~~ Chalay jao ~~

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~~ Chalay jao ~~






Kahan Ja pao Gay Tum?
Chalay Jao...!

Mager Dekhna Khench Lae Ge
Meri Muhabbat
Us Pal Us Lamhay K Jub
Zindagi Ki Dhool Jhulsae GE
Mushkiloun Ki Lambi Sadak Thukraege
Kisi Badan Key Lams Ki Mehek TersaeGe
Kisi Aashna Ko Tersou Gay
Baat Kernay Ko Humnawa Dhondoo Gay
Jub Kabhe Bikhro Gay To Chaho Gay Koi Sameet Lay Bahoun Main
Koi Bharay Aankhooun Main
Koi Choom Ker Tumharay Lub Tum Ko SairaaB Ker Dey
Us Pal.......!
Haan Us Lamhay...!
Meri MuhabbaT .!
Dekhna Tumhain Khench LaeGe...!

Chalay Jao.................!!!!!







Hum Say MuhabbaToun Ki Numaish Na Ho Saki
Bas Itna Jantey Hain Tumhain Chahtey Hain Hum





Posted 20 May 2007

Miss mine says
SupidGuy said:


Miss mine said:

Mujhe apne lafzo'n se shikayat hai,
Loug mere lafzo'n ko Moti se tashbeeh detay hain,
Woh kehte hain k;
Aap k lafz humaare liye bohat qeemti hain,
Aap ki shaairy hum apne pyaaro'n ko likh likh ker bhij-vaate hain,
Inhein apni chaahat ka ehsaas dilaate hain,
Aur Yu'n! K phir woh humaare hi ho jaate hain...
Aap k lafz humaare liye Roshni hain, Zindagi hain,

Lekin inhein main kya bataau'n... K mujhe apne lafzo'n se kitni shikayat hai,
Ye us waqt chupp hogaye thay, jab inhein bolna tha ......

   



Very Nice Poetry!!!




     yup very bold sharing
Posted 18 Jan 2009

Miss mine says
Lashakir said:

Usko
Bade khuloos se
Samjhaya tha
Yeh muhabbat, yeh chahat
Yeh rooh ,yeh jism
Yeh jan
Sab kisi ke amanat hain
Mere pass
dene ko kuch bhi nahin hai
Usne khamooshi se
Mere bahte huye ashkoon ko
Apni hatheli per saja liya
Aur yeh
kahte huye chal di
Mujhe mere jeene ka
Sahara mil gaya



   nice
Posted 18 Jan 2009

Miss mine says
bas ek haan ki intezaar mein raat yunhi guzaar jayeghi..

ab to bas uljhan hai saath mere..

neend kahan aayeghi..

subha ki kiran najaane kaun sa sandesh layeghi..

rhim jhim si gungunayeghi..

ya pyaas adoori rehe jayeghi...


Posted 18 Jan 2009

Lashakir says

Miss mine said:

bas ek haan ki intezaar mein raat yunhi guzaar jayeghi..

ab to bas uljhan hai saath mere..

neend kahan aayeghi..

subha ki kiran najaane kaun sa sandesh layeghi..

rhim jhim si gungunayeghi..

ya pyaas adoori rehe jayeghi...


Uff yeh Zalim INTZAAAAAAR,,,,
Posted 18 Jan 2009

~CHANDNI~ says
Lashakir said:

Usko
Bade khuloos se
Samjhaya tha
Yeh muhabbat, yeh chahat
Yeh rooh ,yeh jism
Yeh jan
Sab kisi ke amanat hain
Mere pass
dene ko kuch bhi nahin hai
Usne khamooshi se
Mere bahte huye ashkoon ko
Apni hatheli per saja liya
Aur yeh
kahte huye chal di
Mujhe mere jeene ka
Sahara mil gaya




Posted 19 Jan 2009

~CHANDNI~ says
Miss mine said:

~CHANDNI~ said:

Miss mine said:

Khamosh lehje mere hamdam kabhi bola nahin kertay,
Dard-o-gham ko her kisi k samnay khola nahin kertay,

Mohabbat to mohabbat hai,
Bari anmol hoti hai,

Mohabbat ko tarazu main kabhi tola nahin kertay,
Mere khamosh rehne per koi ilzam mat dena,

Samandar to samandar hai, kabhi bola nahin kertay...






