~~ Chalay jao ~~

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~CHANDNI~

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~~ Chalay jao ~~






Kahan Ja pao Gay Tum?
Chalay Jao...!

Mager Dekhna Khench Lae Ge
Meri Muhabbat
Us Pal Us Lamhay K Jub
Zindagi Ki Dhool Jhulsae GE
Mushkiloun Ki Lambi Sadak Thukraege
Kisi Badan Key Lams Ki Mehek TersaeGe
Kisi Aashna Ko Tersou Gay
Baat Kernay Ko Humnawa Dhondoo Gay
Jub Kabhe Bikhro Gay To Chaho Gay Koi Sameet Lay Bahoun Main
Koi Bharay Aankhooun Main
Koi Choom Ker Tumharay Lub Tum Ko SairaaB Ker Dey
Us Pal.......!
Haan Us Lamhay...!
Meri MuhabbaT .!
Dekhna Tumhain Khench LaeGe...!

Chalay Jao.................!!!!!







Hum Say MuhabbaToun Ki Numaish Na Ho Saki
Bas Itna Jantey Hain Tumhain Chahtey Hain Hum





Posted 20 May 2007

Rapunzel says
sad but very nice
Posted 05 Apr 2008

~CHANDNI~ says
Miss mine said:

Uski yaadon ka silsila hoga,

is kahani main or kya hoga,

jab bichar kar bhi wo khamosh raha,

Ghar jaa kar tu ro diya hoga,

khud ko samjha diya hay maine magar,

kya wo khud bhi badal gaya hoga,

itna aasaan na tha mujhay khona,

usne khud ko ganwa dia hoga,

mujh ko veeran kar diya jis ne,

khud tu aabaad kahin huwa hoga,

sochta hoon jo mujhko chahta tha,

yaad mujh ko kar raha hoga . .



MM
lovly very nice
Posted 05 Apr 2008

~CHANDNI~ says
Miss mine said:

~CHANDNI~ said:



Jo Na Mil saka Wohi Bewafa ,
Ye Bari Ajeeb si baat hai
Jo chala gaya mujhay Chorh kar ,
Wohi Aaj tak Meray Saath hai

Jo Kisi Nazar Say Ata hui,
Wohi Roshni hai Khayal main
Woh Na asakay, Rahoon Muntazir,
Ye Khalish Kahan Thee Visaal main

Meri Justujoo Ko Khabar Nahin,
Na Woh Din Rahay Na Raat Rahay
Jo Chala Gaya Mujhay Chorh Kar,
Wohi Aaj Tak Meray Saath Hai

Karay Pyar Lub Per Gila Na Hoo,
Ye Kisi Kisi Ka Naseeb hai
Ye Karam Hai Iski Jifa Nahin ,
Woh Juda Bhi Reh Kar Kareeb Hai

Wohi Ankh hai Meray Rubaroo,
Ussi Haath main Mera Haath hai
Jo Chala gaya Mujhey Chorh Kar,
Wohi Aaj Tak meray saath hai

Mera naam tak jo na lesaka,
jo mujhe qaraar na de saka
Jisaay Ikhtiayaar Tu tha Magar,
Mujhay apna Pyar na Dey saka

Wohi Shaks Meri Talaash hai ,
wohi dard meri hayaat hai
Jo Chala gaya Mujhey Chorh Kar,
Wohi Aaj Tak meray saath hai

Jo Na Mil saka Wohi Bewafa ,
Ye Bari Ajeeb si baat hai
Jo chala gaya mujhay Chorh kar ,
Wohi Aaj tak Meray Saath hai


               uff zaberdasttt






Thannnx   jani lov u
Posted 05 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
rapunzel said:

sad but very nice




aap hamesha kehti ho itniii udas poetry thxu    
Posted 06 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
~CHANDNI~ said:

Miss mine said:

Uski yaadon ka silsila hoga,

is kahani main or kya hoga,

jab bichar kar bhi wo khamosh raha,

Ghar jaa kar tu ro diya hoga,

khud ko samjha diya hay maine magar,

kya wo khud bhi badal gaya hoga,

itna aasaan na tha mujhay khona,

usne khud ko ganwa dia hoga,

mujh ko veeran kar diya jis ne,

khud tu aabaad kahin huwa hoga,

sochta hoon jo mujhko chahta tha,

yaad mujh ko kar raha hoga . .



