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Subha Ahmed’s Poetry ( URDU VERSION )

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Posted on 8/12/2005 4:58:56 PM

QUEEN VICTORIA:
oh main nay samjha subha ko chhota ker kay sibbi bana diya



Posted on 8/12/2005 8:14:18 PM


Posted on 8/13/2005 1:48:12 PM

Topic UN STICKY.....Subha ki Poetry Khatam ho gayee kiya

Posted on 8/13/2005 9:24:28 PM


Posted on 8/14/2005 9:59:37 PM

Topic Sticky kero......werna !!!!!

Posted on 8/16/2005 11:36:50 PM

More COMING SOON !!! on following Link

http://www.janubaba.com/wforum/forum_posts.asp?TID=17260&PN= 1

Posted on 9/5/2005 10:47:04 PM

hey that is great........honestly mujay ye andaza nahi tha she is that talented..................alfaaz ka chunaoo ore andazay beyaan ..donoo he khoob hain

ore jis tarha new beau nei essay logoo kay samnay paesh keya hai ye be kisi karnamay sei kum nahi.....sirf ess leye nahi kay ye urdu mai likhi hai balkay mai tareef uss andaaz ki kaar raha hoon jis mai ye likhi geye hai....fikroon ko khoobsurti sei aesi juga pay tooora geya hai kay parhnay walay ko uss ka sahi mehfoom samaj ayeee.

mujay be kabi kabi shaeri ka dooora parta hai paar hamesha wazaan sei maar kha jata hoon................koi usstad be tu nahi milta eslaah kay leye

Posted on 9/9/2005 12:29:41 PM

I am not Ustaad...But I can Put WEIGHT ..hee hee hee...Send me...Your Poetry

Posted on 9/9/2005 11:25:30 PM

                Chaley AaNa

Mein TuM Ko BoohaT AaNeY LaGuN Jab Yaad, ChaLey AaNa,
BhuL Jaana ApNi Kahi HaR BaaT, ChaLey AaNaa


JuDaai Ka Woh Lamha AuR Woh MaNzaR DhaLteY SooRaj Ka,
Yaad TuM Ko Jab AaNeY LaGeY Woh ShaaM, ChaLey AaNaa


BhuL JaaYoO TuM AgaR MaNziL Kabhi ApNi,
UthaNa ApNeY QaDaM Phir MeRi TaRaF , ChaLey AaNaa


Had Sey GuzaR JaaYeE Jub MeRa Zabt-E-Ghum,
AuR MeiN PukaaRooN TuM Ko BaaR BaaR, ChaLey AaNaa


Us Kay BiN JeeNaY Ka Ab TaSawwuR NaheE....
MeRi Maut Ka AGaR TuM Ko MiLaY PayaaM,Tou ChaLey AaNaaaaaa....!!

Posted on 9/10/2005 12:58:32 AM

that is great than........here is my first Gazal.

you have to tell me what is wazan and usay kesay estamal karna hai sheroon mai.

NA ROOK SAKI KAY DOOB JANAY KAY DIN HAIN
KISI KAY AJJ HOSH URADANAY KAY DIN HAIN

SUNG RAHAY APNAY NA CHAND NA TARAY
KISI KO AJJ PHIR AAZMANAY KAY DIN HAIN

NA SHIKWA KEA, JO TOORA HUM NEI DIL
USSI MEHJABEEN KO MANANAY KAY DIN HAIN

KEYA QAIS KO ZAMANAY NEIN RUSVA
ZAMANAY KO RUSVA KARANAY KAY DIN HAIN

TAPTI ZAMEEN PAAR RUKHAY HIAN SIR
KHAAK GARDISHOON KI URDANAY KAY DIN HAIN

LUGI HUM PAY TUHMAT JAFAOON KI LUCKY
JIGAR APNA CHALNI DEKHNAY KAY DIN HAIN

Posted on 9/10/2005 7:34:55 PM

2nd one


machalti hansi ko yun tera kaboo karna
kabi chasmay-mehgoon ka ro-baroo karna

mileen gey qayamt mein muskura kay tera kehna
woe mera haar rooz qayamaat ki aarzoo karna


dekhana yun jalway bana kay bahanay
woe mera deed ki justagoo karana


woe larna jagarna ,mun moor lena
yun shook aatish ore afzoon karna


na khana na peena na uthna na soona
yun tera khera-o-sir pay jadoo kaarna



hai mohabaat he apna aab orna bechona
ya rub! ehlay~nazar ko surhroh karna

Posted on 9/10/2005 7:36:39 PM



UPDATED LINK = PLEASE VISIT


http://www.janubaba.com/wforum/forum_posts.asp?TID=17260&PN= 1

Posted on 9/11/2005 9:56:00 PM

§alman AzaÐ:
                   Chaley AaNa

Mein TuM Ko BoohaT AaNeY LaGuN Jab Yaad, ChaLey AaNa,
BhuL Jaana ApNi Kahi HaR BaaT, ChaLey AaNaa


JuDaai Ka Woh Lamha AuR Woh MaNzaR DhaLteY SooRaj Ka,
Yaad TuM Ko Jab AaNeY LaGeY Woh ShaaM, ChaLey AaNaa


BhuL JaaYoO TuM AgaR MaNziL Kabhi ApNi,
UthaNa ApNeY QaDaM Phir MeRi TaRaF , ChaLey AaNaa


Had Sey GuzaR JaaYeE Jub MeRa Zabt-E-Ghum,
AuR MeiN PukaaRooN TuM Ko BaaR BaaR, ChaLey AaNaa


Us Kay BiN JeeNaY Ka Ab TaSawwuR NaheE....
MeRi Maut Ka AGaR TuM Ko MiLaY PayaaM,Tou ChaLey AaNaaaaaa....!!

