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Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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new_beau said:

Pls take more ISLAH,,,from someone and go for your Book,,,


bhai islah k liyay he to koi nahee koi correction hekar de is mien yahi khawahish hay kiyon keh is mein wazan ki bari mistakes hain aur bhi kuchh hon gi agar aap kar sako to mien aap ka shukar guzaar hon ga i m waiting
Posted 29 Sep 2005

Topic: Sada Kar K Daikha (Personal)

Virdan

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mmja said:

virdan lagta hai tumharay sath bat karnay kay liay mughay regylarli urdu ki clases layni padrayn gi or han yar tum imran series padrtay ho sachi batana?
wesay main to apnay khyalon ki akasi kar raha tha.


Imran series mien parhta tha barhi pari hain jab parta tha to koi miss nahee karta tha aur urdu ki class ka kaya hay bhai hamien khud nahee aati urdu sahee tarah se ok thanks 4 ur remarks
Posted 29 Sep 2005

Topic: Chhor diya.............

Virdan

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Jub chaha jazbaat say khailay jub chaha dil tor dia
Hum nay bhi aisay logon say milna julna chor dia...

bohat achhi hay very nice indeed thanks 4 sharing friend
Posted 29 Sep 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

Age: 124
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King of jb said:


Thanks a lot 4 this clapping mod
Posted 28 Sep 2005

Topic: Sada Kar K Daikha (Personal)

Virdan

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mmja said:

sari zabardast hai par last shair to kamal ka hai yar mayios kiyn hotay ho ajkal kay shairon main say to kafi say achay ho.


Thanks a lot ap k alfaz mairay jazbo ko taqviyat de rahay hain
Posted 28 Sep 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

Age: 124
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mmja said:

sari achi hain lakin second wali ziada achi hai
or han esi tarahn apni poetry sunatay rehna.



Thanks a lot 4 ur appreciation aap chatdd forum per bhi hain na
Posted 27 Sep 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

Age: 124
7060 days old here
Total Posts: 652
Points: 0

Location:
Pakistan, Pakistan
Posted 27 Sep 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

Age: 124
7060 days old here
Total Posts: 652
Points: 0

Location:
Pakistan, Pakistan
Posted 27 Sep 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

Age: 124
7060 days old here
Total Posts: 652
Points: 0

Location:
Pakistan, Pakistan
Posted 27 Sep 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

Age: 124
7060 days old here
Total Posts: 652
Points: 0

Location:
Pakistan, Pakistan
Posted 27 Sep 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

Age: 124
7060 days old here
Total Posts: 652
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Location:
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Tairi Yaad Aa Rahi Hay

Hijar Ke In Lamhon Mein
Jab Har cheez Chhin Gai Hay
Aur Mairay Sar Pe
Dard Ki Chadar Tan Gai Hay
Magar Zindagi Geet Ga Rahi Hay
Hamein Tairi Yaad Aa Rahi Hay

Talb-e-Vasal Nahee Rahi Kabhi Hamein
Kiyon Keh Hum Shauq-e-Janoon Mein
Vasal Ko Bhool Chukay Hain
Hijar Ko Kar Wasool Chkay Hain
Magar Tum Be Chain Phir Rahay Ho
Vasal Ki Tamanna Liyay
Janay Kiyon Tum
Hijar Se Na Shanas Lagtay Ho
Agarcheh Dor Ho Phir Bhi
Dil Ke Pass Lagtay Ho
Dard Se Be Haal Hain Hum
Magar Dunya?????????????
Muskara Rahi Hay
Hamein Tairi Yaad Aa Rahi Hay

Saray Magan Hain Apnay Haal Mein
Ik Hum Phansay Hain Tairay Khayal Mein
Andhairi Raaton Mein Hum
Tairi Yadon Ke Hum
Dil Mein Charagh Liyay Phirtay Hain
Qurbat Ke Lamhon Mein Bhi Hum
Hijar Ke Dagh Liyay Phirtay Hain
Agarcheh Chandni Sath Nabha Rahi Hay
Hamein Tairi Yaad Aa Rahi Hay

Mehv-e-Guftagoo Thay Tum
Magar Dhayaan Kahee Aur Tha
Dil Kahee Aur Tha
Gumaan Kahee Aur Tha
Kiyon keh Aksar Jaan-e-Amir Hum
Tairay Khadokhal Mein Uljhay Rehtay Hain
Magar Ahista Ahista
Tairi Sorat Hum Se Door Ja Rahi Hay
Hamein Tairi Yaad Aa Rahi Hay..........
Hamein Tairi Yaad Aa Rahi Hay..........


