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Posted on 8/16/2005 12:52:39 PM

I like this poem very much. You put alot into it and it shows. Keep up the good work.

Posted on 8/18/2005 7:48:44 AM

thx

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Posted on 8/22/2005 1:25:46 AM

hmmm really khyal aya mera


ha hah a


gud JOB

Posted on 8/22/2005 12:52:31 PM

lol

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Posted on 8/24/2005 2:30:17 AM

sir jeee ap ne to yeh bhi nahi kiay

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Posted on 8/26/2005 1:26:59 AM




superb

Posted on 8/26/2005 1:56:10 AM

yun hi hoti hoon jab main tanha
tho sochon men gum hoti hoon
jaisey who kahin hai merey saath
jaisey haathon men hai oos kaa haath
tho aik muskuraahat aa hi jati hai
aur bhula deti hai,mita deti hai
sab sochein sari tanhaiyaan
mainey tho buss aik cheez hai paee
who hai teri yaad ,sirf teri yaad

Posted on 8/28/2005 4:33:58 PM

muhabat ki kami honye lagi hai
adhori zindagi honye lagi hai
kadam rakhtye hi pehla mery ghar main
rawana phir khusi honye lagi hai
khilono ki jaga dil tot-tye hain
ke guriya ab bari honye lagi hai
yeh kis ke hath be mujh ko chua hai
badan main roshni honye lagi hai
main jis ke rastye per chal raha hoon
woh manzil gher ki honye lagi hai

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Posted on 9/23/2005 8:11:35 PM



Mohabbat Kis Ko Rass Aai Hai


" "Mohabbat uddas shaam ki manind
meray seenay mein utter Aaye hai
jis mein na sobbah ka guman hota hai
aur na he koi saher paye hai
rug rug mein gerdish-e-khoon mein
bus gaye hai teri mohabbat
kabhi kesi anjaan nay b
issay rehaye pai hai
mohabbat pyass bun ker utterti hai
aur ashk baar ker k chordti hai
uddas lamhon nay b kabhi rung ki badli paye hai
na chodra saka hai koi damen bai intaha mohabbat say
per yeh baat such b hai
MOHABBAT KIS KO RASS Aai HAI
damen bachana tum hamesha mohabbat say
werna iss ki ulfat mein buhat he roswaye hai
uddasian, tanhaiyan reh jati hein zindagi mein faqat
meri jaan taqdeer nay b kabhi dosti nebhai hai
na kerna yaaron mohabbat
k iss mein bardi he roswai hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted on 9/24/2005 2:03:21 AM

kiya baat hai dear

Posted on 9/25/2005 2:36:06 PM

ap bhi kuch arz karo

Posted on 9/30/2005 3:13:28 AM

ok ill

Posted on 10/2/2005 12:21:31 AM

waitting

Posted on 10/3/2005 1:18:29 AM

nahi jeee yeh hamari nahi hai jo hamye pasand aye woh hain

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Posted on 10/12/2005 3:58:58 AM

kiya baat hia yar

gud work

Posted on 10/13/2005 2:24:31 AM

thxxxx

Posted on 10/14/2005 1:00:01 AM

welcome welcome
bari nawazish ke idher bhi poetry ki

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Posted on 10/18/2005 1:24:30 AM

ohhh gr8 work yarrrr

Posted on 10/18/2005 5:16:10 PM