jo meri aankhon se

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Posted 07 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
jo meri aankhon se khwaab dekho
to ek bhi shab na so sako gay
kay laakh chaho na hans sako gay
hazaar chaho na ro sako gay
kay khwaab kya hain,azaab hain yeh
mairay dukhon ki kitab hain yeh
rafakatein in may chootti hain
mohabatein in main rothti hain
panapti hain in may wehshatain si
aziyatein in may phootti hain
inhi kay darr se khizaa hay jazbay
inhi say shaakain si phootti hain
ghamon ki bandish hay khwaab mairay
dukhho ki baarish hain khwaab mairay
ubal raha hain dukhon ka laawa
raheen atish khwaaab hain mairay
khyaal saray jhulas gaye hain
sulagti khwahish hay khwaab mairay
ukharti saansein hain zindagi ki
lahoo ki saazish hain khwaab mairay
jo meri aankhon se khwaab dekho
to ek shab bhi na so sako gay
Posted 07 Nov 2006

mmja says
wah wah wah wah wah
5 star out of 5
Posted 08 Nov 2006

cutefriend says
Posted 08 Nov 2006

veer_zaara says
great
thanks for sharing
Posted 08 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
thanks to all of you
Posted 08 Nov 2006

mmja says
you cum cum
Posted 08 Nov 2006

danie says
wah wah!!
wah wah!!
wah wah!!

nice poetry
Posted 09 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
thanks
Posted 10 Nov 2006

mmja says
asaneyion say poch na manzal ka rasta
apnay safar main rah kay pathar talash kar
zaray say kayenat ke tafser poch lay
qatray ke waston main samndar talash kar
Posted 14 Nov 2006

danie says
Bahut-khoob!
Posted 14 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
good ha
Posted 14 Nov 2006

mmja says
tano dowan no thanko
Posted 15 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
welcome jee
Posted 16 Nov 2006

mmja says
ansoo nikal padray to lag eh gaye
izharay ghum ka warna salika na tha mughay
Posted 17 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
waisay aapko itnay ziyada shair kaisay aatay hain.
Posted 17 Nov 2006

good 1.........
Posted 17 Nov 2006

rakh apnay pas apnay mehr o mah aey falak
hum khud kisi ki ankh k taray hain in dinon
Posted 18 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
wah wah kya baat hain.
Posted 19 Nov 2006

mmja says
zabardast je
Posted 19 Nov 2006

mmja says
sun_shine said:

waisay aapko itnay ziyada shair kaisay aatay hain.


raz ki bat hai kisi ko batana nahin meri sis ki diari hai usko parta hon or chura layta hon wahan say
Posted 19 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
oh kisi ki diary nahi parhni chahiye jee.khaas kar ladkiyon ki to bilkul nahi.
Posted 20 Nov 2006

mmja says
aray ijazat lay kar parta hon us main srif sher hotay hain je main shalif bacha hon ap mughay esa wesa samghti hain

aik mudat say meri maa nahin hai soye
mainay aik bar kaha tha mughay dar lagta hai
Posted 21 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
wah wah kya poetry hain jee.
mothers aisi hi hoti hain.
Posted 21 Nov 2006

mmja says
or hum badnasib phir bhi unki qadar nahin kartay uper wala hamayen hadyiat day
Posted 23 Nov 2006

rbaba says
sun_shine said:

jo meri aankhon se khwaab dekho
to ek bhi shab na so sako gay
kay laakh chaho na hans sako gay
hazaar chaho na ro sako gay
kay khwaab kya hain,azaab hain yeh
mairay dukhon ki kitab hain yeh
rafakatein in may chootti hain
mohabatein in main rothti hain
panapti hain in may wehshatain si
aziyatein in may phootti hain
inhi kay darr se khizaa hay jazbay
inhi say shaakain si phootti hain
ghamon ki bandish hay khwaab mairay
dukhho ki baarish hain khwaab mairay
ubal raha hain dukhon ka laawa
raheen atish khwaaab hain mairay
khyaal saray jhulas gaye hain
sulagti khwahish hay khwaab mairay
ukharti saansein hain zindagi ki
lahoo ki saazish hain khwaab mairay
jo meri aankhon se khwaab dekho
to ek shab bhi na so sako gay



Posted 23 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
thanks
per hum inshallah koshish zaroor karaingay kay unko hamari wja se koi dukh ya takleef na ho.
Posted 23 Nov 2006

beautful poetry shared.
Posted 23 Nov 2006

mmja says
sun_shine said:

thanks
per hum inshallah koshish zaroor karaingay kay unko hamari wja se koi dukh ya takleef na ho.


bus uper walaysay achi ameed rakhni chaye kay woh hamari koshish ko kamyiab banaye nahin to boht mar paraygi akhir main
Posted 24 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
per Allah Rehmaan o Raheem hain.Inshallah woh hamain zaroor kamyaab karaingay.Ameen
Posted 24 Nov 2006

mmja says
sum ameen lakin yeh dar phir bhi nahin jata ager kamyaab na howay to
Posted 27 Nov 2006

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