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~~ Chalay jao ~~






Kahan Ja pao Gay Tum?
Chalay Jao...!

Mager Dekhna Khench Lae Ge
Meri Muhabbat
Us Pal Us Lamhay K Jub
Zindagi Ki Dhool Jhulsae GE
Mushkiloun Ki Lambi Sadak Thukraege
Kisi Badan Key Lams Ki Mehek TersaeGe
Kisi Aashna Ko Tersou Gay
Baat Kernay Ko Humnawa Dhondoo Gay
Jub Kabhe Bikhro Gay To Chaho Gay Koi Sameet Lay Bahoun Main
Koi Bharay Aankhooun Main
Koi Choom Ker Tumharay Lub Tum Ko SairaaB Ker Dey
Us Pal.......!
Haan Us Lamhay...!
Meri MuhabbaT .!
Dekhna Tumhain Khench LaeGe...!

Chalay Jao.................!!!!!







Hum Say MuhabbaToun Ki Numaish Na Ho Saki
Bas Itna Jantey Hain Tumhain Chahtey Hain Hum





Posted 20 May 2007

Miss mine says
rapunzel said:

Miss mine said:

       



Just luv it


thanku rapu
Posted 15 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
kabi moam ban k pigal gaya,

kabi girtay girtay sambhal gaya

wo ban k lamha guzar gaya

meray paas se nikal gaya

usay rota b to kis tarah

k wo shakhs itna ajeeb tha

kabi tarap uta meri aah se

kabi ashk se na pighal saka

sar e rah mila wo aga kabi

to nazar chuka k Guzar Gaya

wo utar Gaya meri ankh se

mere dil se Q na utar saka

wo chala Gaya jahan Chor k

main wahan se phir na palat saka,

wo sambhal Gaya tha magar,

main bikhar k phir na simat saka..
Posted 15 Apr 2008

Rapunzel says
Bohat Umdaa
Posted 15 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
rapunzel said:

Bohat Umdaa



thxxxxxxs rapu
Posted 17 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
Zindagi ki udaas raahon per
tu mili bhi ghari do pal ke liye

Main nazar utha kar tarap gaya
Tu nazer jhuka kar chali gayi

Wo waqt bara ajeeb tha aaya
Main zindagi key liye taras gaya

Teri rah main taktaa reh gaya
Tu apni dhun main guzer gayi

Ye mohabat howi bhi to kesi howi
Main ek pal ko hi mila tum sey
Agley lamhey tu bichar gayi

Ek pal main so khuwaab jiya main
Aankh khuli to zindagi bikhar gayi

Wo nazrana bara ajeeb tha
Jab main unmain uljha raha

Or tum nazer bacha kar guzar gayi

Dhoondh raha tha us pal tum main khud ko
ik tum be‘wafa thien jo muskura ker chalbasi...
Posted 17 Apr 2008

~CHANDNI~ says
Miss mine said:

Zindagi ki udaas raahon per
tu mili bhi ghari do pal ke liye

Main nazar utha kar tarap gaya
Tu nazer jhuka kar chali gayi

Wo waqt bara ajeeb tha aaya
Main zindagi key liye taras gaya

Teri rah main taktaa reh gaya
Tu apni dhun main guzer gayi

Ye mohabat howi bhi to kesi howi
Main ek pal ko hi mila tum sey
Agley lamhey tu bichar gayi

Ek pal main so khuwaab jiya main
Aankh khuli to zindagi bikhar gayi

Wo nazrana bara ajeeb tha
Jab main unmain uljha raha

Or tum nazer bacha kar guzar gayi

Dhoondh raha tha us pal tum main khud ko
ik tum be‘wafa thien jo muskura ker chalbasi...

really nice
Posted 17 Apr 2008

~CHANDNI~ says
rapunzel said:

Chandni u did great




oh   Thnnnx rapu the great
Posted 17 Apr 2008

~CHANDNI~ says
Miss mine said:

