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americangirl

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I am
I am the desert
And you are the cool rain that wets my parched lips
I am the snow
And you are the sun that warms my cheeks
I am the sky
And you are the stars in my eyes
I am the flowers
And you are the air that surrounds me in embrace
I am nothing without you

Mein hoon
Mein sehra hoon
Aour tum acchay baarish wo nam mera khushk hont ho
Mein aasmaan hoon
Aour tum najmein andar meri aankh ho
Mein phool hoon
Aour tum hawaa wo ghere mein andar embrace ho
Mein taray boghar kuch be nehin hoon
Posted 16 Aug 2005

new_beau says

Without the night, how would we rest for it would always be day?



Without water the Earth would just be a vast, barren desert.



Without evil how would we appreciate the good in the world?



Without trials and tribulations we would not be thankful for our many blessings.



Without death, how would we truely understand the joy of really living life.



Without you, then my world is incomplete. You complete me just as the night completes the day, the water and land complete the Earth, and evil as well as good complete the human species.


Posted 27 Aug 2005

NB bahi aap kamal ho
Posted 27 Aug 2005

American Gal ... you've great thoughts and inspirations to write lovely and charming words and you've blessed with rich capacity to observe nature and awareness of Life and the influences over it and very soft emotions abt Love, Reality and much more ...


wish you very good luck
Posted 27 Aug 2005

NB aap ki kawish ko agar saraha na jata tu mery khyal say is ko meim baheeli kahoun ga aur aap ki har koshish par aur aap ki soach aur fiqar intahaye qabil_e_qadar hay. aap ka shoq aur aap ki tawajah aur jis darja shoq say aap humary JB par humary members ki madad karty hein us k liye mein zati tor par aap ka mashkoor hoon aur aap k alfaz aur husan_e_biyan aur jo ala farhang jis say kabhi tu jadeed urdu ki baaas ati hay aur kabhi qadeem rekhta ki yaad taza hoti hay .... muhtasir youn k (qismat ki sitam zareefi humary pass woh waqat mu-yasar nahi tahliqi kaam k liye lihaza) ek dua aap k liye k Zoar_e_Qalam aur ziada ho
Posted 27 Aug 2005

new_beau said:

americangirl said:

Sorry it's in english and not urdu...maybe new_beau you can translate for me....
In the wind I hear your laughter
In the sun I feel your warmth
In the stars I see your eyes
In the rain I feel your tears
In the night I feel your touch
In the earth i feel you heartbeat
In the floweres I smell your scent
In everything beautiful, there you are





How's Ma Translation ?


great but kya Am girl ko samajh aa jaye gi is salees urdu ki
Posted 27 Aug 2005

sab bohat achha hai nb


Am girl ager aap urdy shairi ko samajh na chahti ho to ziada say ziada urdu shairi ko parho
is say aap ko urdu shairee main TASHBEEH AUR ISTAARA ka istamal waziyah ho ga
doosaray koshish nkero kay jitni uru aati hai oosi ko istamal ker kay urdu main hi likho is say jab NB aap ki shairee ki islah keray ga to aap ko khud bhi parhany main asani ho gi

baqi aap ki shairana soch zaberdast hai
Posted 27 Aug 2005

new_beau says
Teen Tracker said:

NB bahi aap kamal ho



Aur Aap Jamaal Ho ..



Jamal Means HUSN..Khoobsoorti...








Dekh Balam Teri Qasam Chhaalay Peray Zuban pay
Posted 27 Aug 2005

new_beau says
WARMTH OF LOVE said:

NB aap ki kawish ko agar saraha na jata tu mery khyal say is ko meim baheeli kahoun ga aur aap ki har koshish par aur aap ki soach aur fiqar intahaye qabil_e_qadar hay. aap ka shoq aur aap ki tawajah aur jis darja shoq say aap humary JB par humary members ki madad karty hein us k liye mein zati tor par aap ka mashkoor hoon aur aap k alfaz aur husan_e_biyan aur jo ala farhang jis say kabhi tu jadeed urdu ki baaas ati hay aur kabhi qadeem rekhta ki yaad taza hoti hay .... muhtasir youn k (qismat ki sitam zareefi humary pass woh waqat mu-yasar nahi tahliqi kaam k liye lihaza) ek dua aap k liye k Zoar_e_Qalam aur ziada ho



Itni Gaarhi Urdu.,...Perhnay hi daal diya aap nay tou
Posted 27 Aug 2005

new_beau says
QUEEN VICTORIA said:

new_beau said:

americangirl said:

