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shair main sey kisi bhi lafz sey shair

aslam o alaikum to janubaba family
aik topic start kar rahi hoon,
shair main sey kisi bhi lafz sey apney shair ki ibteda karain
for example ;;

ghulami main na kaam aaein tadbeerain na taqdeerain
jo ho zoq e yaqeen paida to katt jati hain zanjeerain

is shair main sey aik lafz select kar rahi hoon
jati[ sey shair hai];;

dil sey daikhi nahin jati khamoshi ghar ki
kis tarha ujrha hua shehar gawara hota


so lets play waiting 4reply.................hkb

Posted on 11/20/2005 11:43:59 PM

Koi achi se saza do mujh ko
Chaloo aisa karo bhola do mujh ko
Tum se bichron tu maut ajaye
Dil ki gehraiyon se dua do mujh ko

Posted on 11/21/2005 3:41:09 PM

"Dua-e-Bad nahin Deta, Fqat Itna hi Kehta hoon"
"Keh Jis say Dil Lagay Tera, Woh Tujh sa Baywafa Niklay"

Posted on 11/21/2005 3:43:36 PM

"Dua-e-Bad nahin Deta, Fqat Itna hi Kehta hoon"
"Keh Jis say Dil Lagay Tera, Woh Tujh sa Baywafa Niklay"


NB apka apna shair hai ya?




main tu yah bhi nahin kah sakti coz uski khushi hai us main is liyay usay ya nahin kah sakti k woh baywafa niklay...

but main nay tu baywafai nahin ki thi jo mujh say door ho gaay


Posted on 11/21/2005 3:47:22 PM

~Mysteriousgal~:
"Dua-e-Bad nahin Deta, Fqat Itna hi Kehta hoon"
"Keh Jis say Dil Lagay Tera, Woh Tujh sa Baywafa Niklay"


NB apka apna shair hai ya?




main tu yah bhi nahin kah sakti coz uski khushi hai us main is liyay usay ya nahin kah sakti k woh baywafa niklay...

but main nay tu baywafai nahin ki thi jo mujh say door ho gaay



Nahin ..mera nahin hay...Bohat Pehlay Kahin Suna tha..Dil per Naqsh hay Tub say...


Mysty ..Asak Mainn Probolem pata kiya hay

"Seenay mainn Aabaad Hamesha Rehti Hay"
"Pehli Larki YAad Hamesha Rehti hay"






Lekin Aap ki Wafa ki Qadr-o-Qeemat bhi apni jaga hay...

Aap uss say sirf itna keh dijiyeye


"MAINN TUJHAY BHOOL KER BHI NAHIN BOOLTI"
"PIYAAR SONA HAY, SONAY KA PAANI NAHIN"

Posted on 11/21/2005 3:53:41 PM

baat ya hai kay main usay bholana hi nahin chahti coz pyar koi cheez nahin ya koi waqaya nahin k bhol jao...ya woh haseen ahsas hai jo main humesha yaad rakhna chahti hoon....
dil ab bhi yahi chahta hai NB kay woh laut aay... jis k liyay maa say baat kar li woh chala jaay ga tu maray hath khali rah jain gay....
aaisa kyon hota hai k jisay hum chahtay hain woh humain chor daita hai

Posted on 11/21/2005 3:56:32 PM

Aisa Aksar Hota hay ..Magar Jo aisa kerta hay ussay iss ka Sila Issi duniya mainn Milta hay....Hum apnay liyey bhi aur Uss kay Liyey bhi Dua hi kertay hainn

Posted on 11/21/2005 10:00:39 PM

main bas ya chahti hoon woh jis majboori main ya kar raha hai Allah us ka sath day aur plz woh majboori us kay liya majboori na rahay plz

Posted on 11/21/2005 11:08:16 PM

~Mysteriousgal~:
Koi achi se saza do mujh ko
Chaloo aisa karo bhola do mujh ko
Tum se bichron tu maut ajaye
Dil ki gehraiyon se dua do mujh ko

aap doston sey request hai keh jo lafz choose karain
ussay top per likh dain
aap ka bohat shukria.............hkb

Posted on 11/21/2005 11:59:49 PM

~Mysteriousgal~:
"Dua-e-Bad nahin Deta, Fqat Itna hi Kehta hoon"
"Keh Jis say Dil Lagay Tera, Woh Tujh sa Baywafa Niklay"


NB apka apna shair hai ya?




main tu yah bhi nahin kah sakti coz uski khushi hai us main is liyay usay ya nahin kah sakti k woh baywafa niklay...

