rapunzel said:
madgirl said:nooooooooooooo wayyyyyyyyyyy bilo meri hai,billo ki billi billi aankho ka serf ek mai devana hoo
oay tumhein tu mein batata hoon
asan te jana billo k ghar
dobara jana hain Billo k ghar
rapunzel said:
SohniKuddi said:
rapunzel said:
Virdan said:
rapunzel said:waise tu i m female but abhi male hoon
billo kahan gaye thi mein tumhare bina bohat udas tha(abrar)
ik to mein is Abrar se bari tang ho jab daikho mon utha kar billo billo pukarta rehta hay tumhain sharam nahee aati jawab jahan larki ko tang kartay huway kuchh sharam karo abhi to tumhari shadi bhi ho gai ganday bachay
oay billo aaj se mein tumhe chorrta hoon chall hattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
challl accha kiya...
abb mein hi mein
oay tum meri billo pe nazar rakhte ho abhi tumhari latan panta hoon
javad said:ayee ki topic hai
rapunzel said:
Virdan said:
rapunzel said:waise tu i m female but abhi male hoon
billo kahan gaye thi mein tumhare bina bohat udas tha(abrar)
ik to mein is Abrar se bari tang ho jab daikho mon utha kar billo billo pukarta rehta hay tumhain sharam nahee aati jawab jahan larki ko tang kartay huway kuchh sharam karo abhi to tumhari shadi bhi ho gai ganday bachay
oay billo aaj se mein tumhe chorrta hoon chall hattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
Teen Tracker said:kise I am holding breath
SohniKuddi said:And the Oscar for the best performance (portraying the opposite sex) goes to......
(drum roll please)
SohniKuddi
SohniKuddi said:Females ko male ban'na he?
lolz nothing to it, easy
so presenting to you...SohniKuddi as.....
Ranjha ahem..here goes.
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Ranjha: (To Billo)
Ayyy Billo, u remind me of a parking ticket....u got FINE written all over ya..
Billo ni, hum ne yah gaana sunnah aur aap ki yaad ayi:
HAYE TRARPAVE, SADDI JAAN KAD JAAVE, TERA LAAL GHAGRA
HAYE THARPAVE, SADDI JAAN KAD JAAVE, TERA LAAL GHAGRA
RAATAN DI NEEND URAAVE, BILLO NI TERA LAAL GHAGRA
BILLO NI TERA LAAL GHAGRA, BILLO NI TERA LAAL GHAGRA
Abb tu bann jah meri
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hahahahahahahahahahahaha, kaisa lagga??? typical munda, i'm sure all the gals would agree, (although ranjha aint all that good at line maaring) the song tops it off
rapunzel said:waise tu i m female but abhi male hoon
billo kahan gaye thi mein tumhare bina bohat udas tha(abrar)
new_beau said:vAADA YAAD HAY ....tRY BHI KI thi magar mizaaj nahin mila
QUEEN VICTORIA said:vv nice ghazal virdan
new_beau said:
ROOSHANAASI...I think its wrong Word here..ROO means CHEHRA...aur ZAAT ka chehra nahin kaha ja sakta ...Try to change this misrah... [/QUOTE=new_beau]
asal mein jab yeh pehla shere likha tha to tasawr mein koi shakhs tha aur jab dosra shere likha to tassawar mein Allah Tala ki zaat thi isi liyay kaha
Tairi zaat buzarg o bar tar
Mujhay bhi mardam shanasi milay
yani keh woh buzarg o bar tar zaat hay kuchh bhi de sakti hay so us se mardam shnaasni mangi keh woh to sab anayat kar saktay hain
Niklay ko niklein karnay ki koshash karo ga Insha Allah
aur yeh Aasi Alif se hay jo keh word Aas se liyay gaya hay gunahgaar wala nahee hay
aur aakhir mein bhai yahi kaho ga keh aap ne mairi is haqeer se kawish ko behtar banay k liyay jo kuchh kaha hay aur jo madadf di hay mein is k liyay shukriya walay alfaz kehtay huway bhi sharm mehsoos kar raha hon
aap apnay aisay he alfazo se nawaztay rehyay ga i know keh mairi poetry mein ghaltiyan he ghaltiyan hain so plz batatay rehyay ga aur is mien bhi abhi taseeh keejiyay ga
new_beau said:fight kon ker raha hay
Chhaddo jee Mitti pao...
Virdan saab...Its your Topic...Pls post more Poetry
new_beau said:Heer_Sial,,,and From Lahore Yeh baat Kujj Hajam nahin hui
QUEEN VICTORIA said:achhi hai