American girls poetry

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americangirl

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I am
I am the desert
And you are the cool rain that wets my parched lips
I am the snow
And you are the sun that warms my cheeks
I am the sky
And you are the stars in my eyes
I am the flowers
And you are the air that surrounds me in embrace
I am nothing without you

Mein hoon
Mein sehra hoon
Aour tum acchay baarish wo nam mera khushk hont ho
Mein aasmaan hoon
Aour tum najmein andar meri aankh ho
Mein phool hoon
Aour tum hawaa wo ghere mein andar embrace ho
Mein taray boghar kuch be nehin hoon
Posted 16 Aug 2005

new_beau says
Yeh tou Angrezi mainn Hay ...
Posted 16 Aug 2005

what does that mean in English New_Beau. You forget I do not speak much urdu.
Posted 17 Aug 2005

new_beau says
Is that your own lines ...AMERICAN GIRL ?
Posted 17 Aug 2005

Yes, new_beau that is my own work thank you very much. I wrote it myself because it is how I feel about someone.
Posted 18 Aug 2005

King of JB thank you so much for the compliments and for looking out for me.
Posted 18 Aug 2005

new_beau says
Please....Post some more of your Poetry....
Posted 18 Aug 2005

cutefriend says
gud JOB am..gal


Posted 19 Aug 2005

I will post more on Monday when I have alot of time to type. Thanks for all the positive feedback guys.
Posted 20 Aug 2005

new_beau says
Monday...



Ok we will wait
Posted 20 Aug 2005

SupidGuy says


Good Work!!!

Keep it up



americangirl said:

I am
I am the desert
And you are the cool rain that wets my parched lips
I am the snow
And you are the sun that warms my cheeks
I am the sky
And you are the stars in my eyes
I am the flowers
And you are the air that surrounds me in embrace
I am nothing without you

Mein hoon
Mein sehra hoon
Aour tum acchay baarish wo nam mera khushk hont ho
Mein aasmaan hoon
Aour tum najmein andar meri aankh ho
Mein phool hoon
Aour tum hawaa wo ghere mein andar embrace ho
Mein taray boghar kuch be nehin hoon






Posted 21 Aug 2005

Thank you stupid guy!
Posted 21 Aug 2005

Rapunzel says
good one
Posted 21 Aug 2005

new_beau says
Kal Mandoay hay
Posted 21 Aug 2005

Sorry it's in english and not urdu...maybe new_beau you can translate for me....
In the wind I hear your laughter
In the sun I feel your warmth
In the stars I see your eyes
In the rain I feel your tears
In the night I feel your touch
In the earth i feel you heartbeat
In the floweres I smell your scent
In everything beautiful, there you are
Posted 22 Aug 2005

Twas your kiss that gave me breath
Twas your touch that started my heart
Twas you fingertips on my eyes that gave me sight
Twas your love that gave me life
Posted 22 Aug 2005

new_beau says
americangirl said:

Sorry it's in english and not urdu...maybe new_beau you can translate for me....
In the wind I hear your laughter
In the sun I feel your warmth
In the stars I see your eyes
In the rain I feel your tears
In the night I feel your touch
In the earth i feel you heartbeat
In the floweres I smell your scent
In everything beautiful, there you are





How's Ma Translation ?
Posted 22 Aug 2005

new_beau says
americangirl said:

Twas your kiss that gave me breath
Twas your touch that started my heart
Twas you fingertips on my eyes that gave me sight
Twas your love that gave me life





How's This One ?
Posted 22 Aug 2005

~CHANDNI~ says
so   nice   bhiya jee
Posted 22 Aug 2005

new_beau says
Its a Translation of American Girl's Poetry Pari Sisso...
Posted 22 Aug 2005

~CHANDNI~ says
americangirl said:

I am
I am the desert
And you are the cool rain that wets my parched lips
I am the snow
And you are the sun that warms my cheeks
I am the sky
And you are the stars in my eyes
I am the flowers
And you are the air that surrounds me in embrace
I am nothing without you

Mein hoon
Mein sehra hoon
Aour tum acchay baarish wo nam mera khushk hont ho
Mein aasmaan hoon
Aour tum najmein andar meri aankh ho
Mein phool hoon
Aour tum hawaa wo ghere mein andar embrace ho
Mein taray boghar kuch be nehin hoon




Posted 22 Aug 2005

~CHANDNI~ says
new_beau said:

Its a Translation of American Girl's Poetry Pari Sisso...



its   to kool
Posted 22 Aug 2005

very good new_beau, I think. I can't read urdu yet unless it is in type: like kya haal hay. I am sorry, but I think you did a good job. Thank you very much for translation so everyone else can understand it.
Posted 23 Aug 2005

I feel nithing inside
I am like an empty bottle
You drank me dry then left
Leaving nothing for ones to come
Only an empty shell
I go through the motions of love
But never really feel anything
I am dry and empty
I can't even cry to release
Because I feel nothing
Because you only left pain
And after awhile
Even pain empties out
Then what is left?
Nothing

I am very sad today because my jano has left me. So here is how I feel.
Posted 23 Aug 2005

new_beau says
Very Good..."JANU" ka pata hay aap ko...baaqi Urdu Dont Know
Posted 23 Aug 2005

new_beau says
Posted 23 Aug 2005

My new word for the day I learned is Saathiya-companion...I met an teacher hear from India and we speak some Urdu...so this is my new word...Janu? that is how it is spelled? ok. thank you new_beau...aur kya haal hay new_beau. Aaj sub theek hay for me...at least for now, lol. wb soon
Posted 24 Aug 2005

new_beau says
Good Improvement jee


Tum Kon Ho ..?? Apnay baaray mainn Kuchh Batao Na..

Who are you.. ?? Say something About yourself ??
Posted 25 Aug 2005

I am american...I live in Lousianna. I am in college (a junior) majoring in psychology. I love writing, reading, art, and acting/singing. I am fascinated by different languages...so far I have picked up Urdu the fastest. Apnay baaray mainn kuch batoa na?
Posted 25 Aug 2005

Without the night, how would we rest for it would always be day?
Without water the Earth would just be a vast, barren desert.
Without evil how would we appreciate the good in the world?
Without trials and tribulations we would not be thankful for our many blessings.
Without death, how would we truely understand the joy of really living life.
Without you, then my world is incomplete. You complete me just as the night completes the day, the water and land complete the Earth, and evil as well as good complete the human species.
Posted 25 Aug 2005

new_beau says
americangirl said:

I am american...I live in Lousianna. I am in college (a junior) majoring in psychology. I love writing, reading, art, and acting/singing. I am fascinated by different languages...so far I have picked up Urdu the fastest. Apnay baaray mainn kuch batoa na?



Mainn Pakistani hoon. Lahore mera Shehar Hay, Mainn Mulk Bulgharia kay Qaumi Hawayee idaaray kay Dubai mainn waqaya dafter mainn Mulaazmat kerta hoon.
Posted 27 Aug 2005

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