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A lovely read, Tasha.
Posted 24 Jan 2009

Topic: Having Hope

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Excellent, Tasha.
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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You have added beautiful work here, very enjoyable.Tasha.
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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A wonderful read, Rapunzel.
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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Great addition.
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Very enjoyable.
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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Brilliant work, great image.Rapunzel.
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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Rapunzel said:





Image


If I hand you
My delicate heart,
Will you promise me
That you won't allow it to fall apart?


For my heart, you see
Is easily broken.
It has been bruised, battered
And once stolen.


My once loving heart
Has lost its knowledge of trust.
It has endured many tortures
Cause by careless lust.


So can you promise
To protect my delicate heart?
And to hold it with great care,
So there is never a chance that it will fall apart.


Beautiful.
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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Rapunzel said:

Saamnay aa key nigaahoon ko churaata kiyoon hay
Hay ager piyaar ussay bhee to chuppaata kiyoon hay
Chain din main hay ussay aur na raatoon ko sakoon
Itnee qurbet hay to phir rooth kay jaata kiyoon hay
Youn to main bhool gaya hoon ussay maazi kee tarah
Dil ko her waqt mager yaad woh aata kiyoon hay
Teri faryaad sunni hay na sunnay ga koi
Phir bhee tu haath duaaoon ko uthaata kiyoon hay



Excellent, Rapunzel ji.
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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Rapunzel said:

Raat hogi to chand bhi dikhai dega,
khabho me tumhe vo chehra bhi dikhai dega;
ye mohabat hai jara soch ke krna,
kyonki ik AANSU bhi gira to sunai dega.



Bohut hi achi, Rapunzel.
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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Rapunzel said:

Kabhi To Ki Hogi Suraj Ne Chand Se Mohabbat
Tabhi to Chand Main Daag Hain
Shayed Ki Hogi Chand Ne Bewafai
Is Liye Suraj Main Aag Hai


Khoob, khoobsurat.
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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Miss mine said:

Tu is tarha se meri zindagi main shamil hai
jahan bhi jaoon yeh lagta hai, teri mehfil hai

yeh aasmaan, yeh badaal, yeh raste, yeh hawaa
har aik cheez hai apni jagha thikane pe
kaii dino se shikayat nahi zamane se

Yeh zindagi hai safar, tu safar ki manzil hai
jahan bhi jaoon yeh lagta hai, teri mehfil hai
Tu is tarha se meri zindagi main shamil hai

tere bagair jahaan main koi kami si thi
bhatak rahi thi jawani andheri raahoon main
sukoon dil ko mila aa k teri baahoon main
main aik koi hui mouj hoon, tu sahil hai
jahan bhi jaoon yeh lagta hai, teri mehfil hai

Tu is tarha se meri zindagi main shamil hai

tere jamaal se roshan hai kainaat meri
meri talash teri dilkashi rahe baki
khuda kare k yeh deewangi rahe baki
teri wafaa hi meri har khushi ka hasil hai
jahan bhi jaoon yeh lagta hai, teri mehfil hai

Tu is tarha se meri zindagi main shamil hai....



Bohut achi hai shahyri. (m. Rafi)I like this one.
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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~CHANDNI~ said:

mukhara os ka chand seraat hai chandani
meray ghar mein aa gie hai chanda ki chandani
kismat ke andehray khabi dor neigh hotay
suraj ki roshani ho ya chanda ki chandani
payar ki khatier to kuch kerna peray ga
kismat ka saath ho ya chanda ki chandani
os ki khushi ab marie khushi ke sang ho gie
chanda ke saath ho jab chanda ki chandani
chudahvien ka chand, sumendar ka shoar tha
lahroun pe hama rakhas chanda ki chandani
otra jo chand mehfil mein ronaq se ho gie
dewana bana deatie hai chanda ki chandani
dareachay se deakh rahie thi ke jab wahan
aangan mein pehlie thi chanda ki chandani
phir chup gay thay taray chanda ki oat mein
jab chand ne pehlaie thi chanda ki chandani
mehsus ho raha hai tu meray ass pass hai
pehlie hai shaied is gharie chanda ki chandani
dewana hai chokar saada chand ke lea
chand ka khumar hai ya chanda ki chandani


Bohut khoobsurat.
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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Rapunzel said:

Hum bhool jate hain chand ki pehchan tujhe dekhtay dektay
Hussan wale hojate hain pareshan tujhe dekhtay dekhtay

Khuda nay banaya hoga tujhe kei saadyioon main
Hota hai ye gomaan tujhe dekhtay dekhtay

Jiss nay kia na ho Pyaar sari zindagi main
Bhatak jata hai wo bhi Insaan tujhe dekhtay dekhtay

Jin ki zindagi Khatam horahi ho pal bhar main
Mil jata hai Inhay Jeenay ka samaan tujhe dektay dektay

