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shair main sey kisi bhi lafz sey shair

new_beau:
samajh nahinn aayee


TUM,

Tum meri zindagi ho, yeh such hay
Zindagi ka magar Bharosa Kiay ?


there was some typing mistake, now i have adit ,srry

zindagi
zindagi jabr e musalsal ki tarha kaati hai
janey kis jurm ki paee hai saza yaad nahin
Posted on 12/4/2005 11:50:52 PM
Jurm-e-ulfat pay loag hamaiaN saza detey haiN
Kaisey nadaan haiN sholoN ko hawa detey haiN.
Posted on 12/6/2005 12:06:28 AM
log
aao aik sajda karain---- aalim e madhosh main
log kehtey hain keh saghar ko khuda yaad nahin
Posted on 12/7/2005 12:28:51 AM
yaad e mazi azab hai tarab
chheen lay mujh say hafza mera
Posted on 12/7/2005 5:42:29 PM
CHEEN

A shakhs ab to mujh ko sabhi kuch qabool hey
ye bhi qabool hey k tujhay cheen lay koi...
Posted on 12/7/2005 5:49:45 PM
chheen kay gaya kon tera chain-o-qaraar
bay qaraari tujh aay dil, kabhi aisi tou na thi..
Posted on 12/7/2005 10:49:28 PM
gaya
woh chala gaya hai mujhey chhorh kar aur apni yaad bhi day gaya
main kharha hoon aisey muqaam per na firaaq hai na wisaal hai
Posted on 12/7/2005 11:42:13 PM
APNI


Apni Zulfonn ki zanjeeronn say Rehayee day dou
Tanhayee ka Shaida hoon, Mujhay Tanhayee Day Dou
Posted on 12/8/2005 9:08:13 AM
kuch nahin mangta shaho say yeh SHAIDA tera
is ki dolat hai faqy naqsh e kaf e paa tera
Posted on 12/8/2005 7:22:00 PM
which lafz was this...
Posted on 12/8/2005 7:27:51 PM
qv ne jo sher kaha hey, usmain se koi bhi lafz lain ... aor aisa sher likhain jismain wo lafz aata ho..


Posted on 12/8/2005 7:36:32 PM
QUEEN VICTORIA:
kuch nahin mangta shaho say yeh SHAIDA tera
is ki dolat hai faqy naqsh e kaf e paa tera
Posted on 12/9/2005 12:55:07 AM
NAQSH faryadi hai kiss ki shokhi e tehreer ka
kaaghazi hai pairahan har paikar e tasveer ka
Posted on 12/9/2005 6:25:53 PM
QUEEN VICTORIA:
kuch nahin mangta shaho say yeh SHAIDA tera
is ki dolat hai faqy naqsh e kaf e paa tera


kiran:
which lafz was this...


Doctor Sam:
qv ne jo sher kaha hey, usmain se koi bhi lafz lain ... aor aisa sher likhain jismain wo lafz aata ho..




Hum tou lay lainn gay koi lafz BUT KIRAN ASKED keh QV nay ooper waalay shair mainn say konsa LAFZ lay ker next shair likha hay    
Posted on 12/9/2005 7:01:28 PM
SALL:
NAQSH faryadi hai kiss ki shokhi e tehreer ka
kaaghazi hai pairahan har paikar e tasveer ka


TASVEER

"Dononn kay Husn mainn koi Kami nahin"
"Tu bhi Haseenn aur teri Tasveer bhi Haseenn"
Posted on 12/9/2005 7:03:50 PM
new_beau:
Hum tou lay lainn gay koi lafz BUT KIRAN ASKED keh QV nay ooper waalay shair mainn say konsa LAFZ lay ker next shair likha hay    

new_beau:
Apni Zulfonn ki zanjeeronn say Rehayee day dou
Tanhayee ka SHAIDA hoon, Mujhay Tanhayee Day Dou

QUEEN VICTORIA:
kuch nahin mangta shaho say yeh SHAIDA tera
is ki dolat hai faqy naqsh e kaf e paa tera
Posted on 12/9/2005 7:19:40 PM
new_beau:
"Dononn kay Husn mainn koi Kami nahin"
"Tu bhi Haseenn aur teri Tasveer bhi Haseenn"


paak sir zameen shaab baad
kishwar e HASEEN shaad baad

sher hai yarrr




Posted on 12/9/2005 7:32:42 PM
zameen

humaray dil main chupay huye dard ki khabar chashm-e-tar hogi
suna hey zer-e-zameen khazaanon ka hey faqat raazdaan Samandar
Posted on 12/9/2005 7:37:21 PM
suna
suna hai apney hi they ghar lootney waley
chalo achha hua main ney yeh tamasha nahi dekha
Posted on 12/10/2005 12:06:53 AM
SALL:
new_beau:
"Dononn kay Husn mainn koi Kami nahin"
"Tu bhi Haseenn aur teri Tasveer bhi Haseenn"


paak sir zameen shaab baad
kishwar e HASEEN shaad baad

sher hai yarrr






M.T.B. yaani MOQAY TAY BISTI    
Posted on 12/10/2005 11:43:09 PM
hawwa ki beti:
suna
suna hai apney hi they ghar lootney waley
chalo achha hua main ney yeh tamasha nahi dekha


TAMASHA


Khaak mainn mil kay bhi Zahir na ho sakay
Ta,aasha yeh kisi ko Tamaasha nahin laga
Posted on 12/10/2005 11:44:13 PM
MTB
kiss ki hui





dasht e ghurbat mein hein aur ranj e safar khenchte hein
baar e hasti hai jisse KHAAK basa khenchte hein
Posted on 12/11/2005 1:57:45 PM
dasht
dasht to dasht hain darya bhi na chorday hum ne
behr-e-zulmaat main dorda diye ghorday hum ne..

Posted on 12/11/2005 6:07:29 PM
ohhhhhh so nice shaing
Posted on 12/11/2005 9:17:31 PM
Faizan Rana:
ohhhhhh so nice shaing


Come ...be a part of Chain
Posted on 12/11/2005 9:31:22 PM
Doctor Sam:
dasht
dasht to dasht hain darya bhi na chorday hum ne
behr-e-zulmaat main dorda diye ghorday hum ne..



Zulmaat

"Tareekiyaann Jholi Phailaye Baithi hainn Ashar
Koi Jugnu hi Daaman-e-Zulmaat mainn DaaLA jAYE"
Posted on 12/11/2005 9:32:41 PM
new_beau:
Faizan Rana:
ohhhhhh so nice shaing


Come ...be a part of Chain

ok jaise aap ki marzi
Posted on 12/11/2005 9:47:11 PM
U R Welcome jee :D
Posted on 12/11/2005 9:50:00 PM
Doctor Sam:
dasht
dasht to dasht hain darya bhi na chorday hum ne
behr-e-zulmaat main dorda diye ghorday hum ne..


Koi
koi surat nazar nahin aati
koi umeed bar nahin aati ,
moot ka aik din mutaaen hai
nend kyun raat bar nahin aati
Posted on 12/11/2005 9:50:40 PM
Doctor Sam:
dasht
dasht to dasht hain darya bhi na chorday hum ne
behr-e-zulmaat main dorda diye ghorday hum ne..


doctor sahib
aap kay shair main lafz >darya< hai
jab keh theek lafz sehra hai
darustgee farma lain
shukria ......................hkb
Posted on 12/12/2005 4:19:05 AM
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