Samandar to samandar hai, kabhi bola nahin kertay...



luv u   



Posted 19 Jan 2009

~CHANDNI~ says
Miss mine said:

bas ek haan ki intezaar mein raat yunhi guzaar jayeghi..

ab to bas uljhan hai saath mere..

neend kahan aayeghi..

subha ki kiran najaane kaun sa sandesh layeghi..

rhim jhim si gungunayeghi..

ya pyaas adoori rehe jayeghi...





Posted 19 Jan 2009

lildude says
NICE COLLECTIONS
Posted 20 Jan 2009

Miss mine says
~CHANDNI~ said:

Miss mine said:

bas ek haan ki intezaar mein raat yunhi guzaar jayeghi..

ab to bas uljhan hai saath mere..

neend kahan aayeghi..

subha ki kiran najaane kaun sa sandesh layeghi..

rhim jhim si gungunayeghi..

ya pyaas adoori rehe jayeghi...







jhappiyaaaaaaaaa
Posted 21 Jan 2009

Miss mine says
lildude said:

NICE COLLECTIONS



thxs lildude n welcum to the forum
Posted 21 Jan 2009

Miss mine says
Na vaada hai koi Tumse rishta nibhaane ka,

Na koi aur hi dil mein taha'yya ya iraada hai,

Ka'e din se magar dil mein,

Ajab uljhan si rehti hai,

Na Tum is daastan k sarsarri kirdaar ho koi,

Na qissa itna saada hai!

Taa'luq jo tumse main samjha tha, woh us se kahee'n ziyaada hai...



Posted 21 Jan 2009

Lashakir says
Sab Se Chupa Kar Dard, Woh Jo Muskura Diya....
Us Ki Hansi Ne Aaj To Mujh Rula Diya.....

Lehje Se Uth Raha Tha, Har ik Dard Ka Dhuaan...
Chehra Bata Raha Tha Ke Kuch Ganwa Diya...

Awaz Mein Thihrao Tha, Aankhoon Mein Nami Thi...
Aur Keh Raha Tha Ke Mein Ne Sab Kuch Bhula Diya....

Jane Kiya Us Ko, Logon Se Thi Shikayatein. ...
Tanhaiyon Ke Dais Mein Khud Ko Basa Diya...

Khud Bhi Woh Hum Se Bichar Kar, Adhura Sa Ho Gaya....
Mujh Ko Bhi itne Logon Mein Tanha Bana Diya....

Sab Se Chupa Kar Dard, Woh Jo Muskura Diya....
Us Ki Hansi Ne Aaj To Mujh Rula Diya.....
Posted 21 Jan 2009

Lashakir says

Miss mine said:

Na vaada hai koi Tumse rishta nibhaane ka,

Na koi aur hi dil mein taha'yya ya iraada hai,

Ka'e din se magar dil mein,

Ajab uljhan si rehti hai,

Na Tum is daastan k sarsarri kirdaar ho koi,

Na qissa itna saada hai!

Taa'luq jo tumse main samjha tha, woh us se kahee'n ziyaada hai...



[email protected] KHOOB
Posted 21 Jan 2009

SupidGuy says

Miss mine said:

SupidGuy said:


Miss mine said:

Mujhe apne lafzo'n se shikayat hai,
Loug mere lafzo'n ko Moti se tashbeeh detay hain,
Woh kehte hain k;
Aap k lafz humaare liye bohat qeemti hain,
Aap ki shaairy hum apne pyaaro'n ko likh likh ker bhij-vaate hain,
Inhein apni chaahat ka ehsaas dilaate hain,
Aur Yu'n! K phir woh humaare hi ho jaate hain...
Aap k lafz humaare liye Roshni hain, Zindagi hain,

Lekin inhein main kya bataau'n... K mujhe apne lafzo'n se kitni shikayat hai,
Ye us waqt chupp hogaye thay, jab inhein bolna tha ......

   



Very Nice Poetry!!!




     yup very bold sharing



Agreed!!!

Posted 21 Jan 2009

SupidGuy says

Miss mine said:

Na vaada hai koi Tumse rishta nibhaane ka,

Na koi aur hi dil mein taha'yya ya iraada hai,

Ka'e din se magar dil mein,

Ajab uljhan si rehti hai,

Na Tum is daastan k sarsarri kirdaar ho koi,

Na qissa itna saada hai!

Taa'luq jo tumse main samjha tha, woh us se kahee'n ziyaada hai...






