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Wish you all, everywhere a very happy Pakistan independence day.
Posted 14 Aug 2008

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Rapunzel said:



     
Tears, flow no more


TEARS, flow no more, or if you needs must flow,
Fall yet more slow,
Do not the world invade,
From smaller springs than yours rivers have grown,
And they again a Sea have made,
Brackish like you, and which like you hath flown.

Ebb to my heart, and on the burning fires
Of my desires,
O let your torrents fall,
From smaller heate than theirs such sparks arise
As into flame converting all,
This world might be but my love's sacrifice.

Yet if the tempests of my sighs so blow
You both must flow,
And my desires still burn,
Since that in vain all help my love requires,
Why may not yet their rages turn
To dry those tears, and to blow out those fires ?



Very good, Rapunzel
Posted 14 Aug 2008

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(So nice of You Olldman Thank You So much) A real pleasure jee.

Posted 12 Aug 2008

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A very happy return here Rapunzel. Well done.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

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May I join the rest in welcoming you. I am sure you will enjoy here. Welcome to JB, wish you a pleasant stay.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

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Rapunzel said:



(faqat khushfamyan rah jaen ghi) Poetry mein bhi kaya kaya rang.Bahut achi Rapunzel.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Topic: Tears

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Love forever, part or not forever. A lovely sentiment.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

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In the end its a cycle. Beautiful Rapunzel.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Topic: Tears

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Rapunzel said:



The Princess: A Medley: Tears, Idle Tears
       
Tears, idle tears, I know not what they mean,
Tears from the depth of some divine despair
Rise in the heart, and gather to the eyes,
In looking on the happy Autumn-fields,
And thinking of the days that are no more.
Fresh as the first beam glittering on a sail,
That brings our friends up from the underworld,
Sad as the last which reddens over one
That sinks with all we love below the verge;
So sad, so fresh, the days that are no more.

Ah, sad and strange as in dark summer dawns
The earliest pipe of half-awaken'd birds
To dying ears, when unto dying eyes
The casement slowly grows a summering square;
So sad, so strange, the days that are no more.

Dear as remember'd kisses after death,
And sweet as those by hopeless fancy feign'd
On lips that are for others; deep as love,
Deep as first love, and wild with all regret;
O Death in Life, the days that are no more!


Beautiful image, beautiful poetry, Rapunzel.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Topic: Tears

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Rapunzel said:

       
Dry Tears
       
I cried for you every single day,
You made me lost everywhere i go,
You never gave me any chances to say,
You left me in pain and woe,
You abandoned me in this world of yours,
Stuck in a prison you made,
Its been a long time now,
My tears pours down like a bucket full of grief,
You stole everything that belongs to me,
Dignity, Pride and Love,
I thought you were the one,
But now we're done,
Bits and pieces of me,
I am falling apart...



Lovely thoughts.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Topic: Tears

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Tears to Tears
       
Tears to tears draw the line
Love is never forgotten
Years to years in its sunshine
Leaves of life rotten
Dream kingdoms never come
Only the heart reappears
Where it was and where its plum
Sometime sometimes not clears

Through time's dark
Each mood and affection
Golden visions not to spark
Into the heart's connection
Hours onward to end die
Affliction of dark to see
There once were tears to cry
From under its love plea

What shall last a little while?
Into roads going through
Hours futile is like the mile
Only walked when needn't to
Tears to tears my roots have dried
Reappearing grayish dim
Into its much heartbreak tide
Hostage in a mime whimsy whim



Realy a great addition, Rapunzel.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Topic: Tears

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Rapunzel said:

Proverbs of pain



I broke my dream today,
I don't know what I have to say,
I wished to die ,
and let my soul fly,
up in death sky,
I've became so numb ,
I don't know what happened to me
Its like something must been done all along
On somewhere I belong
Where I can be there on my own
Me and my shadow are there alone
But I know that ill be here again
And I know that I'll have those feelings again
And I know that my pain will remain
Coz its an everlasting pain
It doesn't matter how hard I tried
I lost my life and even my pride
What ever I took or even gave
it lasting till am lying in my grave
pain please leave me alone
coz I've been hurt since I was born



Painful, painful or not, charm comes from poetry that shares feelings. Its beautiful read.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Topic: Tears

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Rapunzel said:

Cry


Existence continues
Monotonously so
repetitive emptiness
alone at sea

Passing ports
one by one
wanting to land
or not wanting to

It doesn't matter
I'm just a shell
a hollow egg
of internal nothingness

Only a war within me
as people sail by
could they teach me
how to cry?



Enjoyable read.Rapunzel.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Topic: Tears

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A great read, realy good.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Topic: Tears

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Rapunzel said:

Palace of Broken Hearts and Dreams

I sit here in darkness
thinking of you
wishing was all over
pain that I'm going though.

here i am
in this palace of broken heart and dreams
in this dudgeon with this pain inside
left alone and locked inside

i still remember you
Oh so clear in my mind
You broke my heart
with a hammer and a knife.

i see you walk by
full of glamour and shine
are you happy now?
now that you put me aside

Cause I'm locked up
in this palace of broken hearts and dreams
in this dudgeon no one can see
true love deserted me



Rainy day,beautifully put.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Topic: Tears

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Silent Tears

A thunderous silence
breaks through my thoughts.
What was once many great ideas
is now a triumph, lost.