Gar tere milnay Milan k baad maut aaye bhi tu kia
Hum ho jaein gaye Kurbaan tujhe dektay dektay

sHAf! Tu karta hai tareef chand ki chandni dekh kar
Maghr Khamosh ho jati hai Zubaa tujhe dekhtay dekhtay



Zabardast Rapunzel ji.
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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~CHANDNI~ said:




CHAND KI CHAHAT KARTI HOOO
TUM PAGAL LARKI LAGTI HOOO
WO DUR FALAK PE REHTA HAI
TUM KAHIN ZAMEEN PE BASTI HOO
SITAREEY USS KAY HUM DUM HAIN
KIYUN BAAT NAHIN SAMAJTI HOO
WO PARIYUN KAY DEESE KA BAASI HAI
TUM AAM SEI SURAT LAGTI HOO
KIYUN RAAT BHAAR NEEND NAHIN AATEE
KIYUN SOOCH MAIN DOOBI REHTI HOO
JO TUM PE BEETI MOHABAT MAIN
USS SE KIYUN NAHIN KEHTI HOO
KHABOON MAIN KHOYEE REHTI HOO
KIYUN MARY MARY PHIRTI HOO
CHAND SE BATAIN KARTI HOO
RAAT KI BAAHOON MAIN SOTI HOO
YUN AAS LAGAYEY BETHI HOO
KISI KI BAAT SUNTAI HOO
CHAND KI CHAHAT KARTI HOOO
TUM PAGAL LARKI LAGTI HOOO


Shahyri aurr image, bohut achi. Chandni.
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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Rapunzel said:

nhi mush k lye bheje hain



Bush se dosti hai to dard takleef share to karni hi parre ghi na.

Yahan baabaas ke liye ab koi jhoota to nahi bacha na?
Posted 24 Jan 2009

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Hum Janu Baabbaas yahan kayaa kare?

Sab babes/dolls ne apne jhoote, sare, bush ke liye bhaijh diye hein ya?
Posted 23 Jan 2009

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OK OK, I wont turn up promise.

Ilford ? Allah itni traffic, north circular pe, no pateince. I can get to Pakistan quicker.

Let it be all girls meet. And no protests outside promise.
Posted 23 Jan 2009

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Beautiful.
Posted 23 Jan 2009

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Wonderful work, but sad, Tasha
Posted 23 Jan 2009

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Miss mine said:

Katoon si chubhti hai Tanhai
Angaroon si sulagti hai Tanhai

Koi aa kar hum dono ko hunsa de
Main rota hoon rone lagti hai Tanhai

Jab bhi tere Hisar se nikalna chaha
Yaadoon k beej bone lagti hai Tanhai

Raat k kisi hise main yeh bhi Bewafa ho jati hai
Main nahi sota sone lagti hai Tanhai

Tum se judaa ho kar is se hi Dil laga lia hai
Mar sa jata hoon jab khone lagti hai Tanhai..













Khoobsurat, bohut achi read, MM.
Posted 23 Jan 2009

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Lashakir said:

AAP SAB KI NAZAR AIK GHAZAL ...
UMEED HAI AAP KO ZAROOR PASAND AAY GI...
LIJAAY ENJOY IT...



Bohut achi.
Posted 23 Jan 2009

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~CHANDNI~ said:



Apani Khushi na aaye na apani khushi chale



Behatar to hai yahi ke na duniyaa se dil lage

Par kyaa karen jo kaam na bedillagi chale



Ho umr-e-Khizr bhi to kahenge ba_vaqt-e-marg

Ham kyaa rahe yahaan abhi aaye abhi chale



Duniyaa ne kis ka raah-e-fanaa men diyaa hai saath

Tum bhi chale chalo yuun hi jab tak chali chale



Naazaan na ho Khirad pe jo honaa hai vo hi ho

Daanish teri na kuch meri daanishvari chale



Kam honge is bisaat pe ham jaise bad_qimaar

Jo chaal ham chale vo nihaayat buri chale



jaate havaa-e-shauq men hen is chaman se 'Zauq'

apani balaa se baad-e-sabaa kahin chale



Bohut khoob, Chandni.
Posted 23 Jan 2009

Topic: Kahawat..

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Bohut achi laghi. Rapunzel.
Posted 23 Jan 2009

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Bohut khoobsurat.
Posted 23 Jan 2009

Topic: Umeed-e-Wafa

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Bohut achi Rapunzel.
Posted 23 Jan 2009

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Wish I knew where to send it. Your Work place or home



Posted 23 Jan 2009

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Mystique easy ones first.



First thought when you look up at sky


Name or describe, one positive and one negative outlook for 2009


Go back in time, tell us of that speechless moment/s
Do you think B HO, president of the USA should resign and how soon.


Give two reasons why he should resign.       
Posted 22 Jan 2009

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Well done Sunshine. Too easy on Mystique why?

Brilliant job, S S.
Posted 22 Jan 2009

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More postcards soon. Thank you Chandni.
Posted 22 Jan 2009