Night
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I like where the story goes...... what do you think Sharara??? I can add you too in the story, not as a bird.... you can have your own role sharara..... :-)
Now I'm thinking how to end it...it must be a tremendous end!!! agree???????
sharara
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usko bhulake ab jaoun kahan... yeh pal hai apna to is pal ko jeelein sholon ke tarha zara jal ke jelein pal jhapakte khona jana jo mile ho aaj humko door jana nahi.. mitadoun sari yeh dooriyan... :(
Night
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emmm... I don't understand (urdu)..sorry, I don't get your point. ANd Mani... your story only revolve around the guy and the girl, and it seem they play tug and war, I only added some humor in it.
Night
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well... you can't life without me, that's why you'll never do that...lol...I'm your reason to breath... (is this overwhelming?).. some people say so.,,..but if you leave me...I'll chase you..where ever you go...I look after you.....even if you go to the edge of the world.
Night
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lol....Don't worry man..I'm leaving your story. I'm running out of idea, your story is static...not dinamic...a good story should make people bring their emotion in..sad, happy, ...
And sharara...you deserve it, If I were in the right time, in the right place.... I would..... unfortunately I'm the wrong person in the wrong time....Cheer up!!! (If I like someone, I would do Everything...even chase that person...ha..ha.. I'm out of my mind, right??)
