Topic: batbazi

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tHANKOO JEE

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: kaun kaun sa JBian book hai

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Teen Tracker said:
Dr aap kisi DR se hi shadee karna kyunkay ek dr ko doosra dr hi bhugat sakta hay

Lekin tum kisi TEEN TRACKERESS say shaadi na kerna...Werna tum ghar mainn baitahy rahao gay aur woh ..

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: batbazi

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Doctor Sam said:
ye raasta hey magar hijrati parindon ka
yahaan samay k musafir qayam kartay hain

parinday=birds

Noon

"Nafrat say nahin, Mujhay Piyaar say ,Masloob kero"
"Mainn keh shaamil hoon Mohabbat kay Gunehgaaronn mainn"

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: batbazi

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Doctor Sam said:

new_beau said:

Doctor Sam said:
ye khamoshi to mere dil ki deewarain gira day gi
Mohabbat ho na ho par lab hila aashista aahista

hey

YEH

AAHISTAA.......ALIF per end hua hay...

Be careful next time

Aaahista ko agar urdu main likhain to wo HEY pe khatam hota hey,

Yesh

My Mishtake

Sholly

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: shair main sey kisi bhi lafz sey shair

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BHOOL

"Yunn tou bhulaana dil say kisi ko kuchh bhi Mushkil nahin"
"Lekin agar Dil ki koi Ban jaye Dhadkan tou Phir"

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: I never Miss you DOC_SAM !!

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Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: * * * Wanna See ME - Exclusively Fragizzz

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Aho Mainn Badaam Chicken kha raha hoon aaj kal

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: <<< Doctor Sam’s Diary >>>

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DOC Jee aik aap kay naam...

JUST SHAIR

"Dil Kushaada hay Mera Gaonn kay Aangan ki tarah"
"Tang Sochainn hainn Teri, Shehar ki Galiyonn jaisi"

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: Usi aik pall ki Talash main....

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Thora waqt aur

sTILL dhoondhing na

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: Usi aik pall ki Talash main....

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JHAROO ki zaroorat hay

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: zindagi nikliiiiii

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us ki aankhon ka rang gehra hay
aur may halki sanwli nikli

wo hawa tau nahi thi larki thi
kis liye itni sar phiri nikli

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: Without REASON !!

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Hay Kon

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: | dard aae ga... |

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Hye Dil Hye Dil

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: Im Pretending Im Not Empty

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I pretend this Poem is Good

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: Daag - E - Dil

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SALL said:
beqarar jii daag e dil yaad kar rahe hein

Bay Qarar jee ka VISA lag gaya lagta hay kahin AUR ka ..

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: Daag - E - Dil

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Doctor Sam said:
Nice effort Nb..

Thankoo jee

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: jab sey tu ney

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Oh Hello..Her Topic ko SHAIR chain nahin bananay ka

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: woh piyaar karta to

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Aankhonn ki Rait jub Aansoon say na Dhuli
Bana liya phir hum nay apna Aasmaan DASHT"

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

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ROOSHANAASI...I think its wrong Word here..ROO means CHEHRA...aur ZAAT ka chehra nahin kaha ja sakta ...Try to change this misrah...

Buzurg-o-Bertar ..ko MERDAM SHANAASI kay paimaanay say Samajhna chahtay hainn aap...MERDAM shanaasi insaan ko Parakhnay kay liyey hoti hay..Yeh aap BUZERG-O-BERTER kis keh rahay hainn..EXPLAINN

These shairs are very good

NIKLAY jo NIKLAINN say change ker lainn..I think..

AASII...means Gunehgaar...aur yeh ALIF say nahin AIN say hota hay...AIN ALIF SUAD YEH..

Change it,..and Reconsider this Shair...Iss mainn Kuchh Ziyaada JAAN nahin hay abhi...Agar AAP NAY ALIF say likha hay aur uss ka koi aur matlab hay tou sorry...but pls explain..

Very Good And Meaning Ful...

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: kaun kaun sa JBian book hai

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Nahin jee aap kay liyey nahin...LAERKIYONN kay liyeye...Jin kay liyey khatra baaqi hay ..Keh AIK NAUJAWAANN...abhi tek FARIGH ghoom raha hay

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: Without REASON !!

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nAHIN...AFZAL..yani JOHN RAMBO..

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: H.K.B. Tum ko Wahan Dekha !!

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ISTERAAHAT

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: * * * Wanna See ME - Exclusively Fragizzz

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Teen Tracker said:
ya phir beauty parlor kay agay facial kara raha ho ga

AAGAY bolay tou..Beaity Parlor kay Bahir THARAY per NAYEE kay paas baitha hay kiya

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: kaun kaun sa JBian book hai

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Doctor Sam said:

sachhi baat hey jee...

aayi e koi nahi...

I think aay Fikar di gal aay

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: - - - Aaj Lagta hey - - -

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Doctor Sam said:

new_beau said:

Doctor Sam said:

new_beau said:
Nahin Jee....Inn Ki Unn ki ki woh Ho gAYEE hay

Ye logon k apnay experiences hain shayd...

"Hum ko Logonn mainn Na Shumaar ker"
"Log tou bay wafa bhi hotay hainn"

to log apnay experience batatay e kion hain...

Ok Me Chup

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: Bila muqabila

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SALL BAJAAAAA... Mabroook

Posted 26 Nov 2005

Topic: - - - Aaj Lagta hey - - -

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Ki Hoya

Posted 24 Nov 2005

Topic: A question from physics

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HERKAT ki AQSAAM batayenn

Posted 24 Nov 2005

Topic: Chen ven sab ujra...........

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SABZ PARI said:

QUEEN VICTORIA said:
jab chen ven sab ujer jaye to kya kerna chahiye?

NAMEZ PARHOOO
allah ko yade karooooooooooo

Shadi Shuda Log Perhaiz gaar ban hi jaatay hainn ..Allah Qabool keray

Posted 24 Nov 2005

Topic: - - - Aaj Lagta hey - - -

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Doctor Sam said:

new_beau said:
Nahin Jee....Inn Ki Unn ki ki woh Ho gAYEE hay

Ye logon k apnay experiences hain shayd...

"Hum ko Logonn mainn Na Shumaar ker"
"Log tou bay wafa bhi hotay hainn"

Posted 24 Nov 2005

Topic: batbazi

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