but main nay tu baywafai nahin ki thi jo mujh say door ho gaay


nahin

dil sey daikhi nahin jati judai FARAZ
kis tarha shaakh peh baithey huay parindon ko urhaoon

Posted on 11/22/2005 12:03:49 AM

Judaai

chalay aatay tumharay paas lekin
Judai raasta rokay khardi hey

Posted on 11/22/2005 12:11:23 AM

laikin

main ney kab kaha hai keh meray haq main ho jawab
laikin khamosh kion hai koi faisla to day

Posted on 11/22/2005 1:28:35 AM


jawab


meri umer se na simat sakay mere paas itnay sawal thay
tere paas jitnay jawab thay teri ik nigaah main a gaye

Posted on 11/22/2005 1:33:49 AM

umar

tumaam umar meri haalit peh roya nahin koi
agar phoot kay roya hai to meray paon ka chhala

Posted on 11/22/2005 1:37:01 AM

ROYA


Roya hoonn teri Yaad Mainn Din Raat Musalsal
Aaisay Kabhi hoti nahin Bersaat Musalsal


Posted on 11/22/2005 3:21:29 PM


Barsaat


maza barsaat ka chaho to in aankhon main a betho
wo barson main barasti hain ye barson se barasti hain

Posted on 11/22/2005 3:55:25 PM

new_beau:
ROYA


Roya hoonn teri Yaad Mainn Din Raat Musalsal
Aaisay Kabhi hoti nahin Bersaat Musalsal


yahan aap kisi kay shair ko >QUOTE< bhi kar saktey hain.
;;

kaantey ki tarha hoon main raqeebon ki nazar main
rehtay hain meri ghaat main cheey saat musalsal

Posted on 11/22/2005 5:51:15 PM

King of jb:
Aankhon


Teri Tasweer meri Ankhon main Basee kyun hai
Jidhar dekho bus udhar tu hi kyun hai

Aslam o alaikum , reply to >K O J < with tasveer


Posted on 11/22/2005 6:29:37 PM

udaas


tum nahi ho zindagi apni
ho rahi hey basar udaas udaas

Posted on 11/22/2005 7:27:32 PM

apni



ab tujhey aur kia doon main apni wafaon ka saboot
keh ab meray haal peh hanstey hain teray shehar kay log

Posted on 11/22/2005 7:51:17 PM

LOG


Hum ko Logonn mainn na Shumaar ker
Log tou Bay wafa bhi Hotay Hainn

Posted on 11/22/2005 11:17:51 PM

Shumaar

jo lafz loh e wafa pe likhe hein un ko bhi dekh lena
jo raaegan ho gaee woh ibadatein bhi shumaar karna

Posted on 11/22/2005 11:48:59 PM

lafz

do chaar lafz bol kay main khamosh ho gaee
woh muskara kay boley bohat bolti ho tum

Posted on 11/22/2005 11:58:12 PM

BOHAT


"Bohat See Khuwahishainn SAU baarishonn mainn Bheegi Hainn"
"Mainn Kis tarah say Kahoon, Umr Bher uss ka Raha"

Posted on 11/23/2005 9:29:55 AM

baarish

baarish ki dushmani thi faqt meri zaat sey
joonhi mera makan gira abar chhatt gaey

Posted on 11/23/2005 7:21:45 PM

MAKAAN


"Deewaar Kiya Giri Meray Kachay Makaan ki
Logonn nay meray Sehan Rastay Bana Liyey"

Posted on 11/23/2005 10:08:24 PM

makan


Posted on 11/23/2005 10:34:03 PM

Aaj Kal Repeat Season Chal Raha hay Kiya



RASTA


"Rastonn mainn na baitho keh Hawa Tang keray gi"
"Guzray Huye Logonn ki Sada Tang Keray Gi"

"Met Toot Kay Chaho ussay Aaghaaz-e-safar mainn"
"Bichhro gay tou ik aik ada tang keray gi"

Posted on 11/24/2005 9:13:43 AM

tang karey gi

khud gharz agar woh hai to matt barhao marasam
khuddar agar tum ho to anna tang karey gee



Posted on 11/25/2005 12:36:10 AM



Maraasam


ab aor kya kisi se maraaasam bardhaien Hum
ye bhi bohat hey tujh ko agar bhool jaien Hum

Posted on 11/25/2005 12:11:10 PM

BHOOL


"Yunn tou bhulaana dil say kisi ko kuchh bhi Mushkil nahin"
"Lekin agar Dil ki koi Ban jaye Dhadkan tou Phir"


Posted on 11/26/2005 4:04:59 PM