U Got A Very Very Good Poetry Collection!!!

I am Impressed!!!

Posted 21 Jan 2009

Miss mine says
Lashakir said:


Miss mine said:

Na vaada hai koi Tumse rishta nibhaane ka,

Na koi aur hi dil mein taha'yya ya iraada hai,

Ka'e din se magar dil mein,

Ajab uljhan si rehti hai,

Na Tum is daastan k sarsarri kirdaar ho koi,

Na qissa itna saada hai!

Taa'luq jo tumse main samjha tha, woh us se kahee'n ziyaada hai...



[email protected] KHOOB


thxxs
Posted 22 Jan 2009

Miss mine says
SupidGuy said:


Miss mine said:

Na vaada hai koi Tumse rishta nibhaane ka,

Na koi aur hi dil mein taha'yya ya iraada hai,

Ka'e din se magar dil mein,

Ajab uljhan si rehti hai,

Na Tum is daastan k sarsarri kirdaar ho koi,

Na qissa itna saada hai!

Taa'luq jo tumse main samjha tha, woh us se kahee'n ziyaada hai...






U Got A Very Very Good Poetry Collection!!!

I am Impressed!!!



   so was i..      
Posted 22 Jan 2009

Miss mine says

chanda ki chandni kahan ho
Posted 22 Jan 2009

Miss mine says
Katoon si chubhti hai Tanhai
Angaroon si sulagti hai Tanhai

Koi aa kar hum dono ko hunsa de
Main rota hoon rone lagti hai Tanhai

Jab bhi tere Hisar se nikalna chaha
Yaadoon k beej bone lagti hai Tanhai

Raat k kisi hise main yeh bhi Bewafa ho jati hai
Main nahi sota sone lagti hai Tanhai

Tum se judaa ho kar is se hi Dil laga lia hai
Mar sa jata hoon jab khone lagti hai Tanhai..











Posted 22 Jan 2009

Rapunzel says
Zaberdast MM
Posted 22 Jan 2009

olldman says
~CHANDNI~ said:



Apani Khushi na aaye na apani khushi chale



Behatar to hai yahi ke na duniyaa se dil lage

Par kyaa karen jo kaam na bedillagi chale



Ho umr-e-Khizr bhi to kahenge ba_vaqt-e-marg

Ham kyaa rahe yahaan abhi aaye abhi chale



Duniyaa ne kis ka raah-e-fanaa men diyaa hai saath

Tum bhi chale chalo yuun hi jab tak chali chale



Naazaan na ho Khirad pe jo honaa hai vo hi ho

Daanish teri na kuch meri daanishvari chale



Kam honge is bisaat pe ham jaise bad_qimaar

Jo chaal ham chale vo nihaayat buri chale



jaate havaa-e-shauq men hen is chaman se 'Zauq'

apani balaa se baad-e-sabaa kahin chale



Bohut khoob, Chandni.
Posted 23 Jan 2009

olldman says
Lashakir said:

AAP SAB KI NAZAR AIK GHAZAL ...
UMEED HAI AAP KO ZAROOR PASAND AAY GI...
LIJAAY ENJOY IT...



Bohut achi.
Posted 23 Jan 2009

olldman says
Miss mine said:

Katoon si chubhti hai Tanhai
Angaroon si sulagti hai Tanhai

Koi aa kar hum dono ko hunsa de
Main rota hoon rone lagti hai Tanhai

Jab bhi tere Hisar se nikalna chaha
Yaadoon k beej bone lagti hai Tanhai

Raat k kisi hise main yeh bhi Bewafa ho jati hai
Main nahi sota sone lagti hai Tanhai

Tum se judaa ho kar is se hi Dil laga lia hai
Mar sa jata hoon jab khone lagti hai Tanhai..













Khoobsurat, bohut achi read, MM.
Posted 23 Jan 2009

Miss mine says
Rapunzel said:

Zaberdast MM



thxxxxxs sweety
Posted 24 Jan 2009

Miss mine says
olldman said:

Miss mine said:

Katoon si chubhti hai Tanhai
Angaroon si sulagti hai Tanhai

Koi aa kar hum dono ko hunsa de
Main rota hoon rone lagti hai Tanhai

Jab bhi tere Hisar se nikalna chaha
Yaadoon k beej bone lagti hai Tanhai

Raat k kisi hise main yeh bhi Bewafa ho jati hai
Main nahi sota sone lagti hai Tanhai

Tum se judaa ho kar is se hi Dil laga lia hai
Mar sa jata hoon jab khone lagti hai Tanhai..