Baffling words tumble through my mind.
Reflections of darkness hover.
A disturbing peacefulness beckons to me,
and inside myself, I take cover.

What would it be like to stay there forever?
To be lost in all my cares?
From the inside, looking out -
I cry silent tears.



Great wonders in poetry.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Topic: Tears

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Slow Tears


I look up
as a tear rolls slowly
down my cheek
I think about better days
and wonder if I'll feel that way again
you look at me
with those eyes I know so well
always serious, so deep and insightful
as though you're always in control
But not today
not now
Now you look so scared
like for once you don't have the answer
I gaze at you
looking deep into those hazel eyes
Hoping to understand
why you've said those things you did
I wonder for a moment
if this is all a dream
if I shall wake in the morning
and be relieved
you look at me
with a confusion I have never seen
slowly pull me towards you
and wipe the tears from my cheek.



Bahut achi Rapunzel jee.And the teardrop image, beautiful.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

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Good luck for the next one.
Posted 10 Aug 2008

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Bahut acha, Very happy to see this number.Congratulations, Sun Shine.
Posted 10 Aug 2008

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Rapunzel said:

olldman said:


Phoolon pe sirf aap ka naam likha hona zaroori hai. Bagh kis ka hai humein kaya

Ab tak sirf Varna Moghul rose (sirf qudrat ki naghrani mein jhma aurr pala.) acha laga. Ye bagh kis ka hai, nahi jante



choori kar rahe hain Ap dosron k phool
chalein mujhe kiya jab Inka malik aye ga tu Apko hi pakre ga


Teekh hai pakre ji. Bahut achi nazzar rakhte hein baghon pe, mali ban jaein ghe Aye to, puri tankha le kar hi malik ko chorein ghe.
Posted 09 Aug 2008

Topic: LoVe Hurts

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Excellent work.
Posted 09 Aug 2008

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A very very happy birthday, Many happy returns to the day, and to the JB date.
Posted 09 Aug 2008

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sun_shine said:

olldman said:

Congratulations, S S.



Assalam O Alaikum

*Thanks Alot Sir
May Allah blless you and ur family Always Ameen
Thanks Alot...!


Assalam O Alaikum
Thank you S S. Thats a lovely dua. And its a pleasure.
Posted 08 Aug 2008

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Congratulations Cinderella, Well done. Best wishes for your next target.
Posted 08 Aug 2008

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eshajam said:

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eshajam said:

You said Post 5 Poems Dear ;)
u didn't said Post 5 Poems About Smile Larki
achay Poems kya yeh sab achay nahi
i will Post my Last and final Poem than
main jaonga marne opz i mean sune

5 or Last yaahoooooooooooooo



I've known you for only
a short period of time,
but I feel as if
I've known you forever.

I tremble with joy
at your every touch.
The feel of your hand taking mine -
I want you to hold it forever.

I glow with happiness
every time you're near.
I want you near me now,
I want to be with you forever.

My knees grow weak
in your loving arms.
I want to stay there,
I want you to hold me forever.

My body melts
with every kiss you give.
Just the thought of your lips on mine -
I want you to kiss me forever.

My heart jumps
to know how much you care.
Knowing that it is so much more -
I want you to love me forever
MY SWEETO




AB MUJHE IJAZAT DE G yeh   

See u Soon Guria



Wow, beautiful,this is very good.A great read, Eshajam.


thank you olldman ji for your sweet comment


Pleasure Eshajam, good to see more of you with excellent work.
Posted 07 Aug 2008

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Congratulations Tasha, On your 34000th.
Posted 07 Aug 2008

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Rapunzel said:

olldman said:



Congratulations


Olldman Ap kis k baghon se phool chura kar laye hain



Phoolon pe sirf aap ka naam likha hona zaroori hai. Bagh kis ka hai humein kaya

Ab tak sirf Varna Moghul rose (sirf qudrat ki naghrani mein jhma aurr pala.) acha laga. Ye bagh kis ka hai, nahi jante
Posted 07 Aug 2008

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eshajam said:

You said Post 5 Poems Dear ;)
u didn't said Post 5 Poems About Smile Larki
achay Poems kya yeh sab achay nahi
i will Post my Last and final Poem than
main jaonga marne opz i mean sune

5 or Last yaahoooooooooooooo



I've known you for only
a short period of time,
but I feel as if
I've known you forever.

I tremble with joy
at your every touch.
The feel of your hand taking mine -
I want you to hold it forever.

I glow with happiness
every time you're near.
I want you near me now,
I want to be with you forever.

My knees grow weak
in your loving arms.
I want to stay there,
I want you to hold me forever.

My body melts
with every kiss you give.
Just the thought of your lips on mine -
I want you to kiss me forever.

My heart jumps
to know how much you care.
Knowing that it is so much more -
I want you to love me forever
MY SWEETO




AB MUJHE IJAZAT DE G yeh   

See u Soon Guria



Wow, beautiful,this is very good.A great read, Eshajam.
Posted 07 Aug 2008

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Your duas ((prayers) worked
Posted 07 Aug 2008

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A very very happy return L P, to your Birthday. Wish you many more pleasant returns here, healthy and young forever.
Posted 07 Aug 2008