Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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Posted 11 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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jee han aisa he hay iradatan he kahi gai hay yeh

Posted 11 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

Age: 124
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new_beau said:

Virdan said:
filhaal shair farigh paa jee vaila nakkma nakara

cutefriend said:
gud work virdan

Yeh Gud work poetry per kaha hay ya unn LAQABAAT per jo Virdaan saheb nay Khud ko Diyey Hainn

Hor Sunao Jee .....

Waisay Meray Comments Theek bhi thay ya Aiwainee...Seiously tell kerna...Meri bhi Islah ho jaye gi..Its a matter of Mutual Guidence

paa jee hum to thehray aap k pankhay i mean fan aur fano ko kaya pata kaya sahee hay kaya ghalt waisay hamien to sahee he laga aap ko dosri ghazal ro dein gay hum kaisi lagi

Posted 09 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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cutefriend said:
gud work virdan

Thanks bro

Posted 09 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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filhaal shair farigh paa jee vaila nakkma nakara

Posted 09 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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Posted 09 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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new_beau said:
Chalo abhi Ziyaada Jazbaati na ho... Please post some more jee

woh lafz dhaltay hain aap ko kaisi lagi

Posted 09 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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new_beau said:
Meray Remarks ko Chhoro...Poetry per dhiyaan dou

per kaisay hum kaha is qabil k poetry kar sakein

Posted 08 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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new_beau said:

Virdan said:

new_beau said:

kiyon bhai bura laga kaya

Aray Nahin...Mainn tou CONCPT per Shock ho gaya...

GHULAM GHAZLAIN....marvelous...

Its very Great Khayaal...Improve it....

Thanks bhai aap apnay remarks dein

hamaray liyay to wohi eham hain

Posted 08 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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QUEEN VICTORIA said:

good

Thanks

Posted 08 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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Posted 08 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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new_beau said:

kiyon bhai bura laga kaya

Posted 08 Oct 2005

Topic: Sada Kar K Daikha (Personal)

Virdan

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kiran said:
very nice virdan mere jaise khwahish hai appki.

jee shaid aisa he ho aap log abhi mairi poetry virdan s personal poetry mein he parh sakein gay check it i will send all of mine in it thanks

Posted 07 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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Tamaam Aala Zarfo se mazrat k sath

Posted 05 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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new_beau said:
Inshallah

Insha Allah

Posted 05 Oct 2005

Topic: Own Poetry

Virdan

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new_beau said:
Well...

Mujh NaCheez ki Raye mainn...Alag say Poetry Sections ko Define kerna Zaroori nahin...Forum Barh Jayenn gay...

Secondly...Agar kisi ko Kisi ki personal Poetry mainn Interest na hua tou OWN POETRY forum mainn koi jaye ga hi nahin...

Sirf yeh ho sakta hay keh..

Jitnay bhi OWN POETRY kay thredas hainn woh STICK rahainn..aur Intikhaab Normal Thread mainn Rahay...

Baaqi jo Admins Behter Samjhainn...

jaisay aaplog behtar samjhein

Posted 05 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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new_beau said:
Agli baar Qeemti Mashwara PAISAY lay ker doon ga..

Boss...Shayer ki Shayeri Bachonn ki Tarah hoti hay....

Uss ko Sanwaarna...Bohat Mushkil hay Kisi Ajnabi kay Haath say...Haan Issay Tayyar Kerainn Mainn yeh Bata sakta hoon keh RANG KONSA KHILAY ga....baal khulay Rakhay jayenn ya Choti Banayee Jaye....Shalwar Qameez ho ya Frawk achha lagay ga...

Only Mashwara

Tauba tauba kaya zamaana aa gaya hay ab bhaiyo se bhi pasay laitay hain log acha bhai lee leejiyay ga magar paisay honayeid mubaril waly chahyay

bhai shair kishairi ki baat he nahee hay yeh to ik bachay ki shairi ki bat hay jis ki jis tarah behla do gay behal jaiay ga

abhi daikhyay jo Allah ko manzoor huwa

Posted 03 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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new_beau said:
Good Long Poem above...Tawaalat nay Nazm mainn Kuchh dilchaspi kum ker di hay...
Ooper kay 75 Percent Hissay mainn Mohabbat aur Aqeedat ka Concept Mix hay...Jiss say Confusion hay...

Magar Aakhri Hissay mainn Clarity hay....Concept bohat Achha hay...

Iss nazm ko Baar Baar perho aur Thori Mukhtasir kero...

Mohabbat mainn QURBET ki Zaroorat...aur Aqeedat kay WAJDAAN ko ..aap nay Kaafi Khoobsurti say Bayaan kiya hay...MashAllah

Thanks a lot 4 these comments bro. yeh aap ki zarra nawazi hay keh aap mujh se no amooz ko itni tawajo se nawaz rahay ho aur apni qeemti opinion se nawaz rahay ho mien Insha allah koshash karo ga keh is mien kuchh change kar sako agar ho sakay to plz aap bhi kuchh kar deejiyay ga khud se i m waiting Thanks

Posted 02 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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Lost World said:
wow

kia aap her waqt qalam leker chaltay hain

nahee jee klaam hum ko le kar chalta hay

Posted 02 Oct 2005

Topic: Own Poetry

Virdan

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Thanks 4 this i already made a thread 4 it but i still want to say that its a nice and famous forum it required a section for own poetry thanks

Posted 01 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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Thanks a lot dear bro 4 this help i will try my best

Posted 01 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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new_beau said:

Virdan said:

new_beau said:
Pls take more ISLAH,,,from someone and go for your Book,,,

bhai islah k liyay he to koi nahee koi correction hekar de is mien yahi khawahish hay kiyon keh is mein wazan ki bari mistakes hain aur bhi kuchh hon gi agar aap kar sako to mien aap ka shukar guzaar hon ga i m waiting

I will love to do it for you...But Tell me in which city are yoyu...I can try to guide you towards some Adabi Circles...

i m from Gujranwala

Posted 01 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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~Fragi~ said:

Thanks

Posted 01 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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Posted 01 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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Posted 01 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

Age: 124
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Posted 01 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

Age: 124
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Posted 01 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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Posted 01 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

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mmja said:
last

Thanks

Posted 01 Oct 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Virdan

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Fairl_Girl said:

Thanks 4 this

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