       








nIce lIke Mis mine
Posted 17 Apr 2008

~CHANDNI~ says



Yehi Wafaa ka silaah hai, to koi baat nahi
Yeh dard tum ne diya hai, to koi baat nahi
Yehi bohot hai ke tum dekhte ho sahil se
Safeena doob raha hai, to koi baat nahi
Rakha tha aashiyana-e-dil main choopa ke tumko
Woh ghar tumne chor diya hai to koi baat nahi
Tum hi ne aayena-e-dil mera banaya tha
Tum hi ne tor diya hai to koi baat nahi
Kise majaal kahe koi mujh ko deewana
Agar yeh tumne kaha hai to koi baat nahi
Ishq ke phool bhi khilte hain, bikhar jaate hain
zakhm kaise bhi hon, kuch roze main bhar jaate hain
Us khwabon main ab koi nahi aur hum bhi nahi
Itne roze se aaye hain, chup chaap guzar jaate hain
Nurm aawaaz, bholi baatain, mohazzab lehjaa
Pehle baarish main hi, sab rang utar jaate hain
Raasta roke khari hai, wahi uljhan kab se
Koi puche to kahen kya ke kidhar jaate
Posted 17 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
~CHANDNI~ said:




Yehi Wafaa ka silaah hai, to koi baat nahi
Yeh dard tum ne diya hai, to koi baat nahi
Yehi bohot hai ke tum dekhte ho sahil se
Safeena doob raha hai, to koi baat nahi
Rakha tha aashiyana-e-dil main choopa ke tumko
Woh ghar tumne chor diya hai to koi baat nahi
Tum hi ne aayena-e-dil mera banaya tha
Tum hi ne tor diya hai to koi baat nahi
Kise majaal kahe koi mujh ko deewana
Agar yeh tumne kaha hai to koi baat nahi
Ishq ke phool bhi khilte hain, bikhar jaate hain
zakhm kaise bhi hon, kuch roze main bhar jaate hain
Us khwabon main ab koi nahi aur hum bhi nahi
Itne roze se aaye hain, chup chaap guzar jaate hain
Nurm aawaaz, bholi baatain, mohazzab lehjaa
Pehle baarish main hi, sab rang utar jaate hain
Raasta roke khari hai, wahi uljhan kab se
Koi puche to kahen kya ke kidhar jaate


awesome janiii
Posted 18 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
~CHANDNI~ said:

Miss mine said:

       








nIce lIke Mis mine


nai aap ki tarah
Posted 18 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
Muhabbat rog hoti hai kaha bhi tha
rula ker khud bhi roti hai kaha bhi tha

kinaarey k qareeb lay jaa ker
ye kashti ko daboti hai kaha bhi tha

isay tum dil ki dharti ka pata mat dou
ye is mein dard boti hai kaha bhi tha

muhabbat mein khushi k baad gham ki rut
bohat nazdeek hoti hai kaha bhi tha

luta ker dil ko roney sey bhi kya haasil
bohat naa'yaab moti hai kaha bhi tha

azal sey is ki fitrat hai zamaaney ko
jaga ker khud ye soti hai kaha bhi tha

ye ser sey paa'on tak bus raakh ker dey gi
bohat bey dard hoti hai kaha bhi tha...

Posted 18 Apr 2008

kOoLeSt1 says
Posted 18 Apr 2008

~CHANDNI~ says
thannnnx    dear   


mmmmm
Posted 20 Apr 2008

Rapunzel says
Posted 21 Apr 2008

olldman says
Miss mine said:

kabi moam ban k pigal gaya,

kabi girtay girtay sambhal gaya

wo ban k lamha guzar gaya

meray paas se nikal gaya

usay rota b to kis tarah

k wo shakhs itna ajeeb tha

kabi tarap uta meri aah se

kabi ashk se na pighal saka

sar e rah mila wo aga kabi

to nazar chuka k Guzar Gaya

wo utar Gaya meri ankh se

mere dil se Q na utar saka

wo chala Gaya jahan Chor k

main wahan se phir na palat saka,

wo sambhal Gaya tha magar,

main bikhar k phir na simat saka..



