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TARASH....Really you have a Good INTIKHAB...
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thanx dear 4 the compliments
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"Chalo Aaghaaz Kertay hainn...
Kisi nayee kahani ka
Kissi Naye say Qissay say
Ta'alluq Jorr Detay Hainn
Kisi ajnabi see
Mukhtalif see
Kefiyat kay Zair-e-Asar Aa ker
Kisi Tareek shab kay Aakhri Lamhay Mainn
Saari Shammonn ko yakdum Bhuja ker
Soch ki Bay rang Tasweeronn mainn
Ik doojay ka Naam ka Rang Bhartey Hainn
"Chalo Aaghaaz kertay hainn"
Mainn jo kehna chahta hoon
Ik din tum say keh daloonn
Lambi Tamheed say Jaan Chhutay
Torr kay aaoon saray Hisaar
Shayad tum ko Paa hi Loon
Tum bhi ik din Khul kay Hanso
Zair-e-lub Muskaan Hatay
Mera Dil Rakhnay ko hi
Tum mehzooz honay ko hi
Mujh say aagay barh kay kaho
Dumm aapas ka Bhaertay Hainn
Chalo Aaghaaz kertay hainn
Tum apnay Jazbay na Batao
Per mujh ko Andaza hay
Peela Chehra hay Tera bhi
Bayshak Chehray pay Ghaaza hay
Jheel si teri Aankhainn nahinn
Jiss ki Gehrayee mainn kho jaoon
Yeh to Khuli Kitaab hain..! Samjhi?
Ik Lamhay Mainn Perh Jaoon
Ab tou yehi irada hay
Apnay Aap say Wa'ada hay
Ik din tum say Keh Daaloonn
Jo sochonn mainn Sochta hoon
Woh sub khuawab dikhainn Hum
Jo Bantay Bikhertay Hainn
Chalo Aaghaaz kertay hainn
Chalo Aaghaaz kertay hainn...
(NA TAMAM)
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theek hai aaghaz kar dia
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Subha Aa jao...Taraash bohat bore ker raha hay
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new_beau said:
"Chalo Aaghaaz Kertay hainn...
Kisi nayee kahani ka
Kissi Naye say Qissay say
Ta'alluq Jorr Detay Hainn
Kisi ajnabi see
Mukhtalif see
Kefiyat kay Zair-e-Asar Aa ker
Kisi Tareek shab kay Aakhri Lamhay Mainn
Saari Shammonn ko yakdum Bhuja ker
Soch ki Bay rang Tasweeronn mainn
Ik doojay ka Naam ka Rang Bhartey Hainn
"Chalo Aaghaaz kertay hainn"
Mainn jo kehna chahta hoon
Ik din tum say keh daloonn
Lambi Tamheed say Jaan Chhutay
Torr kay aaoon saray Hisaar
Shayad tum ko Paa hi Loon
Tum bhi ik din Khul kay Hanso
Zair-e-lub Muskaan Hatay
Mera Dil Rakhnay ko hi
Tum mehzooz honay ko hi
Mujh say aagay barh kay kaho
Dumm aapas ka Bhaertay Hainn
Chalo Aaghaaz kertay hainn
Tum apnay Jazbay na Batao
Per mujh ko Andaza hay
Peela Chehra hay Tera bhi
Bayshak Chehray pay Ghaaza hay
Jheel si teri Aankhainn nahinn
Jiss ki Gehrayee mainn kho jaoon
Yeh to Khuli Kitaab hain..! Samjhi?
Ik Lamhay Mainn Perh Jaoon
Ab tou yehi irada hay
Apnay Aap say Wa'ada hay
Ik din tum say Keh Daaloonn
Jo sochonn mainn Sochta hoon
Woh sub khuawab dikhainn Hum
Jo Bantay Bikhertay Hainn
Chalo Aaghaaz kertay hainn
Chalo Aaghaaz kertay hainn...
(NA TAMAM)
Yaar I said it FIL BADEEH....
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new_beau said: Subha Aa jao...Taraash bohat bore ker raha hay
ohhhhhhhhhhhh
bardasht kar ya paas kar
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tarash said:
new_beau said: Subha Aa jao...Taraash bohat bore ker raha hay
ohhhhhhhhhhhh
bardasht kar ya paas kar
Mainn soch raha hoon HORN day ker raasta LAY LOON
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horn ki awaz nahin ayee
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Very Good
"Baat asal mainn aik hi hay, Koi Bhoojhay Per"
"Aadhi Ghazal ik forum pay Aadhi Doojay Per !"
Adaab arZ hay
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yeh bhi kisi kisi ka kaam hai
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WAH, Subhanallah
"Bawajood Yeh Keh Per-o-Baal na thay Adam kay"
"Waann yeh pnhcha keh Farishtay ka bhi Maqdoor na tha"
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Ik Khawab
Janay kaun saa Khaab Chupaa hai
Maree inn pur num aankhoun main
ik ajeeb si khushboo rachee hai
maree inn chund saansoun main
na janay kioun mera dil khou saa jata hai
bahaar kay rangeen nazaaroun main
yaa shayed yeh koi weham hai mera
in khoubsourat shaamoun main
jaisay koi chahyaa houaa hai
Khaaboun main khayaloun main
yaa shayed kisi ki yaad ka rang hai
bikhraa hai phir say inn aankhoun main
jaanay kaun saa khaab chupaa hai
maree inn pur num aankhoun main .........
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"Jb ka Admin Bannay ka Khuwab ?? "
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new_beau said: "Jb ka Admin Bannay ka Khuwab ?? "
new_beau ka khawab
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This is not my Khuwab.
But Beware..Jis din mainn nay yeh Khuwab dekh liya..Mainn Such bhi ker kay dikha doon ga
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thx new beu
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Welcome Janubaby jee
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hmmmmmmmmm
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lately i read some poetry, liked it very much.
kuch is tarah se tha:
suuroj ko ghar main basane ka sooch raha hai
bhuul gaya hai ke khud maum ka ghar rakhta hai
(maybe a bit wrong said but was something like it, kitni sachi baat hai.....)
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nice sash ji
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