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Lucky:
that is great than........here is my first Gazal.

you have to tell me what is wazan and usay kesay estamal karna hai sheroon mai.

NA ROOK SAKI KAY DOOB JANAY KAY DIN HAIN
KISI KAY AJJ HOSH URADANAY KAY DIN HAIN

SUNG RAHAY APNAY NA CHAND NA TARAY
KISI KO AJJ PHIR AAZMANAY KAY DIN HAIN

NA SHIKWA KEA, JO TOORA HUM NEI DIL
USSI MEHJABEEN KO MANANAY KAY DIN HAIN

KEYA QAIS KO ZAMANAY NEIN RUSVA
ZAMANAY KO RUSVA KARANAY KAY DIN HAIN

TAPTI ZAMEEN PAAR RUKHAY HIAN SIR
KHAAK GARDISHOON KI URDANAY KAY DIN HAIN

LUGI HUM PAY TUHMAT JAFAOON KI LUCKY
JIGAR APNA CHALNI DEKHNAY KAY DIN HAIN

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Lucky:
2nd one


machalti hansi ko yun tera kaboo karna
kabi chasmay-mehgoon ka ro-baroo karna

mileen gey qayamt mein muskura kay tera kehna
woe mera haar rooz qayamaat ki aarzoo karna


dekhana yun jalway bana kay bahanay
woe mera deed ki justagoo karana


woe larna jagarna ,mun moor lena
yun shook aatish ore afzoon karna


na khana na peena na uthna na soona
yun tera khera-o-sir pay jadoo kaarna



hai mohabaat he apna aab orna bechona
ya rub! ehlay~nazar ko surhroh karna

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Lucky:

aik tu tum nein bolayaa ore hum nahi ayee
upaar sei itni hoyee petayee kay abaa yaad ayee
mara hasenoon nein jutay badal badal kay
kasoor tha sirf itna hehehe aab tumheen kya batayeen.
bachayaa na kisi nein muj masoom ko pitnay sei
rootay rahay ,pitTay rahay detay rahay dohayee
choot lugi hai kuch ayesi he juga paar....
sharam aa rahi hai lagatay hoyee davayee....

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o BHAI LOG..YAHAN NAHIN..apNA aPNA..Topic kholo..then I will give my Serious Comments Inshallah

Posted on 9/11/2005 10:01:58 PM

Sticky Again Shukriya    

Posted on 9/15/2005 9:09:46 PM

Masha Allah Subha Aap ki Poetry bohat shandaar hay Allah Tala aap k qalam ko aur tabaani de aur hum jaisy no amooz aap se kuchh aur seekh sakein apna khyal rakhyay ga Allah Hafiz

Posted on 9/19/2005 5:23:57 AM



4 New Pages Added



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Posted on 9/23/2005 6:11:38 PM

Thanks for response SABZ PARI

Posted on 9/29/2005 9:24:48 PM

gud work jeeeee

Posted on 10/2/2005 6:48:07 PM

Magar she is again Sleeping..for Last two Weeks Nothing New

Posted on 10/3/2005 11:28:33 PM

I think due to ramadan

Posted on 10/8/2005 3:37:29 PM

hAAN ho sakta hay

Posted on 10/8/2005 11:39:11 PM

ki muhammad say wafa to nay to hum teray hein
tere jaib mein jo paisay hein wo sab meray hein

Posted on 10/11/2005 9:42:31 AM

Dear Ali..This topic is specifically for SUBHA...

Please Read her Poetry and Give comments here..

For Your Great Lines....JOKE/PHUNNY PHIX forum is there...

Please Come there...we shall appreciate you...Thanks

Posted on 10/11/2005 8:17:51 PM

is topic main kya kya ho raha hey,


Posted on 10/16/2005 12:05:31 PM

Iss Topic ki Shayera Kho gayee hay


Posted on 10/16/2005 7:37:46 PM

wo kho nahi gayien , wo Ramzan ki waja se nahi a rahien,


Posted on 10/16/2005 8:15:44 PM

ok Jee...waiting...dekhtay hainn unn ki waapsi lafzonn kay konsay Moti bersaati hay

Posted on 10/16/2005 11:09:05 PM

hope for the best


Posted on 10/17/2005 2:41:37 AM

Inshallah

Posted on 10/17/2005 11:09:50 PM