Khoobsurat, bohut achi read, MM.



thxs Olldman
Posted 24 Jan 2009

Miss mine says
Main nay haq-e-mohabat ada kia
na kabhi kisi say gila kia,
mujhy ajab is ka sila mila
mujhy dil say uss ne bhula dia...

Mohabbaton ki kitab ka
har aik varq jala dia,
vo jo aarzoo ka charagh tha
usay nafraton ne bhuja dia...

mujhy zakham phir aik naya dia
mujhy is MOHABBAT nay kia dia...

Wo jo kaihatay thy khosh raho
wo jo kehty thy mery jan ho tum,
mujhy aj ounhon nay rula dia
mera nishan tak mita dia.....
Posted 24 Jan 2009

~CHANDNI~ says
Miss mine said:

Main nay haq-e-mohabat ada kia
na kabhi kisi say gila kia,
mujhy ajab is ka sila mila
mujhy dil say uss ne bhula dia...

Mohabbaton ki kitab ka
har aik varq jala dia,
vo jo aarzoo ka charagh tha
usay nafraton ne bhuja dia...

mujhy zakham phir aik naya dia
mujhy is MOHABBAT nay kia dia...

Wo jo kaihatay thy khosh raho
wo jo kehty thy mery jan ho tum,
mujhy aj ounhon nay rula dia
mera nishan tak mita dia.....




Posted 24 Jan 2009

~CHANDNI~ says
olldman said:

~CHANDNI~ said:



Apani Khushi na aaye na apani khushi chale



Behatar to hai yahi ke na duniyaa se dil lage

Par kyaa karen jo kaam na bedillagi chale



Ho umr-e-Khizr bhi to kahenge ba_vaqt-e-marg

Ham kyaa rahe yahaan abhi aaye abhi chale



Duniyaa ne kis ka raah-e-fanaa men diyaa hai saath

Tum bhi chale chalo yuun hi jab tak chali chale



Naazaan na ho Khirad pe jo honaa hai vo hi ho

Daanish teri na kuch meri daanishvari chale



Kam honge is bisaat pe ham jaise bad_qimaar

Jo chaal ham chale vo nihaayat buri chale



jaate havaa-e-shauq men hen is chaman se 'Zauq'

apani balaa se baad-e-sabaa kahin chale



Bohut khoob, Chandni.
\


thannx to u Om
Posted 24 Jan 2009

Lashakir says
~CHANDNI~ said:

Miss mine said:

Main nay haq-e-mohabat ada kia
na kabhi kisi say gila kia,
mujhy ajab is ka sila mila
mujhy dil say uss ne bhula dia...

Mohabbaton ki kitab ka
har aik varq jala dia,
vo jo aarzoo ka charagh tha
usay nafraton ne bhuja dia...

mujhy zakham phir aik naya dia
mujhy is MOHABBAT nay kia dia...

Wo jo kaihatay thy khosh raho
wo jo kehty thy mery jan ho tum,
mujhy aj ounhon nay rula dia
mera nishan tak mita dia.....





W@H JI W!H...BOHAT KHOOOOOB
Posted 24 Jan 2009

Lashakir says
~CHANDNI~ said:

olldman said:

~CHANDNI~ said:



Apani Khushi na aaye na apani khushi chale



Behatar to hai yahi ke na duniyaa se dil lage

Par kyaa karen jo kaam na bedillagi chale



Ho umr-e-Khizr bhi to kahenge ba_vaqt-e-marg

Ham kyaa rahe yahaan abhi aaye abhi chale



Duniyaa ne kis ka raah-e-fanaa men diyaa hai saath

Tum bhi chale chalo yuun hi jab tak chali chale



Naazaan na ho Khirad pe jo honaa hai vo hi ho

Daanish teri na kuch meri daanishvari chale



Kam honge is bisaat pe ham jaise bad_qimaar

Jo chaal ham chale vo nihaayat buri chale



jaate havaa-e-shauq men hen is chaman se 'Zauq'

apani balaa se baad-e-sabaa kahin chale



Bohut khoob, Chandni.
\


thannx to u Om
BOHAT KHOOB AOR LAJAWAB...SHAIRI HAI..CHANDNI JI...       WA@
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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