Posted 27 Sep 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

Age: 124
7060 days old here
Total Posts: 652
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Location:
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Posted 27 Sep 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

Age: 124
7060 days old here
Total Posts: 652
Points: 0

Location:
Pakistan, Pakistan
Posted 27 Sep 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

Age: 124
7060 days old here
Total Posts: 652
Points: 0

Location:
Pakistan, Pakistan
Posted 27 Sep 2005

Topic: Sada Kar K Daikha (Personal)

Virdan

Age: 124
7060 days old here
Total Posts: 652
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Location:
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Lost World said:

bahout khoobsoorat kawish hai Amir @};-


Thanks a lot 4 these remarks
Posted 27 Sep 2005

Topic: Taira Zikar Kiyon Nahee Jata

Virdan

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Lost World said:

Amir u r to suchi muchi k poet ho

waiting for some other awsome creationzz


Thanks keh aap aisa samjhtay ya ti hain magar yeh aap ki aala zarfi hay warma mein is qabil kahan
Posted 27 Sep 2005

Topic: Taira Zikar Kiyon Nahee Jata

Virdan

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ok i will post some sooon
Posted 23 Sep 2005

Topic: Sada Kar K Daikha (Personal)

Virdan

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new_beau said:

Just Post it in a single topic..then Members will give comments and you can improve easily...


jee zaroor mein ik new banao ga jis ka name rakho ga Amir Virdan's Persoanl Poetry
Posted 23 Sep 2005

Topic: Taira Zikar Kiyon Nahee Jata

Virdan

Age: 124
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new_beau said:

Virdan said:

new_beau said:

Really a good Thought...You can improve it more and more...Also I think Its "inspired" one ..(Pls dont mind...)

Anyways...Pls Keep Posting More...Also tell if you have it on the net....

I am waiting for more....


Thanks a lot 4 liking mine poetry and can u explain what do u mean by inspired one waisay to sabhi jo kuchh bhi likha jata hay inspire ho kar he likha jata hay and dont worry there is nothing to mind and i have sent this on three forums Thanks waiting 4 ur reply


Sorry Dear..I tried a lot but Couldn't Find that Ghazal...

It was a s Follows....

"Sar say meray Yaadonn ka Qehar kiyun nahin Jaata"
"Ik Shakhs meray Dil say Uter Kiyun nahin Jaata"


Anyways...words are few and Passions are Many..Kahin na kahin Baar repeat ho hi jaati hay...No prob...

Keep it Up....

Thanks a lot bro 4 guiding me and telling me some about that agar aap ko phir kabhi aisa lagay to kindly zaroor batayay ga Thanks again
Posted 21 Sep 2005

Topic: Sada Kar K Daikha (Personal)

Virdan

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ok i will Insha Allah but bhai mein is field mein abhi sahee kaho to tifl e maktab bhi nahee hon sirf qafiya aur radeef ka pata hay wazan ka koi pata nahee hay na koi khyal rakha gaya by chance kisi mein ho to ho
Posted 21 Sep 2005

Topic: Subha Ahmed’s Poetry ( URDU VERSION )

Virdan

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Masha Allah Subha Aap ki Poetry bohat shandaar hay Allah Tala aap k qalam ko aur tabaani de aur hum jaisy no amooz aap se kuchh aur seekh sakein apna khyal rakhyay ga Allah Hafiz
Posted 19 Sep 2005

Topic: Taira Zikar Kiyon Nahee Jata

Virdan

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Fairl_Girl said:

nice


Thanks Fairl Girl
Posted 19 Sep 2005

Topic: Taira Zikar Kiyon Nahee Jata

Virdan

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new_beau said:

Really a good Thought...You can improve it more and more...Also I think Its "inspired" one ..(Pls dont mind...)

Anyways...Pls Keep Posting More...Also tell if you have it on the net....

I am waiting for more....


Thanks a lot 4 liking mine poetry and can u explain what do u mean by inspired one waisay to sabhi jo kuchh bhi likha jata hay inspire ho kar he likha jata hay and dont worry there is nothing to mind and i have sent this on three forums Thanks waiting 4 ur reply
Posted 15 Sep 2005

Topic: Taira Zikar Kiyon Nahee Jata

Virdan

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QUEEN VICTORIA said:

nice ghazal amir


Thanks great Queen
Posted 14 Sep 2005

Topic: Taira Zikar Kiyon Nahee Jata

Virdan

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SupidGuy said:


if its urs then its nice.....


agar yeh aap ki nahee hay janab to phir pakka yaqeen kar leinkeh mairi he hay Thanks 4 apperciation
Posted 14 Sep 2005

Topic: I m Amir

Virdan

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shahrukh khan said:

hello sir...welcome on jb


Thanks bro 4 welcoming me mujh nacheez ko aap ne welcome kiya bohat khushi mehsoos hui thanks once again
Posted 14 Sep 2005

Topic: I m Amir

Virdan

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Lost World said:

WElcomun shelcomun ..enjoy kerun


jee ab hum aa gaiy hain na so sahar bhi dien gay aur kinaray ki kosahsh bhi karein gay Insha Allah
Posted 14 Sep 2005

Topic: I m Amir

Virdan

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Thanks u all again specially victoria queen
Posted 02 Sep 2005

Topic: I m Amir

Virdan

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mmja said:

no thanks ok dosti main kesa thanks.


yes aap ki baat bilkul theek hay
Posted 02 Sep 2005

Topic: I m Amir

Virdan

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Thansk u all 4 welcoming me
Posted 02 Sep 2005
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