* jal-pari* said:

^^ bachchi ko rula dia aur keh rahe hain jawaab de dia .. hehehe    kidding ...

u r just awesum ... mai yahaan aap ki shaayeeerri ki waja se wapis aayee hooon ... tusssiii Chaah gaye ho jee Taaahh kar k     ..

Meharbaaniii... Per tusi Kon o jee

simple_si_life said:

jab kabhi bersat ka mousam ata hai
purani yadoon ko saath mein lata hai
dhoondta hon woh pal woh khushi
jab hum barish ki boondoon sey bheeg jaya kertey thay..
ab to na woh pal hai na khushi...
na woh bersaat na hi tum....

* jal-pari* said:

hmmm .... Virdaan ur poetry collection iz Superb !! .. i ve read almost ur all poemz .. u r a POET ...

n abt new_beau .... d way u used 2 correct virdaan's mistake iz gr8 ..

Meharbaani

Virdan said:

Thanks a lot sweet friend known by the name of jal pari aap k alfaz ne ik naya jazba aur ik naya hausla bakhsha hay no doubt neu_beau bhi yahi kama karta hay thanks new also kaisa mazaq hay neu

Mainn Calculator Khareednay ja raha hoonn...Aap ka Naye Siray say Hisaab Lagana Peray ga

* jal-pari* said:

ahaaannnn ^^^ no neeed 2 say thankz u deserve dat buddy .. looking forward 4 more poemz ... Thumbsup ...

by d way where iz new_beau ????

Dekh lo Aawaaz day ker    I was busy In some Other things..Now My Travel Trip and Annual Vacation is Over..I am Back..InshAllah Aab Regular Rahoon ga.. Thanks to all