Sorry it's in english and not urdu...maybe new_beau you can translate for me....
In the wind I hear your laughter
In the sun I feel your warmth
In the stars I see your eyes
In the rain I feel your tears
In the night I feel your touch
In the earth i feel you heartbeat
In the floweres I smell your scent
In everything beautiful, there you are





How's Ma Translation ?


great but kya Am girl ko samajh aa jaye gi is salees urdu ki


Yeh tou Allah Hi Jaanay
Posted 27 Aug 2005

new_beau says
More Lines...AM Girl...
Posted 27 Aug 2005

cutefriend says
Posted 28 Aug 2005

Thank you so much for your feedback and zambardust compliments. Unfortunitally I can't read some of them because they are in Urdu and I can't read that much urdu yet. What does "kya Am girl ko samajh aa jaye gi is salees urdu ki" mean. I know Kya is what but I am lost on the rest. Keep checking because I will post more gahzel soon.
Posted 28 Aug 2005

cutefriend says
dont worry sab samjh main a jaye ga ahista ahista


regular ho jaooo bas
sab samjh a jaye ga

best of luck

BE HAPPY
Posted 28 Aug 2005

Thank you. There is very bad hurricane in LA now so I will post more poetry soon if the electricity doesn't go off tomorrow. shukriya again.
Posted 29 Aug 2005

"kya Am girl ko samajh aa jaye gi is salees urdu ki"
I mean "can u read and understand NB's translation"
Posted 29 Aug 2005

Na, I can't read urdu unless it is in type, like kya haal hay? sub theek hay...like that. I am learning my alphabet now, but it will be a long time before I can read urdu not in type I think.
Posted 29 Aug 2005

When my world is dark and cold, your friendship is the beautiful sunrise that starts the day.
When the meadow of life falls empty and silent, your friendship is the laughter in the bubbling brook.
When the rain falls like a million tears, your friendship is the shelter that keeps me warm and dry.
When all my worries pile up like fallen leaves, your friendship is the beautiful flowers the push up through them.
When the sky is dark with clouds of doubt, your friendship is the sunlight that pushes the clouds away.
Posted 29 Aug 2005

cutefriend says



gud JOB
Posted 30 Aug 2005

new_beau says
americangirl said:

Na, I can't read urdu unless it is in type, like kya haal hay? sub theek hay...like that. I am learning my alphabet now, but it will be a long time before I can read urdu not in type I think.



"Hum Intizaar Kerainn gay, Tera, Qayamat Tek"
"Khuda keray keh Qayamat ho, Aur Tu Aayee.."
Posted 30 Aug 2005

cutefriend says
aye haye


kiya intezar hai

per ham kidher jayen gaye tab
Posted 30 Aug 2005

new_beau says
When my world is dark and cold, your friendship is the beautiful sunrise that starts the day.



When the meadow of life falls empty and silent, your friendship is the laughter in the bubbling brook.



When the rain falls like a million tears, your friendship is the shelter that keeps me warm and dry.



When all my worries pile up like fallen leaves, your friendship is the beautiful flowers the push up through them.



When the sky is dark with clouds of doubt, your friendship is the sunlight that pushes the clouds away.



Posted 30 Aug 2005

aakhri kuch theek nahin lag rahi kyunkay oos ka matlab hai kay tumhari dosti roshni hai jis nay dukh kay badel hata diye
u said aankh chhhalki?
main nay sahi kaha?
Posted 31 Aug 2005

Am G
do u know abt Qayamat?
Posted 31 Aug 2005

Nay, I don't know Queen Victoria...will you tell me. I will add it to my new words.
Posted 31 Aug 2005

Sajoo says
Qayamat is qayamat
Posted 01 Sep 2005

new_beau says
QAYAMAT is ARMAGEDON...The last Day..The Judgment Day.



QUEEN...I will re translate soon....
Posted 02 Sep 2005

cutefriend says
ok me waiting
Posted 02 Sep 2005

Yes, I know what armegedon is. It is the judgement day the final day when we will all be judged accordingly to our sins. I know where I will go on judgement day, so I am not that worried if this is a sign of the end of the world. I am ready whenever God decides it is my time to go home.
Posted 02 Sep 2005

cutefriend says
Posted 04 Sep 2005

new_beau says
cutefriend said:

aye haye


kiya intezar hai

per ham kidher jayen gaye tab



Posted 04 Sep 2005

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