~Fragi~ said:

dono ko hazir kiya jaye

americangirl said:

In your eyes I see a current of emotions that seem to pull me into the tide. I want to get swept away in the swift moving river of love, yet I want to hang on to a log so as not to drown or be completly emerged in the river. I want to let myself go and be swept off my feet and carried downstream-watching everything blur by in a colorful kalidascope of colors. I'm scared of the vast, treacherous water, yet I do not fear it because I feel your arms holding me safe in a warm, dry embrace. I feel the sandbars beneath the river scraping my feet as I am pulled along. I raise my feet and do not end the journey because with you beside me, holding me, I know I a can face anything. I want to sink completly into oblivious relaxation letting the river carry me wherever it pleases-because the longer I stay in, the longer I get to feel you presance beside me. I feel the current sweeping me along when I look into your eyes.

new_beau said:

Not Nice...In fact Very Nice Ghazal..I really like it ...Bohat Achhi "CRAFT" hay iss ghazal ki...


Magar QAAF aur JEHLUM...Geography Kazor hay aap ki


Please post some More Ghazal..Ia m really Inspired ..

Ameen Asim said:

shukr hay ke aap ko Ghazal pasand aai, ye to mujay bhi pata hay ke Qaaf kahaaN hay aur Jehlum kahaN hay, maira kehnay ka matlab tha ke Qaaf ki aik pari Jehlum meN aa kar reh rahi hay, Qaaf ki pari pari per koi paabandi nahiN ke wo Jehlum nahin aa sakti, meN aik baar Jehlum say guzra hooN meN nay khud daikhi the,

aap ka aik baar phir shukria

Mukhlic
Ameen Asim

red rose said:

kia hoa jii mouh asa kyu hogaya

Virdan said:

new_beau said:

Really a good Thought...You can improve it more and more...Also I think Its "inspired" one ..(Pls dont mind...)

Anyways...Pls Keep Posting More...Also tell if you have it on the net....

I am waiting for more....

Thanks a lot 4 liking mine poetry and can u explain what do u mean by inspired one waisay to sabhi jo kuchh bhi likha jata hay inspire ho kar he likha jata hay and dont worry there is nothing to mind and i have sent this on three forums Thanks waiting 4 ur reply