Subha`s poetry

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Posted 22 Dec 2003

subha says
ßãrïsh said:

chubhaaaaaaaaaaa itni asaaan poetry talti ho aap


sawaaaaaaaaaan sawaaaaaaaaaan sawaaaaaaaaaan




aap bathoon ki tamajh mein asake ich liye aichi talti hoon na
Posted 10 Mar 2004

Guest_002 says
oh :O chubha bacha bolein to?

Posted 10 Mar 2004

subha says
bacha bolen to kid
Posted 10 Mar 2004

Guest_002 says
n kid bolein to? to?
Kid_ _ hehe
Posted 10 Mar 2004

subha says
kid bole to kiddo ika jb ka jin
Posted 11 Mar 2004

Guest_002 says




HuGs*


sawaaaaaaaaan sawaaaaaaan sawaaaaaaaaaaaaan
Posted 11 Mar 2004

subha says
Posted 11 Mar 2004

Ashii says
subha said:

subha kiyoon nahi kar sakhti


aap say bataon kiyoon nahi ho sakti aisi poetry


coz it s tooo good na

kyun kyunnn me kyun nahi kar saktiiii, telll me
Posted 12 Mar 2004

subha says
sall

dekha barish sall kiya keh rahi hain tooooooo good


coz u r not subha na heheh kdn
Posted 12 Mar 2004

Ashii says

u r SUBAH
and
ME ---> SAANJH KI DULHAN BADAN CHURAAAAAAAE
Posted 12 Mar 2004

subha says
Congrats Sall 4000 wooow
Posted 12 Mar 2004

subha says
SALL said:


u r SUBAH
and
ME ---> SAANJH KI DULHAN BADAN CHURAAAAAAAE






heheheehhhe
Posted 12 Mar 2004

Ashii says
thnku thankuuuu..
aaj me subah subah hi aa gai
Posted 13 Mar 2004

tarash says
Posted 15 Mar 2004

Guest_005 says
SALL said:

thnku thankuuuu..
aaj me subah subah hi aa gai

aaj aap subha subha kitnay sall k baad aa gai hain......
Posted 16 Mar 2004

Ashii says

hmm me subah subah uthne ki adiiiiii hu
but dont come to jb that early




heyy where s subah ???????
Posted 16 Mar 2004

tarash says
abhi to sham hai
wait 4 subha
Posted 16 Mar 2004

subha says
Subha yahaan hay taatii
Posted 17 Mar 2004

subha says

Her guzrta pal urhtay badal ki tarah
muqadar ki jholi mein
aney wale sawaan ki chand boonden
aur kuch sunehri dhoop ki kirne
daal jata hay
Waqt ka urtha panchi jaal bunta jata hay
sehmi hoi hawaeen
chand k kaan mein
sargoshi kar rahi hein
chandni apna urtha anchal sanbhalti
dhirey say dharti k sinay pe uthar rahi hay
magar
raat ki agoush mein is jahaan
ki aankhen
naram palkon ko orhey
sapnon ki jheel
mein uthar gay hain
                (Subha)
Posted 17 Mar 2004

subha says

phir kisi yaad ka gehra badal
toot k barastha hay mujh mein
aur sumandar ki tufani mojhain
palkoon ka band cheer k
mere rukhsar pe beh
niklati hain

        (Subha)
Posted 17 Mar 2004

Ashii says
hmmmm.. chup chup k poems likhi ja rhai thii


phir kisi yaad ka gehra baadal
toot k barasta hai mujh mein
aur sumandar ki tufani mojein
palkoon ka band cheer k
mere rukhsaar pe beh
niklati hein..
Posted 19 Mar 2004

Guest_005 says
Posted 19 Mar 2004

subha says
thaanx friends



Waqt ki gard say
atey howe hain kuch khuwab apnay
palkoon k ihsar main
qaid parey hain
aankhon main chupa rakhey the
jo sehlaab kitnay
aina e dil pe mere
kohr si jami howi hay
humen faqat intzar hay is ka
k kabi to bad e sabah
nazar k sehra say guzray
is tarah
k nikhar ayen phir humare
kuch gulaab sapnay

             (Subha)
Posted 19 Mar 2004

tarash says
weldone subha n sall
Posted 19 Mar 2004

subha says
thanku ji
Posted 19 Mar 2004

Ashii says
welldone subah <--- theek
sall kahe ko ??
Posted 20 Mar 2004

subha says
Sall acha zauk hone ki wajha say



Sall aap nay bulle shah ki kabi poetry parhi hay????
Posted 20 Mar 2004

Ashii says
oooo.. thankuu

areyy bilkulll parhi hai,, and i looove it...
i ve got a book with english translation
Posted 20 Mar 2004

subha says
wow sachiii

mere paas hay laikan translation k bina
is liye samjhnay main bahoot mushkil hoti hay
bahoot mushkil poetry hay na laikan bahoot achi
Posted 20 Mar 2004

nice oetry sub
Posted 20 Mar 2004

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