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Aisa pehli baar hua hai satrah atharah salo mein
Un dekha anjanna koi aane laga hai khayalon mein
Aankhon ki khidki per ek sayaa sa lehraata hai
Dil ke derwaze per koi dastak de ke jata hai
Gherri gherri kaali aankhen, mujse mujko puchhatti hai
Hathoan ki rekhaon mein ek chehra sa ban jatta hai
Uski sanse resham jaisi gallo ko chu jaati hai
Uske hathoan ki khushboo hai ab tak mere ballo mein
Aisa pehli baar hua hai satrah atharah salo mein
Un dekha anjanna koi aane laga hai khayalon mein....

Posted 01 Dec 2004

Queen of jb says

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Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye

Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye

Aur humare dil se awaaz nikalii....

Fiteh Mooh...Tusin Ethe vii aa gaye !!!

Posted 14 Apr 2005

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Queen of jb said:
Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye

Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye

Aur humare dil se awaaz nikalii....

Fiteh Mooh...Tusin Ethe vii aa gaye !!!

DOCTOR SHAIB SUB KUCH THEEK TO HAI NA

Posted 15 Apr 2005

wafakadard says

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Mere mehboob ke har julm pe hum sir jhukate hai,
Har dil ke iss dard ko hum sehte jate hai,
Unhone kasam di hai bichad ke jeene ki humko,
Uss kasam ke naam har saans hum liye jate hai.

Posted 15 Apr 2005

wafakadard says

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Khud pasandi ki intehaa ki hai
Hum ne apne yaar se jafaah ki hai
Shokh se saath chor do mera.....
Hum ne kab tum se iltajaah ki hai

Posted 15 Apr 2005

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Very nice

Posted 15 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says

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Queen of jb said:
Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye

Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye

Aur humare dil se awaaz nikalii....

Fiteh Mooh...Tusin Ethe vii aa gaye !!!

Posted 15 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says

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wafakadard said:

Queen of jb said:
Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye

Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye

Aur humare dil se awaaz nikalii....

Fiteh Mooh...Tusin Ethe vii aa gaye !!!

DOCTOR SHAIB SUB KUCH THEEK TO HAI NA

JB main kitnay doctor hain

Posted 15 Apr 2005

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I dunno Urdu... so from where I can get translations for these?

JANUBABY said:

Posted 15 Apr 2005

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LOL That was a stunner. Okie hun meri wallon vi...

Itney salon baad bhi woh humein deykh kar muskuratey hai,
Woh to bachhey he kameney hai jo mamu mamu bulatey hai.

Queen of jb said:
Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye
Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye
Aur humare dil se awaaz nikalii....
Fiteh Mooh...Tusin Ethe vii aa gaye !!!

Posted 15 Apr 2005

Queen of jb says

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wafakadard said:

Queen of jb said:
Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye

Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye

Aur humare dil se awaaz nikalii....

Fiteh Mooh...Tusin Ethe vii aa gaye !!!

DOCTOR SHAIB SUB KUCH THEEK TO HAI NA

WAFA KHAIR TU HAIN NA HAR JAGA DR BILLA DEKHAI DE RAHA HAI.........

Posted 15 Apr 2005

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gsvirdi said:
LOL That was a stunner. Okie hun meri wallon vi...

Itney salon baad bhi woh humein deykh kar muskuratey hai,
Woh to bachhey he kameney hai jo mamu mamu bulatey hai.

Queen of jb said:
Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye
Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye
Aur humare dil se awaaz nikalii....
Fiteh Mooh...Tusin Ethe vii aa gaye !!!

dekho app bura tu mantay ho na....

bura manay ki hai ok.....

Can u pronounce good english:- read along woof, roof, loof, shoof,
shoof,woof, loof, roof, poof, woof woof, hoof, woof, roof,
shoof.Test results: U r a good dog. Now stop barking

Posted 15 Apr 2005

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DejaVu077 said:

wafakadard said:

Queen of jb said:
Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye

Aaj vo humse jannat mein takra gaye

Aur humare dil se awaaz nikalii....

Fiteh Mooh...Tusin Ethe vii aa gaye !!!

DOCTOR SHAIB SUB KUCH THEEK TO HAI NA

JB main kitnay doctor hain

hey i m not a dr ......and not sahab sahiba....

Posted 15 Apr 2005

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Hey that was beautiful,
Fasla tumhari nazron ka dhokha bhi to ho sakta hai,
Woh miley yan na miley, haath badha kar to deykho.

wafakadard said:
Teri raahon mein kab se aakhein bichaaye baithey hain
Iss dil ke toofan mein mohabbat ki shama jalaaye baithey hai
Aye zaalim kis moar pe laa kar chora hai tum ne mujhko
Abhi bhi milne ki hasarat se teri yaad ko dil se laagye baithey hain

Posted 15 Apr 2005

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Yeh unki ek illtajah hai...
Yan ummed ka naam diya hai,
Ummed puri kareingey wada hai.

Damn u're scary gal.

Posted 15 Apr 2005

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NICE

Posted 15 Apr 2005

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Posted 16 Apr 2005

wafakadard says

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bahot khob

Posted 17 Apr 2005

wafakadard says

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Itna na chaho kissi ko ki chahat ek ghutan ban jaye,
Hadd se jyada toh muhabbat bhi acchi nahi hoti

Posted 17 Apr 2005

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trueee

Posted 17 Apr 2005

Fairl_Girl says

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Rat kay phechalay pehar aik khawab aaya
Aankh Kholi jab samanay tera Cherah bankay mehtab aaya
yeh soch kar kay kabhi tum bhi meray pass thay
bay sakhta in Aanhoon say aik saylab Aaya

Posted 17 Apr 2005

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very nice

Posted 18 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says

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gsvirdi said:
Hey that was beautiful,
Fasla tumhari nazron ka dhokha bhi to ho sakta hai,
Woh miley yan na miley, haath badha kar to deykho.

wafakadard said:
Teri raahon mein kab se aakhein bichaaye baithey hain
Iss dil ke toofan mein mohabbat ki shama jalaaye baithey hai
Aye zaalim kis moar pe laa kar chora hai tum ne mujhko
Abhi bhi milne ki hasarat se teri yaad ko dil se laagye baithey hain

and

Welcome to JB

Posted 18 Apr 2005

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Posted 18 Apr 2005

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Sitam karo ya karam hum gila nahi karte
khizzan main phoool yaqeeenan khila nahi karte
khak main milado mager yeh yaaad rahe
hum jaise log dubara mila nahi karte

Posted 18 Apr 2005

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tune meri liye zamane ko dushman bana liya
kyun hume basaya apni aankhon main ki
apna sab kuch tumhne ek pal main lutta liya
tune humare liye itna sab saaa hai sandeep
abh tuh humne tumhe apna dilbar bana liya

Posted 20 Apr 2005

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Posted 20 Apr 2005

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wafakadard said:

Thanx

Posted 20 Apr 2005

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very nice.......

Posted 20 Apr 2005

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sukria

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