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share ur poetry...

Thanks Paki
Posted on 2/6/2005 6:28:18 AM
AAPNE HATHOON KI LAKIRON MEIN SAJA LE MUJH KO

MEIN HOON TERA TU APNA BNA LE MUJH KO

MEIN HOON KNTA TU BACH MUJH SE

MEIN HOON GAR PHOOL TU JOORE MEIN SAJA LE MUJH KO

TARKE ULFAT KI KSAM BHI KOI HOTI HAI KSAM

TU KABHI YAAD TU KR BHOOLNE WALEY MUJH KO

KHUD KO MEIN BAANT NA DALOON DAMAN DAMAN

KR DIYA TUNEY GAR MERE HA WALE MUJH KO

BADHA PHIR BADHA HAI MEIN ZEHR BHI PEE JAOON GA

SHRT YEH HAI KOI BANHOON MEIN SANBHALE MUJH KO
                           Misbah
Posted on 2/6/2005 6:28:42 AM
mohobat ke khud ko saza du kaise
tum ko dil se mita du kaise??
Posted on 2/6/2005 6:30:23 AM
thx paki
Posted on 2/6/2005 10:47:53 PM
goodd work wafakadard ji
Posted on 2/6/2005 10:49:01 PM
Posted on 2/6/2005 11:05:19 PM
JANUBABY:
Tnaks JanuBabe Ji
Posted on 2/6/2005 11:28:56 PM
thx 4 what
Posted on 2/7/2005 12:27:41 AM
dont know
Posted on 2/7/2005 1:23:48 AM
JANUBABY:
thx 4 what

Nice WORK wafakadard ji
you said something like thar
and I said THANKS
Posted on 2/7/2005 5:21:14 AM
Jab bhi tutte hai kwabh ansu mangte hai rasta in ankho se
Jab hote hai lachar ankhe mangte hai vasta in khawbo se
Posted on 2/7/2005 5:21:20 AM
ansoon bahain gai to khawab tarse ga
is bar sawaan main mera dil barse ga
Posted on 2/7/2005 11:28:07 PM
gud
Posted on 2/7/2005 11:57:33 PM
Posted on 2/9/2005 1:27:56 AM
Very Nice
Posted on 2/9/2005 1:44:18 AM
Aaine sey mulakat itni haseen kyon?
Apne ko bar-bar dekhne ki chahat kyon?
Ghar parh loon tere khayalon ko ek bar
khud mein kho jane ki rahat kyon?
Posted on 2/9/2005 1:44:23 AM
Posted on 2/9/2005 6:38:50 AM
wafakadard:
Aaine sey mulakat itni haseen kyon?
Apne ko bar-bar dekhne ki chahat kyon?
Ghar parh loon tere khayalon ko ek bar
khud mein kho jane ki rahat kyon?
nice
Posted on 2/9/2005 10:33:46 PM
rone se nahi kuch hasil a dil sudaiii
ashko ki bhi barbadi daman ki bhi ruswaee
hum log samander kai bechray huwa sahil hain
is par bhi tanhaii us par bhi tanhaii
Posted on 2/9/2005 10:35:51 PM
JANUBABY:
wafakadard:
Aaine sey mulakat itni haseen kyon?
Apne ko bar-bar dekhne ki chahat kyon?
Ghar parh loon tere khayalon ko ek bar
khud mein kho jane ki rahat kyon?
nice

Posted on 2/10/2005 1:05:06 AM
JANUBABY:
rone se nahi kuch hasil a dil sudaiii
ashko ki bhi barbadi daman ki bhi ruswaee
hum log samander kai bechray huwa sahil hain
is par bhi tanhaii us par bhi tanhaii

Teri chahat hai itni
Ke chhip chhip kar rotey hain
Tujhe sochtey hai itna
Ke aansu pee pee kar sotey hain
Posted on 2/10/2005 1:05:22 AM
Posted on 2/10/2005 2:09:26 AM
nice
Posted on 2/10/2005 11:02:32 PM
Posted on 2/10/2005 11:10:47 PM
Posted on 2/10/2005 11:24:57 PM
wah jee wah
Posted on 2/11/2005 1:26:02 AM
Sukria
Posted on 2/11/2005 1:46:17 AM
mein bataoo gha use zakm ki lizzat kiya hai
phooloo se mera taruf tou karrayea jaye


PAKI where are you? yar ap ko aur ap ki poetry ko kafi miss kar rahay hain
Posted on 2/11/2005 8:43:00 AM
Posted on 2/11/2005 11:18:01 PM
very nice guys....
Posted on 2/12/2005 9:25:29 AM
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