Pleasure to read.
Posted 22 Apr 2008

olldman says
Miss mine said:

Zindagi ki udaas raahon per
tu mili bhi ghari do pal ke liye

Main nazar utha kar tarap gaya
Tu nazer jhuka kar chali gayi

Wo waqt bara ajeeb tha aaya
Main zindagi key liye taras gaya

Teri rah main taktaa reh gaya
Tu apni dhun main guzer gayi

Ye mohabat howi bhi to kesi howi
Main ek pal ko hi mila tum sey
Agley lamhey tu bichar gayi

Ek pal main so khuwaab jiya main
Aankh khuli to zindagi bikhar gayi

Wo nazrana bara ajeeb tha
Jab main unmain uljha raha

Or tum nazer bacha kar guzar gayi

Dhoondh raha tha us pal tum main khud ko
ik tum be‘wafa thien jo muskura ker chalbasi...



Main nazar utha kar tarap gaya
Tu nazer jhuka kar chali gayi.
Beautiful,MM, a gem.
Posted 22 Apr 2008

olldman says
~CHANDNI~ said:




Yehi Wafaa ka silaah hai, to koi baat nahi
Yeh dard tum ne diya hai, to koi baat nahi
Yehi bohot hai ke tum dekhte ho sahil se
Safeena doob raha hai, to koi baat nahi
Rakha tha aashiyana-e-dil main choopa ke tumko
Woh ghar tumne chor diya hai to koi baat nahi
Tum hi ne aayena-e-dil mera banaya tha
Tum hi ne tor diya hai to koi baat nahi
Kise majaal kahe koi mujh ko deewana
Agar yeh tumne kaha hai to koi baat nahi
Ishq ke phool bhi khilte hain, bikhar jaate hain
zakhm kaise bhi hon, kuch roze main bhar jaate hain
Us khwabon main ab koi nahi aur hum bhi nahi
Itne roze se aaye hain, chup chaap guzar jaate hain
Nurm aawaaz, bholi baatain, mohazzab lehjaa
Pehle baarish main hi, sab rang utar jaate hain
Raasta roke khari hai, wahi uljhan kab se
Koi puche to kahen kya ke kidhar jaate


Excellent piece of sad but enjoyable poetry.
Posted 22 Apr 2008

~CHANDNI~ says


(nili ANkhon)
Aankhon say behtay askq nahi
khoon-e-jigar rawani hai
   kuch teri bewafaii ki
   kuch wafa ki meri kahani hai

   
aankhon main jyoti nahi, tum samaye baithe ho
dil main dharkan nahi, tum ghar banaye baithe ho


ab bhi tu haseen hai, is baat say inkaar nahi
magar ab is dil ko tera intezaar nahi

    
machli paani main doob gaye
hum ishq main doob gaye
   usay to zindagi mili
   hum jeena hi bhool gaye
   

mujhko udaas dekh ker, zamany nay yeh sawal kiya
woh kaun hai zalim, jisnay tera yeh haal kiya
   maine kaha woh mohabbat hai, jo muri unkay saath hai
   woh nikli bewafa zalim, bus itni si baat hai
   

gaanay walay ko kaho, aaj is tarah gayain
her dil ko lagay chott, her aankh bhar aayain


kuch ker kay dikha dain, ki kaam bohot hain
is jahan main jeetnay walay muqaam bohot hain
   mukammal shakhs wahi jo duniya ko badal dalay
   roz marha mitnay walay naam bohot hain
   
   
tujhe dekhna chaahta hoon her pal
shayad tujhse bohot pyar karta hoon
   kal tak to tujhe jaanta bhi na tha
   aaj tera intezaar karta hoon


spiceally 4 MM




Posted 22 Apr 2008

olldman says
Zabardast.Bahut piyari.
Posted 23 Apr 2008

hot.kurri says
Chaho To Ager

Tum Ager Mujh Ko Na Chaho To Koi Baat Nahi
Tum Kisi Aur Ko Chahoge, To Mushkil Hogi
Ab Ager Mele Nahi Hai To Judai Bhi Nahi
Baat Todi Bhi Nahi Tum Ne Banayi Bhi Nahi
Ye Sahara Bhi Buhat Hai Meray Jeenay K Liye
Tum Ager Mere Nahi Ho, To Paraye Bhi Nahi
Mere Dil Ko Na Saraaho, To Koi Baat Nahi
Ghair K Dil Ko Sarahoge, To Mushkil Hogi
Posted 23 Apr 2008

~CHANDNI~ says
olldman said:

Zabardast.Bahut piyari.




