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Subha Ahmed’s Poetry ( URDU VERSION )

Posted on 7/22/2005 12:12:56 AM
http://www.janubaba.com/wforum/forum_posts.asp?TID=17260&PN= 1
Posted on 7/22/2005 12:25:17 AM
Posted on 7/22/2005 12:55:31 AM
Mere paas alfaz nahi hain k main kuch keh sakoon
asal mein to main samjhti hoon k mujhey shairi karni abhi ati hi nahi

yeh sub kuch to aise hi likh deti thi laikan Nb

main kiya kahoon aap ne mere liye kia kiya hay

meri ankhon mein is waqt khushi se anson a gay hain
thanx to bahoot chota lafz samjhti hoon main is k liye
pir bi shukriya

Posted on 7/22/2005 1:20:55 AM
WARMTH OF LOVE:





mujhey shairi kahan ati hay wol bro yeh sub to aap sub ka piyar hay jo
mere bemool lafzoon ko itna qimti bana diya thanxxxx
Posted on 7/22/2005 1:23:27 AM
hamali talaph chay bi thanksssss    


hamali siso to itni khushi dainay ta
Posted on 7/22/2005 1:46:31 AM
MahshAllah MahshAllah
bahot acha likhti hain ap
main nay sari read ki hain sub kuch aik aik harf awsome hai
Posted on 7/22/2005 11:07:45 AM
great idea
great effort
zaber dast
I like it


i think first post main book ka title hai nice hai jee


but woh topic close kyun hai..mazeed barhna chahiye na

congratss Nb 4 this


and sub dear its great
Posted on 7/22/2005 1:55:37 PM
Rizwan Asha'r U have done a good job. Really...

Aor Subha, abhi main ne aap ki poetry sari nahi parhi, lekin jo parhi hey, Nice thoughts and impressive wording..

Allah karay Zor-e-qalam aor zyada...

Aaameen..
Posted on 7/22/2005 2:27:52 PM
wafakadard:
MahshAllah MahshAllah
bahot acha likhti hain ap
main nay sari read ki hain sub kuch aik aik harf awsome hai



THANKU yeh sub Nb ki koshish hay jinnon ney meri bemani batoon ko
itna acha kar k likha   
Posted on 7/22/2005 5:19:44 PM
QUEEN VICTORIA:
great idea
great effort
zaber dast
I like it


i think first post main book ka title hai nice hai jee


but woh topic close kyun hai..mazeed barhna chahiye na

congratss Nb 4 this


and sub dear its great



thanx tareef k haqdar to New hain
Posted on 7/22/2005 5:20:49 PM
Doctor Sam:
Rizwan Asha'r U have done a good job. Really...

Aor Subha, abhi main ne aap ki poetry sari nahi parhi, lekin jo parhi hey, Nice thoughts and impressive wording..

Allah karay Zor-e-qalam aor zyada...

Aaameen..


thanx sam
Posted on 7/22/2005 5:21:57 PM
nice
Posted on 7/22/2005 11:23:46 PM
grea tfs
Posted on 7/23/2005 9:30:45 PM

As Salam-o-Alaikum Saathiyo !

Dair say aanay ki M'aazrat.

Subha ki Shayari ki terteeb-o-tazaeen meray liyey bhi aik Aizaaz hay. Al Hamdulillah aap ki Satayesh-o-Tehssen nay Surkhuroo kiya aur meri Kaawish maqbool hui.

Ab tek jitnay Ba Zouq Logonn nay apni A'ara say nawaaza hay. Mainn Unn sub ka tahe dil say shuker guzaar hoon.

Mainn nay sirf "bahar" aur "aouzaan" ka khayal kertay huaye kuchh nikaar paida kernay ki koshish ki hay. Asal taaqat sirf Khayal ki hoti hay. jo keh apni saadgi aur pur kaari kay saath baderja-e-Uttem mojood tha.

Shayari ki Ta'areef sub nay ki, Magar aik baat ka kisi nay zikar nahin kiya. Jis ki taraf mainn aap sub ki tawajjah dilana Chahoon ga, woh hay Shaira ki Shakhsiyat.

Kehtay hainn keh Shairi kehnay waalay ki Shakhsiyat aur uss kay Ehsaasaat ki Terjumaan hoti hay.

Mainn yeh Jan'na chahta hoon keh. Tamam Shairi perhnay kay baad aap "SUBHA AHMED' ki shakhsiyat ki terjumaani kaisay kerainn gay. "Subha Ahmed" kon hay , kiya hay. Uss kay Ehsaasaat kiya hainn? Uss ki Nazar kay Zaaviyey apnay atraaf mainn kiya Dekhti hay aur Mustaqbil per uss ki nazar kahan tek hay.

Yeh bhi Fermayiyey keh Kitaab ka Naam aur Ta'arufi safha kaisa hay.

