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Ab kis ka jashn manatay ho...!

Posted on 8/6/2006 8:36:03 PM


nice
Posted on 8/7/2006 1:28:35 AM
nahin manatay


waisay v nice
Posted on 8/7/2006 1:52:55 PM
ye nazm main ne bohat arsa pehle parhi thi..aor mujhe is ne acha khasa mutasir kiya tha... so true...
Posted on 8/7/2006 10:17:33 PM
Posted on 8/8/2006 2:19:49 AM
love this poem
i read it abt 5/6 yrs ago,,, and every aug 14th or march 23rd mujhe yaad aa jati hai
Posted on 8/9/2006 11:59:37 AM
ye nazm Ahmad Fraz ne Pakistan ki golden jubliee pe likhi thi aor usmain ye qita bhi tha

ab tan ki nagri raakh hui
aor mann ka maya hath nahi
ye nisf sadi ka qissa hey
do chaar baras ki baat nahi...

aankhon main chupaye.......
...

Posted on 8/9/2006 8:50:33 PM
Posted on 8/10/2006 9:31:02 AM
aapko kya hua hey jee..?
Posted on 8/10/2006 7:28:19 PM
idrak hua hay sachayee ka
Posted on 8/11/2006 11:17:27 PM
ye bhi mutasrin main shamil ho gaye hain na
Posted on 8/12/2006 12:24:32 PM
Doctor Sam:
ye nazm Ahmad Fraz ne Pakistan ki golden jubliee pe likhi thi aor usmain ye qita bhi tha

ab tan ki nagri raakh hui
aor mann ka maya hath nahi
ye nisf sadi ka qissa hey
do chaar baras ki baat nahi...

aankhon main chupaye.......
...

sahi
hum bhi soch rahe the k kuch kam hai
Posted on 8/12/2006 12:25:50 PM
i m removing the poem.. kisi ne bilkul theek aitraaz kiya hey is nazm k aik hissay pe...
Posted on 8/12/2006 7:30:26 PM
cool
Posted on 8/17/2006 5:05:50 PM
kya cool hey babu jee..
Posted on 8/17/2006 6:25:43 PM
Waiting for edited version
Posted on 8/17/2006 6:29:21 PM
nazm is back..
Posted on 8/18/2006 7:58:42 PM
Doctor Sam:
i m removing the poem.. kisi ne bilkul theek aitraaz kiya hey is nazm k aik hissay pe...

konse hisse pe kya eitraz hua hai
Posted on 8/19/2006 5:27:17 PM
kyun remove kiya kya kia
Posted on 8/19/2006 5:50:07 PM
aik Qita main Hazrat Maryam aor Hazrat Eesa Aleh salam ka zikr tha, some one pointed out k anbiyaaye karaam ka zikr kisi bhi tarah aise karna munasib nahi.. mujhe khud bhi ghair-munasib laga.. thts y usko edit kiya..
Posted on 8/19/2006 7:45:03 PM
ok.....
Posted on 8/19/2006 7:53:22 PM
Doctor Sam:
aik Qita main Hazrat Maryam aor Hazrat Eesa Aleh salam ka zikr tha, some one pointed out k anbiyaaye karaam ka zikr kisi bhi tarah aise karna munasib nahi.. mujhe khud bhi ghair-munasib laga.. thts y usko edit kiya..

okk got it
but Hazrat Essa and Hazrat MAryam are 2 references from history
maseehai aur pakbazi k

aise poems edit honi lagi to hamare Iqbal tak ki shairi 3/4 reh jae gi
Posted on 8/22/2006 4:29:55 PM
Posted on 8/22/2006 5:04:19 PM
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