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Posted 23 Apr 2008

~CHANDNI~ says
hot.kurri said:

Chaho To Ager

Tum Ager Mujh Ko Na Chaho To Koi Baat Nahi
Tum Kisi Aur Ko Chahoge, To Mushkil Hogi
Ab Ager Mele Nahi Hai To Judai Bhi Nahi
Baat Todi Bhi Nahi Tum Ne Banayi Bhi Nahi
Ye Sahara Bhi Buhat Hai Meray Jeenay K Liye
Tum Ager Mere Nahi Ho, To Paraye Bhi Nahi
Mere Dil Ko Na Saraaho, To Koi Baat Nahi
Ghair K Dil Ko Sarahoge, To Mushkil Hogi





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Posted 23 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
~CHANDNI~ said:



(nili ANkhon)
Aankhon say behtay askq nahi
khoon-e-jigar rawani hai
   kuch teri bewafaii ki
   kuch wafa ki meri kahani hai

   
aankhon main jyoti nahi, tum samaye baithe ho
dil main dharkan nahi, tum ghar banaye baithe ho


ab bhi tu haseen hai, is baat say inkaar nahi
magar ab is dil ko tera intezaar nahi

    
machli paani main doob gaye
hum ishq main doob gaye
   usay to zindagi mili
   hum jeena hi bhool gaye
   

mujhko udaas dekh ker, zamany nay yeh sawal kiya
woh kaun hai zalim, jisnay tera yeh haal kiya
   maine kaha woh mohabbat hai, jo muri unkay saath hai
   woh nikli bewafa zalim, bus itni si baat hai
   

gaanay walay ko kaho, aaj is tarah gayain
her dil ko lagay chott, her aankh bhar aayain


kuch ker kay dikha dain, ki kaam bohot hain
is jahan main jeetnay walay muqaam bohot hain
   mukammal shakhs wahi jo duniya ko badal dalay
   roz marha mitnay walay naam bohot hain
   
   
tujhe dekhna chaahta hoon her pal
shayad tujhse bohot pyar karta hoon
   kal tak to tujhe jaanta bhi na tha
   aaj tera intezaar karta hoon


spiceally 4 MM






my beautiful sis thanku

zaberdasttt
Posted 23 Apr 2008

astaghfaar image
kher kher
solly
what can i say now
carry on
Posted 23 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
QUEEN VICTORIA said:

astaghfaar image
kher kher
solly
what can i say now
carry on



lolz QV sis image to achi hai
Posted 24 Apr 2008

Miss mine says

thanku Koolest, Olldman n rapu
Posted 24 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
Mainey kaha woh ajnabi hai

Dil ne kaha ye dil ke lagi hai

Mene kaha woh sapna hai

Dil ne kaha phir b apna hai

Mene kaha woh do pal ke mulakat hai

Dil ne kaha woh sadiyo ka sath hai

Mene kaha woh mere Haar hai

Dil ne kaha ise ka naam to "PYAR" hai
Posted 24 Apr 2008

Miss mine says
Ta'aluq Torta Hoon Tou
Mukamal Tor Deta Hoon

Jissey Main Chorh Deta Hon
Mukammal Chorh Deta Hoon

Mohabbat Ho K Nafrat Ho
Bhara Rehta Hoon Shiddat Se

Jidhar Se Aaye Ye Darya
Udhar Hii Mor Deta Hoon

Yaqeen Rkhta Nahi Ho Main
Kisi Kachey Ta'aluq Per

Jo Dhaag Tootne Wala Ho
Usey Khud Tor Deta Hoon..

Posted 24 Apr 2008

Rapunzel says
beautifull
Posted 25 Apr 2008

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