MM
lovly very nice

   

arreh oh janiii posting kaha hai aapki
Posted 06 Apr 2008

Rapunzel says
Miss mine said:

rapunzel said:

sad but very nice




aap hamesha kehti ho itniii udas poetry thxu    


udash hoti hain thori dear u r welcum dearie
Posted 06 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
Be sabab be waja kiu dil jalate ho
tod ker dil mera fir pas bulate ho

tum se hoker khafa jab hum rooth jai gaye
apni baho main bherke pyaar fir jatate ho
besabab be waja...

kiya karo kiya na karo kuch samjh main naye ata
mujh ko lagne laga hai tum bhaut satate ho

kiya samjh pai hum pyaar ko tere woh sanam
darde dil dil ka tum had se badate ho

hayera hoke hum door jab jate hai
apni majboriya bata ker fir hume samjhate ho

tera andaze bayan kabhi kuch tu kabhi kuch khta hai
hum ko lagne laga hai ke tum hume khoob banate ho

besabab be waja kiyu dil jalate ho
tod ker dil mera fir tum muskorate ho..
Posted 07 Apr 2008

Rapunzel says
umda
Posted 07 Apr 2008

Fairl_Girl says
good work apa
n mm
Posted 08 Apr 2008

Fairl_Girl says
~CHANDNI~ said:

Posted 08 Apr 2008

~tasha~ says
kool
Posted 08 Apr 2008

Rapunzel says
Chandni n MM more plz......
Posted 08 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Mera Dil

Apni dharkno Kay Beqaboo Honay Ka Khail

Dekhna Chahta Hai

Ab Laut Aao

Kay Aik Bar Phir Meri Palkien

Tumhari Nazroon Sey Ghabra Ker

Jhukna Chahti Hain

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Meray Qadam

Tumharey Qadmon Kay Saath

Unhin Rastoon Per Chalna Chahtey Hain

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Mera Wajood

Tumharey Ishq Ki Aag Main

Jalna Chahta Hai

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Meri Zindagi

Tumhari Zindagi Sey Jurr Ker

Khud Ko Jeena Chahti Hai...!!!
Posted 09 Apr 2008

Miss mine says

thank u FG, Rapu n Tashu

Moonbeam dil udas hai tum bin
Posted 09 Apr 2008

Fairl_Girl says
good work mm
Posted 09 Apr 2008

sun_shine says
Miss mine said:

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Mera Dil

Apni dharkno Kay Beqaboo Honay Ka Khail

Dekhna Chahta Hai

Ab Laut Aao

Kay Aik Bar Phir Meri Palkien

Tumhari Nazroon Sey Ghabra Ker

Jhukna Chahti Hain

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Meray Qadam

Tumharey Qadmon Kay Saath

Unhin Rastoon Per Chalna Chahtey Hain

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Mera Wajood

Tumharey Ishq Ki Aag Main

Jalna Chahta Hai

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Meri Zindagi

Tumhari Zindagi Sey Jurr Ker

Khud Ko Jeena Chahti Hai...!!!



Salaam
Really nice Dil se....
Posted 09 Apr 2008

Rapunzel says
Miss mine said:


thank u FG, Rapu n Tashu

Moonbeam dil udas hai tum bin




Welcum dear

yeah agree with u missing her
Posted 09 Apr 2008

Rapunzel says
Miss mine said:

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Mera Dil

Apni dharkno Kay Beqaboo Honay Ka Khail

Dekhna Chahta Hai

Ab Laut Aao

Kay Aik Bar Phir Meri Palkien

Tumhari Nazroon Sey Ghabra Ker

Jhukna Chahti Hain

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Meray Qadam

Tumharey Qadmon Kay Saath

Unhin Rastoon Per Chalna Chahtey Hain

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Mera Wajood

Tumharey Ishq Ki Aag Main

Jalna Chahta Hai

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Meri Zindagi

Tumhari Zindagi Sey Jurr Ker

Khud Ko Jeena Chahti Hai...!!!



Superb
Posted 09 Apr 2008

kOoLeSt1 says
Posted 10 Apr 2008

~CHANDNI~ says
Fairl_Girl said:

~CHANDNI~ said:




thannnxxx
Posted 13 Apr 2008

~CHANDNI~ says
Miss mine said:

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Mera Dil

Apni dharkno Kay Beqaboo Honay Ka Khail

Dekhna Chahta Hai

Ab Laut Aao

Kay Aik Bar Phir Meri Palkien

Tumhari Nazroon Sey Ghabra Ker

Jhukna Chahti Hain

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Meray Qadam

Tumharey Qadmon Kay Saath

Unhin Rastoon Per Chalna Chahtey Hain

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Mera Wajood

Tumharey Ishq Ki Aag Main

Jalna Chahta Hai

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Meri Zindagi

Tumhari Zindagi Sey Jurr Ker

Khud Ko Jeena Chahti Hai...!!!








i loved the luv that was luv
the tru luv the ,hope of a beautiful luv
the oblivion of luv
a breathless luv that made me luv
the love of luv
a nakedly n truley possesive love
a raw luv
the ..painfull luv,acid on ur soul luv
the heart break of luv
a shadow of fear bcz of luv
an unpredictable luv
this soulful luv
a friendship luv
ur luv
your never ending ,forgiving constant luv
that makes me want ur luv an annointed luv
a promised luv
our faithful luv
making me love ur luv this luv a luv that truley is love
Posted 13 Apr 2008

