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shukaar hai kissey ko tu maira khiyal hai

Posted on 2/21/2004 2:17:50 AM

mg muje kuch nai maloom..

Posted on 2/22/2004 9:09:22 AM

mansoor ghouri:
eray hum bhi bathay hay rahoo may lakin app ki nazeray karem he nahi hotti

and hooray yar tumhay seb malum hay eray wohi or kon ho sekta hay

arey app tu pehli duffa rahoun main aye hain
tu nazeer bhi pard gai hummarey
warna app tu hummarey forum main attey hey nahin

Posted on 2/22/2004 1:25:16 PM

arey me back aur potry bhi back soo
aik qaweeta hazeer-e-khidmaat hai

Posted on 2/25/2004 1:43:25 AM

Yadein pagaal kaar daitey hain
Baatein pagaal kaar daitey hain

Chehra hosh urdha daita hai
Ankhain pagaal kaar daitey hain

Paidaal chalney walloun ko
Rahein pagaal kaar daitey hain

Din tu khair guzaar jatta hai
Ratein pagaal kaar daitey hain



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Posted on 2/25/2004 1:46:10 AM

jaab chouti chouti batoun main tum haanstey rootey thai
                   taab sai tum sai pyaar kiya hai
jaab bin mousam barsaton main hum jhom jhom kai gatey thai
                  taab sai tum sai pyaar kiya hai
jaab chup kai adhi ratoon main chaat pai tarey gintai thai
                   taab sai tum sai pyaar kiya hai
               abb tu khud bhi bhool chukka houn
                   kaab sai tum sai pyaar kiya hai
               baas itna hey keh sakta houn ………..
                   sirf tum sai pyaar kiya hai
                     sirf tum sai pyaar kiya hai

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Posted on 2/25/2004 1:46:41 AM

ego yaar main ager wapis aa gai houn tu tum kahan gaibb hoo
i m missing you

Posted on 2/25/2004 1:48:55 AM

aray han ego kafi din se nazr nai aye..

Posted on 2/25/2004 7:04:51 AM

shy_princess:
ego yaar main ager wapis aa gai houn tu tum kahan gaibb hoo
i m missing you
THANKX SHY ,MUJHAY YAQEEN HAI TUM WAQAI MAIN MISS KAR RAHIHO GI MUJHAY.LAKIN TUM TU KUMKUM ATTI HO,AUR BAQEOON KAH SATH MERA DIL NAHIN LUGTA.JUB MERI KOI AHMIAT HI NAHIN BAQION KI NAZAR MAIN TU .ISS LIAY MAIN PARHTA SUBKAY MESSEGE HOON LAKIN MESSEGE LIKHNA CHOOR DIAY HAIN.

Posted on 2/25/2004 3:30:59 PM

Ego yeh ap kaisi batein kar rae ho..?

Posted on 2/25/2004 3:57:03 PM

it is really superb
thanx soffia keep writting
aur mg jee app bhi kuch ershaad karein

Posted on 2/27/2004 12:39:32 AM

YEH DIL KI RAH,YEH URTA GHUBAR KISS KA HAI.
WOH JA CHUKA HAI TU PHIR INTEZAR KISS KA HAI.
NAHIN WOH APNA,MAGAR USS KI RAH BHI DAIKHOON.
DIL-O-NAZAR PAY BHALA IKHTIAR KISS KA HAI.

Posted on 3/2/2004 12:01:52 AM

NA RASTAY MAIN HI THARAIN,NA APNAY GHAR JAIN.
YEH FAISLAY KI GHARI HAI KAH UB BIKHAR JAIN.
TERA WAJOOD BHI SUCH MAIN MAGAR HUMAIN TUM SAY.
WOH ISHQ HAI KAH TUMHAIN SOCH KAR HI MAR JAINNN.

Posted on 3/2/2004 12:04:49 AM

na meray qalam say likhi gai,na meri zaban say ada hoi.
jo nazar say kahnay ki baat hai,kissi harf main na samay gi.
koi phool chunta kiss tarah,koi dhool hota hai kiss tarah.
yeh tu waqt waqt ki baat hai,tujhay zindagi hi batay gi.

Posted on 3/2/2004 12:07:40 AM

ghalat fehmi nay batoon ko barha dala yoonhi warna.
kaha kuch aur tha,woh kuch aur samjha,mujhay kuch aur kahna tha.
kahan uss nay suni meri,suni bhi un suni kar dii.
ussay malooom tha itnaaaa,,,mujhay kuch aur kahna tha.

Posted on 3/2/2004 12:12:22 AM

shy_princess:
it is really superb
thanx soffia keep writting
aur mg jee app bhi kuch ershaad karein
ARAY HUM HAIN NAAAA.

Posted on 3/2/2004 12:14:59 AM

tumhaara tu appna forum hai tumhain kehnai key zaroorat nahin pardhatey
joo nahin likhatey unhain kehna pardhta hai duffer samjha karoo nah
any ways achi poetry hai

Posted on 3/2/2004 2:12:17 AM

aab aap keh rahi ho tu achi hi ho gie :)

Posted on 3/2/2004 4:28:48 AM

WARMTH OF LOVE:
aab aap keh rahi ho tu achi hi ho gie :)
ARAY WOL APP TENSION NAHIN LOO WOH POETRY SIRF ZOOQ WALOON,AUR AQALMANDOON KAY LIAY ACHI HAI,AGAR APP KO ACHI NAHIN LUGI TU KOI PROBLEM NAHIN.

