new_beau said:Abhi Jaldi say Poetry Posty kero...werna Chit Chat Topic ban gaya yeh tou UN STICKY ho jaye ga
new_beau said:Kaam say nahin gaya ...Agar Mainn Aisa kerta tou Aap pastol nikaal letay ....
new_beau said:Lekin Mujhay tou Ghaltiyaann nikaalni nahin aatinn
Mainn tou KEERAY nikaalta hoon
new_beau said:
Virdan said:waisay bhai jab aap kehtay ho na keh yeh karo to maira khoon rocket ki tarh khoolta hay nakkama aadmi hon magar aap bhi mairay sath rehtay rehtay nakkmay ho chalay ho khud bhi kuchh kar liya karo na
Lo Uncle jee...AA BAIL MUJHAY MAAR ker lya hay aap nay..Ab Saber kero...Eid Guzarnay dou...Tumhari Shayer ka Post Martam SHURU
new_beau said:Aray Queen_of_JB jee..welcome Wapas..Bohat din baad tashreef layeenn aap...
King of jb said:ahan nice yara
Queen of jb said:
Virdan said:
new_beau said:Bara Aajzi bhara Shair hay Kiran jee...Agar uss nay FIRE maar diya tou kiya kerainn gi aap
kiran said:nice very nice
kiran said:boohat jaldi ani chahiye...
intezar hai lafzoon ka jo dil pe lagain
perh ke jinko hum kuch bi na keh sakain
new_beau said:"Shama ko bhi bara pyaar hay perwaanay say
uss ki Mohabbat ka hay andaaz magar rulaanay wala"
Iss Ghazal Baar baar perho...Wazan theek hya..Issay Terteeb ki Zaroorat hay...Terteeb ka matlab.."GHANAYEEYET" hay...
Iss mainn Khayal acha hay ..Magar NAGHMAGI nahin hay ..Lafzonn ki Terteeb ko Aagay peechay ker kay iss mainn RYHTHEM paida kero...Its really a good Ghazal