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to be or not to be

Age: 124
Total Posts: 5
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Location:
Pakistan, Pakistan
Yeh Na Thi humari Kismat Kay Visal E Yaar Hotaa
Agar Aur Jeetay tu Yehi Intezar HOta
Posted 24 Feb 2003

quote:
Originally posted by turipti

quote:
Originally posted by WARMTH OF LOVE



well main apnay sheir nahi sunata houn .... [:P]

Warmth of Love


itney buri hai kya?..lol j/k





nahi... turipti... buhat achay hain.... :$ ... kabhi sunaoun ga... actually high level kay hain kissi ko samajh nahi ayein gay...



Warmth of Love
Posted 03 Mar 2003

turipti says
bata kar to deko...if its en excuse or not..j/k[;)]
Posted 03 Mar 2003



okay ... I never compose my sheir .. ... i believe if i typed in english like they loss their beauty... and if I put these shair in URDU... u can't understand... [:p] thats the problem ....

Warmth of Love
Posted 04 Mar 2003



[;)]

Warmth of Love
Posted 04 Mar 2003

dosselpoh says
itni zoor say ankh mari ha
Posted 04 Mar 2003

Rani.........
lagta hai kisi building ki bohat upar walay apt mein rahti ho........... issi liay unchi cheez ho

TERAY KARDAR KO ALFAZ KA PEKAR DAY DOON
INTQAMAN MEIN ZAMANAY KO YEH PATHAR DAY DOON

TU MERA SAATH NA CHHORAY TO HAI MERA WADA
MEIN ZAMANAY KO TERAY NAAM PAY CHAKKAR DAY DOON

DAYKH KITNA HAI TERI BHOOK KA EHSAAS MUJHAY
TU AGAR PET PAY BANDHAY TO MEIN PATHAR DAY DOON
Posted 04 Mar 2003

quote:
Originally posted by dosselpoh

itni zoor say ankh mari ha




well tum ko nahi mari ... jiss ko mari hay us nay kuch nahi kaha ... [;)].... waysay main nay tu araam say hi mari thiee.. yeh itna zoar kahan say aa giya hay iss main [:o] [:I]

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé
Posted 04 Mar 2003

turipti says
quote:
Originally posted by WARMTH OF LOVE



okay ... I never compose my sheir .. ... i believe if i typed in english like they loss their beauty... and if I put these shair in URDU... u can't understand... [:p] thats the problem ....

Warmth of Love



pir seh excuse..lol ankeh marnah choro..aur aap urdu meh hi deh do,
i'l make my mum read it for me! [:)]
Posted 04 Mar 2003



okay... good .. but I never publish them on JB...[:I]. j/k


Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé
Posted 05 Mar 2003

turipti says
pir seh excuse....lol j/k acha rehne do
Posted 05 Mar 2003



nahi rahnay dayta.... now I'll post my poetry very soon...sab ko dekhna paray giee j/k

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé
Posted 06 Mar 2003

turipti says
tik hai aap ki marji! i'l be lookin forward to it...[;)]
Posted 06 Mar 2003



no.. .aab sab dekhein gay ..... (-_-)

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé
Posted 06 Mar 2003

Daykhnay walay tujay ab kay iss tarah daykhein gay........
Samnay rakhein gay pani ka glass or uss mein tera aks daykhein gay......
or phir halka sa halain gay glass ko
or glass mein tera raqs daykhein gay.......

(been long since read it, any error..... sorry)
Posted 06 Mar 2003



lol... it is okay.... don't worry

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé
Posted 06 Mar 2003

gotta worry boy.......
kal ko poet hazrat uthh kay sue hi na kar den na..............
Posted 06 Mar 2003


worry not... again [:p]

koi kuch nahi kahay ga... [:p]

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé
Posted 06 Mar 2003

alrie bro
Posted 06 Mar 2003



yes.. I'm here...

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé
Posted 06 Mar 2003

turipti says
me too[;)]
Posted 06 Mar 2003



but u r not here now :'(

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé
Posted 06 Mar 2003

Sakhan says
DUKHON MAIN MUSKURANA PAR GAYA TO
TUMHAIN AANSO CHUPANA PAR GAYA TO
A MERI YAAD MAIN GUM HONEWALAY
AGAR MUJH KO BHULANA PAR GAYA TO
YAQEEN HAI JIS PE KHUD SE BHEE ZIADA
USAY GAR AAZMANA PAR GAYA TO
HAMESHA SOOCH KAR NAZDEEK HONA
AGAR PHIR DURR JANA PAR GAYA TO
Posted 09 Mar 2003



nice... one

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé
Posted 09 Mar 2003

zebii says
well real nice ghazal
Posted 09 Mar 2003

turipti says
cool shair Sakahn...plz get som frndship ones..i lke dem more[:)]
Posted 09 Mar 2003

hunain says
kiu otar jaty hein dil mein essy log
jin sse kismat ke sitary nahi milty....,,,, beautiful
Posted 09 Mar 2003

hunain says
ab hum kuch arz karai
Posted 09 Mar 2003

turipti says
acha kya arz karne hai?
Posted 09 Mar 2003

hunain says
agar talash karo gai to mil hi jai ga > magar kon tumhai hamari tarah chahai ga >>> zarror daikha ga yoh chahato bhari nazroon sai > magar yoh ankhain hamari kahan sai lai ga .



Posted 09 Mar 2003

hunain says
truipti batai aap ko marai ashai kaisa laga
Posted 09 Mar 2003

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