~CHANDNI~ says
Miss mine said:

Be sabab be waja kiu dil jalate ho
tod ker dil mera fir pas bulate ho

tum se hoker khafa jab hum rooth jai gaye
apni baho main bherke pyaar fir jatate ho
besabab be waja...

kiya karo kiya na karo kuch samjh main naye ata
mujh ko lagne laga hai tum bhaut satate ho

kiya samjh pai hum pyaar ko tere woh sanam
darde dil dil ka tum had se badate ho

hayera hoke hum door jab jate hai
apni majboriya bata ker fir hume samjhate ho

tera andaze bayan kabhi kuch tu kabhi kuch khta hai
hum ko lagne laga hai ke tum hume khoob banate ho

besabab be waja kiyu dil jalate ho
tod ker dil mera fir tum muskorate ho..



great
Posted 13 Apr 2008

~CHANDNI~ says





banhoon may CHlaly aoo
ham say sanam kiya parda
yeh raat ka nahie milan
yeh sang hai umar bhar ka

shhhhhhhhhhh

bahoon main chalay aoo
ham se sanam kya parda

chalay hee jana hai
nazar chura ke younh
phir thami thee meree sajan tum ne meree kalai kion
kissie ko apna bana ke chorday
aisa koee nahie kerta

shhhhh shhhhh shhhhhhhhh
Posted 13 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
~CHANDNI~ said:

Miss mine said:

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Mera Dil

Apni dharkno Kay Beqaboo Honay Ka Khail

Dekhna Chahta Hai

Ab Laut Aao

Kay Aik Bar Phir Meri Palkien

Tumhari Nazroon Sey Ghabra Ker

Jhukna Chahti Hain

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Meray Qadam

Tumharey Qadmon Kay Saath

Unhin Rastoon Per Chalna Chahtey Hain

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Mera Wajood

Tumharey Ishq Ki Aag Main

Jalna Chahta Hai

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Meri Zindagi

Tumhari Zindagi Sey Jurr Ker

Khud Ko Jeena Chahti Hai...!!!








i loved the luv that was luv
the tru luv the ,hope of a beautiful luv
the oblivion of luv
a breathless luv that made me luv
the love of luv
a nakedly n truley possesive love
a raw luv
the ..painfull luv,acid on ur soul luv
the heart break of luv
a shadow of fear bcz of luv
an unpredictable luv
this soulful luv
a friendship luv
ur luv
your never ending ,forgiving constant luv
that makes me want ur luv an annointed luv
a promised luv
our faithful luv
making me love ur luv this luv a luv that truley is love


luv u
Posted 14 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
~CHANDNI~ said:






banhoon may CHlaly aoo
ham say sanam kiya parda
yeh raat ka nahie milan
yeh sang hai umar bhar ka

shhhhhhhhhhh

bahoon main chalay aoo
ham se sanam kya parda

chalay hee jana hai
nazar chura ke younh
phir thami thee meree sajan tum ne meree kalai kion
kissie ko apna bana ke chorday
aisa koee nahie kerta

shhhhh shhhhh shhhhhhhhh


v niceeee jani
Posted 14 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
       
Posted 14 Apr 2008

olldman says
Miss mine said:

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Mera Dil

Apni dharkno Kay Beqaboo Honay Ka Khail

Dekhna Chahta Hai

Ab Laut Aao

Kay Aik Bar Phir Meri Palkien

Tumhari Nazroon Sey Ghabra Ker

Jhukna Chahti Hain

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Meray Qadam

Tumharey Qadmon Kay Saath

Unhin Rastoon Per Chalna Chahtey Hain

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Mera Wajood

Tumharey Ishq Ki Aag Main

Jalna Chahta Hai

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Meri Zindagi

Tumhari Zindagi Sey Jurr Ker

Khud Ko Jeena Chahti Hai...!!!



Beutifull poetry,as always. MM
Posted 14 Apr 2008

Rapunzel says
Miss mine said:

       



Just luv it
Posted 14 Apr 2008

Rapunzel says
Chandni u did great
Posted 14 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
olldman said:

Miss mine said:

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Mera Dil

Apni dharkno Kay Beqaboo Honay Ka Khail

Dekhna Chahta Hai

Ab Laut Aao

Kay Aik Bar Phir Meri Palkien

Tumhari Nazroon Sey Ghabra Ker

Jhukna Chahti Hain

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Meray Qadam

Tumharey Qadmon Kay Saath

Unhin Rastoon Per Chalna Chahtey Hain

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Mera Wajood

Tumharey Ishq Ki Aag Main

Jalna Chahta Hai

Ab Laut Aao

Key Aik Bar Phir Meri Zindagi

Tumhari Zindagi Sey Jurr Ker

Khud Ko Jeena Chahti Hai...!!!



Beutifull poetry,as always. MM


beautiful comments as always thxxxs
Posted 15 Apr 2008

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