Virdan

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Thanks a lot bhai aap ki pasandeedgi ka bohat mashkor hon aur shere bohat he achha tha thanks apna khyal rakhyay ga aur mujh no amooz ki rahnamai kartay rehyay ga aap ki duao ka talab Amir
Posted 31 Oct 2005

Virdan

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Posted 30 Oct 2005

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new_beau said:

Abhi Jaldi say Poetry Posty kero...werna Chit Chat Topic ban gaya yeh tou UN STICKY ho jaye ga


achha bhai karta hon na yeh bhi masla hay
Posted 30 Oct 2005

Virdan

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new_beau said:

Kaam say nahin gaya ...Agar Mainn Aisa kerta tou Aap pastol nikaal letay ....


tauba tauba nahee bhai mairi itni jurrat mien to nikalta seedhi toap    
Posted 30 Oct 2005

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new_beau said:

Lekin Mujhay tou Ghaltiyaann nikaalni nahin aatinn





Mainn tou KEERAY nikaalta hoon



shukar hay keeray nikaltay hain agar aap is mien se hathi aur shair nikalna shoro kar daitay to mien to gaya tha na kaam se
Posted 29 Oct 2005

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new_beau said:

Virdan said:

waisay bhai jab aap kehtay ho na keh yeh karo to maira khoon rocket ki tarh khoolta hay nakkama aadmi hon magar aap bhi mairay sath rehtay rehtay nakkmay ho chalay ho khud bhi kuchh kar liya karo na



Lo Uncle jee...AA BAIL MUJHAY MAAR ker lya hay aap nay..Ab Saber kero...Eid Guzarnay dou...Tumhari Shayer ka Post Martam SHURU

wah wah thanks bhai yahi to mien chahta tha keh is mein itni ghaltiyan hain koi to aisa bhai mil jaiy jo inhain nikal de thanks a lot bro aur han zara zor se marna suna hay aap k seeng kafi lambay ho gaaiy hain
Posted 28 Oct 2005

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new_beau said:

Aray Queen_of_JB jee..welcome Wapas..Bohat din baad tashreef layeenn aap...


jee hamari tarf se bhi bohat bohat welcome jee
Posted 28 Oct 2005

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King of jb said:

ahan nice yara


wah wah kaya baat hay isay kehtay hain ik to chupri aur oper se 2 2 wah queen k sath bhi king bhi Masha Allah Thanks 4 remarks dear
Posted 28 Oct 2005

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Queen of jb said:

Virdan said:




              

Thanks a lot aap queen ho so kabhi kabhi sakhawat kar k remarks de diya karo
Posted 28 Oct 2005

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waisay bhai jab aap kehtay ho na keh yeh karo to maira khoon rocket ki tarh khoolta hay nakkama aadmi hon magar aap bhi mairay sath rehtay rehtay nakkmay ho chalay ho khud bhi kuchh kar liya karo na
Posted 27 Oct 2005

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mein to pehlay he kehta hon bhai keh yeh ghaltiyo ka palanda hay really thanks a lot 4 ur comments
Posted 27 Oct 2005

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Posted 26 Oct 2005

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lein bhai phir mien send kar raha hon bus bardasht kar leejiayay ga ok
Posted 26 Oct 2005

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jee jee aa gai hon bhai sui nahee plz sui ka suntay he bahir aa gaya hon kaisa asar hay wah jee wah
Insha Allah 2 din mien send karo ga new poetry bye
Posted 24 Oct 2005

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ha ha ha ha ha shaid aisa he ho per kabhi kabhi bhai takleef ki shidat itni hoti hay keh insan be his ho jata hay
Posted 23 Oct 2005

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new_beau said:

Bara Aajzi bhara Shair hay Kiran jee...Agar uss nay FIRE maar diya tou kiya kerainn gi aap


array kaha bhai Allah Tala maf farmaain itna gunahgaar sa banda hon us ka aur shiri kaha bus be tukki se koshashein karta hon jis mein i know bohat zayda mistakes hoti hain bus aap sab ki muhabbt hay Thanks 4 this
Posted 21 Oct 2005

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kiran said:

nice very nice


thanks a lot 4 liking mine poetry keh lon agar apa log ajazat dein to
Posted 21 Oct 2005

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kiran said:

boohat jaldi ani chahiye...

intezar hai lafzoon ka jo dil pe lagain
perh ke jinko hum kuch bi na keh sakain



Jee Insha Allah per kindly aap mujh se aisi koi tawaqo na rakhein mairay lafz to shaid bilkul aam se hotayhain aur shair thori hon koi kehsome thing special kar guzro khair apni se koshash karo ga Insha Allah
Posted 21 Oct 2005

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INSHA ALLAH JALD AA JAIAY GI
Posted 19 Oct 2005

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Thanks a lot Bro
Posted 17 Oct 2005

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Posted 15 Oct 2005

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Posted 15 Oct 2005

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jee jee paa jee kiyon nahee sabar hum kar saktay hain
Posted 15 Oct 2005

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new_beau said:

"Shama ko bhi bara pyaar hay perwaanay say
uss ki Mohabbat ka hay andaaz magar rulaanay wala"



Iss Ghazal Baar baar perho...Wazan theek hya..Issay Terteeb ki Zaroorat hay...Terteeb ka matlab.."GHANAYEEYET" hay...

Iss mainn Khayal acha hay ..Magar NAGHMAGI nahin hay ..Lafzonn ki Terteeb ko Aagay peechay ker kay iss mainn RYHTHEM paida kero...Its really a good Ghazal



shukriya paa jee paa jee aap kafi kamm choor ho gaiay hain har kaam mujh se he karatay hain kabhi koi kaam khud bhi kar liya keejiyay aiy kamm hun aapi karo tussi mairay kolo nai hunda
Posted 14 Oct 2005

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Posted 13 Oct 2005

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Thanks 4 telling bro
Posted 13 Oct 2005

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Thanks a lot bro mein ne abhi tak aap ka naam to jana he nahee so plz bhai tell me urs?
Posted 11 Oct 2005

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Posted 11 Oct 2005

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Posted 11 Oct 2005

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Posted 11 Oct 2005