QUEEN VICTORIA nay poochha keh Woh Kitaab BAND kiyun hay. Uss topic ko bana ker Close iss liyey kiya hay keh Kitaab ko perha jaata hay. Uss per Likha nahin jaata. Iss liyey Aap ki A'araa kay liyey alehda Safha Khola gaya.

Rahi Kitaab ki baat. Tou wahan Ta'aza Kalaam ka izafa hota rahay ga. Kiyun Inshallah SUBHA AHMED ki pehli Kitaab 100 Safhaat say Ziyada per Mushtamil ho gi.

Aap kay Jawabaat ka Muntazir...

Khair Andesh

Rizwan Ashar

Posted on 7/23/2005 11:56:11 PM
Rizwan,

shayar ki Shakhsiyat, ye kuch personal nahi ho jaye ga..
Mukhtalif log apna opinion dain, her aik ka opinion different hoga,

to kya humain comment karna chahiye,,?
Posted on 7/24/2005 8:41:24 PM
Itni skeel Urdu
Posted on 7/24/2005 10:07:20 PM
Skeel wo tiya hota hay?

Posted on 7/24/2005 10:10:45 PM
skeel ka matlab "heavy" , yeah jaan ker khushi hui kay meri urdu ki vocablary main aisay ilfaaz hain jin say aam loog waqif nahin .
Posted on 7/24/2005 10:14:06 PM
Doctor Sam:
Rizwan,

shayar ki Shakhsiyat, ye kuch personal nahi ho jaye ga..
Mukhtalif log apna opinion dain, her aik ka opinion different hoga,

to kya humain comment karna chahiye,,?


hmmm...Sochan waali Gal aay
Posted on 7/24/2005 10:20:15 PM
platonic:
Itni skeel Urdu


Aap ko kahan lagi hay
Posted on 7/24/2005 10:22:02 PM
platonic:
skeel ka matlab "heavy" , yeah jaan ker khushi hui kay meri urdu ki vocablary main aisay ilfaaz hain jin say aam loog waqif nahin .


bati baten baad main but aap nay ham to AAM LOG taha?



otay tah lain


ahan, thankooozz

yani, agar toi kid or baby MOTO ho and wazni ho to ham
kah saktay hain kay "YAH BABY KITNA SKEEL HAY" ??? right?


waisay WB 2 jb
Posted on 7/24/2005 10:23:27 PM
NB NB NB , aap hamali poems tab shaya talen gaey?
Posted on 7/24/2005 10:24:46 PM
~ ßã£îçh ~:
Skeel wo tiya hota hay?



Shoni Paali..Tum aishi Baatonn per Dhiyaan na Dou...Mainn Hoon na
Posted on 7/24/2005 10:26:21 PM
platonic:
skeel ka matlab "heavy" , yeah jaan ker khushi hui kay meri urdu ki vocablary main aisay ilfaaz hain jin say aam loog waqif nahin .


Aay Bachi say baat kerta hay..Hum say Urdu Bolo
Posted on 7/24/2005 10:28:38 PM
~ ßã£îçh ~:
platonic:
skeel ka matlab "heavy" , yeah jaan ker khushi hui kay meri urdu ki vocablary main aisay ilfaaz hain jin say aam loog waqif nahin .


bati baten baad main but aap nay ham to AAM LOG taha?



otay tah lain


ahan, thankooozz

yani, agar toi kid or baby MOTO ho and wazni ho to ham
kah saktay hain kay "YAH BABY KITNA SKEEL HAY" ??? right?


waisay WB 2 jb



Lolzzzzz    "YAH BABY KITNA SKEEL HAY" ???
Posted on 7/24/2005 10:29:37 PM
~ ßã£îçh ~:
NB NB NB , aap hamali poems tab shaya talen gaey?


Jee Shoni Paali....Apni Totli Poems ..send kero..Magar TOTLI ULDU muzay Lahin aati na . ISLAH kaisay keroon ga
Posted on 7/24/2005 10:30:35 PM
new_beau:



Lolzzzzz    "YAH BABY KITNA SKEEL HAY" ???


di
Posted on 7/24/2005 10:35:29 PM
new_beau:
~ ßã£îçh ~:
NB NB NB , aap hamali poems tab shaya talen gaey?


Jee Shoni Paali....Apni Totli Poems ..send kero..Magar TOTLI ULDU muzay Lahin aati na . ISLAH kaisay keroon ga


jk tiya tha na

Posted on 7/24/2005 10:36:35 PM
shahrukh khan:
oyee udaas panchi


Kon ?
Posted on 7/24/2005 10:43:53 PM
~ ßã£îçh ~:
new_beau:
~ ßã£îçh ~:
NB NB NB , aap hamali poems tab shaya talen gaey?


Jee Shoni Paali....Apni Totli Poems ..send kero..Magar TOTLI ULDU muzay Lahin aati na . ISLAH kaisay keroon ga


jk tiya tha na


Oh..Ok ....
Posted on 7/24/2005 10:44:15 PM
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