006 8:35:18 PM

new_beau

Posted on 4/5/2006 8:39:54 PM

Doctor Sam

ismain rone ki kya baat hey...

Ummeed....

Hum ne ummeed k saharay par
toot kar yunhi zindagi ki hey
jistarah tum se aashqi ki hey
Faiz...

Posted on 4/5/2006 8:59:49 PM

nikama

rooh aur saans ka rishta,he bait-ul-ankboot ka hi taar.u said it all,dear.main ne nazm to kal hi parh li thi lekin thak gaya tha posting se.beautifull

Posted on 4/5/2006 10:20:40 PM

new_beau

Doctor Sam:
ismain rone ki kya baat hey...

Ummeed....

Hum ne ummeed k saharay par
toot kar yunhi zindagi ki hey
jistarah tum se aashqi ki hey
Faiz...

Agar aap FAIZ na likhtay tou mainn Phir Ghalat Fenhmi mainn per jaata