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kya aap ko shair-o-shayari ka shoq hai

salaam or adaab
iss forum per topic perhtay perhtay yeh pata challa kay idhar shaayyar buhot hain to kyun na thora test shest ho jaay achha to kerna yeh hai idhar aap log jo baat kerain gay qaflay say qaafla mila ker karaingay okay
yani shir-o-sayyari main bhallay tooti phooti ho
to start kero
Posted on 6/7/2004 9:54:14 PM
mujhe suney kee had tak ache lagti hai ......... per kehna kuch aata nahi
Posted on 6/7/2004 10:41:23 PM
mana kisi kisi ko shayari ka shoq hai ..........lekin tooti phooti kehnay say kuch jata nahi
Posted on 6/8/2004 9:49:22 PM
per tooti phooti karney sai kuch nah kuch aa zaroor jata hai aik nah aik din
soo keep up the good work
Posted on 6/9/2004 3:11:29 AM
mughey to ishq hai shairi se main boohat kuch kehna chahti hon per ata nahin
Posted on 6/14/2004 1:48:06 PM
ajab bhais hain sub kay ajab ajab loog.....in sub ki shairi sun kay tum ko hansna atta nahin????
Posted on 6/15/2004 12:52:28 AM
kiss sai keh rahey hoo ego mujh sai ya kiran sai
Posted on 6/16/2004 10:08:11 AM
egoistguy4:
ajab bhais hain sub kay ajab ajab loog.....in sub ki shairi sun kay tum ko hansna atta nahin????


hansna to aata hai magar
kisi ki chhoti si ghalti pe hasa jaata nahi
Posted on 6/20/2004 3:19:06 PM
SANUM

yeh tum kia zulm kerr rahee ho
kaisey kaisey logon say shairee kerwa rahee ho
Posted on 6/20/2004 3:26:49 PM
itna asaan nahi lafzon ka yeh khel
sher o shairi aati hai aate aaate,,
kahin wazan, kahin zameen, kahin radeef
shaam beet jaati hai kafiya milate milate,,
ab aap ne farmaish kar hi di thi to
suna diye aap ko kuch sher jaate jaate,,


oh my GOD
mujhe shairi aati haiiiiiiii
Posted on 6/20/2004 3:43:34 PM
array shairi karna to buhot aasaan hai
kia aap ko laga toofaan hai
Posted on 6/20/2004 4:13:31 PM
nah yar,, shairi bohot mushkil hai (at least for me)
wot i posted above took me 2 min,, and i call it TUK BANDI
shairi mei language k saath saath idea bhi bohot important hota hai..

par khair,, not much ppl care abt IDEA
Posted on 6/20/2004 5:01:18 PM
shok to hai buss apnay shair hi likhta hoon
Posted on 6/21/2004 6:24:12 PM
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