Posted on 3/2/2004 3:51:13 PM

shy_princess:
tumhaara tu appna forum hai tumhain kehnai key zaroorat nahin pardhatey
joo nahin likhatey unhain kehna pardhta hai duffer samjha karoo nah
any ways achi poetry hai
ARAY APUN KO MASKA NAHIN LUGANAY KA,AUR HAAN TERAY KO KITNI BAAR BOLA MERA REAL NAME(DUFFER) SUB KAY SAMNAY NAHIN LAINAY KA.

Posted on 3/2/2004 3:55:49 PM

ARAY WOL APP TENSION NAHIN LOO WOH POETRY SIRF ZOOQ WALOON,AUR AQALMANDOON KAY LIAY ACHI HAI,AGAR APP KO ACHI NAHIN LUGI TU KOI PROBLEM NAHIN.

aray tenstion kon lay raha hay bahi ... hum tu tension na laytay hein na kisi ko daynay daytay hein :) quite wired na but have some meanings ... ;) but .. yeh tu samajhdar bandoun ko hi samajh aa sakta hay kiun :)

aur wasay bhi ... how u doing ?


Posted on 3/3/2004 4:45:27 AM

raat ka mausaam jab jab

yaadon ki gard laega

mera naam mita ke har baar

baar baar likhoge tum

Good work done (Y)

Posted on 3/3/2004 12:01:11 PM

mansoor ghouri:
DUFFER paa gee humay kessi nay app ka real name jo kay DUFFER hay nahi bataya humay ya bhi nahi malum kay app ko seb DUFFER kahtay hay or kessi ko plz batana bhi nahi kay app ko DUFFER kahtay hay werna seb he app ko DUFFER kahay gay phir app ko gusa aey ga kay seb mujay DUFFER kahtay hay es liya kessi ko nahi malum kay app ko DUFFER kahtay hay

dakha manay app ka name bhi nahi liya or apna kam bhi ho giya hay na paa gee joke
ARAY MG JI AISAY EACH NAHIN KARNAY KA.

Posted on 3/3/2004 3:18:35 PM

mansoor ghouri:
oh acha yar may tumhara duffer wala name nahi loo ga ub kush
JI HAAN MERA DUFFER WALA NAAM APP LAIN GAY TU,SUB KO MERA DUFFER WALA NAAM PATA CHAL JAY GA.PHIR SUB LOOG MUJHAY DUFFER DUFFER KAH KAR BULAIN GAY,AUR APP KO TU MALOOM HAI KAH APUN KA NAAM TU PARENTS NAY DUFFER RUKHA HAI,LAKIN APUN KO WAISAY DUFFER NAAM PASAND NAHIN HAI.SO PLZ KOI BHI MUJHAY DUFFER KAH KAR NA BULAY PLZ.

Posted on 3/4/2004 2:43:55 PM

mansoor ghouri:
DUFFER paa gee humay kessi nay app ka real name jo kay DUFFER hay nahi bataya humay ya bhi nahi malum kay app ko seb DUFFER kahtay hay or kessi ko plz batana bhi nahi kay app ko DUFFER kahtay hay werna seb he app ko DUFFER kahay gay phir app ko gusa aey ga kay seb mujay DUFFER kahtay hay es liya kessi ko nahi malum kay app ko DUFFER kahtay hay

dakha manay app ka name bhi nahi liya or apna kam bhi ho giya hay na paa gee joke

MANSOOR PAA JEE TUSI BARDEY MAZAKIA HOO

Posted on 3/5/2004 2:20:13 AM

NICE POETRY SOFFIA AND MG JEE

Posted on 3/5/2004 2:21:52 AM

all u pplz are sweet :)

Posted on 3/5/2004 8:33:22 AM

WARMTH OF LOVE:
all u pplz are sweet :)
ARAY WOL JI APP BHI TU ITNAY SWEET SWEET HAIN.

Posted on 3/5/2004 2:57:38 PM

rona bhi to chahain to woh rone nahin daita
woh shakhs to palkain bhi baghone nahin daita

woh rooz rulata hai humain khawab main a ker
sona bhi jo chahain to woh sone nahin daita

yeh kis ke ishare per umad aye hain badal
hai kaun jo barish kabhi hone nahin daita

ata hain khayaloon main mere kaun yeh akser
jo mughko kisi aur ka hone nahin daita

ik shakhs hai aisa mere basti main abhi tak
jo bhoogh akele mughey dhone nahin daita

main hon ke bahati hon tere yaad main ashk
tu hai ke mughey ashk parone nahin daita

thame hue lehroon ke husn baag koi to
saheel ko samunder main dabone nahin daita


Posted on 3/5/2004 3:35:45 PM

hmm nice..

Posted on 3/5/2004 3:49:48 PM