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Ecelling poetry, very enjoyable.Rapunzel.
Posted 08 Dec 2008

Topic: Tears

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be missal.Mile juley rang. Bahut achi.
Posted 08 Dec 2008

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Unbelievable, so sweet of you.


Thank you MM.

Thank you Tasha.
Posted 07 Dec 2008

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sun_shine said:

Assalam O Alaikum

*Meray Allah! agar tu nay dobara zindagi bakhshi
bas itni si guzarish hai, mujhay pathar bana dena

faqt itna kaha tha k mujhay kuch roshni day do
tumhain kis ne kaha tha dil ki basti ko jala dena

phir uss kay baad jis kay paas bhi jao ijazat hai
mujhay ik baar apnay naam ki mehndi laga dena








Simply magnificent, S S.
Posted 07 Dec 2008

Topic: The Ice Storm

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Great work, Tasha.
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Excelent, Tasha.
Posted 07 Dec 2008

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(Tashu n Jamz) Brilliant.

Posted 07 Dec 2008

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Amazingly fantastic collection. Beautiful additions Tasha.
(You are slowing down Tasha )
Posted 07 Dec 2008

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~CHANDNI~ said:



chaand pey ek udaasi dekhi hai

aankh uski khufa si dekhi hai

chaand ko chaand na nazar aaya

rooh uski bhi piyaasi dekhi hai

poochha be waqt nikal aaya hai

bola chanda mujhey bulaya hai

uskey deedaar ko tarasta hoon

uski soorat zara si dekhai hai

lot ja chaand lot ja wapas

woh na ab tujh sey milne aaegi

chaand key roop mai shayad tu ney

larki ek bewafa see dekhi hai

tu bhi aie chaand kha gaya dhoka

aaj tujh pey bhi hai aalam hu ka

tere chehrey pey aaj ahsan ney

ek ajab badhawasi dekhi hai


Chandni, for ever very enjoyable poetry.
Posted 07 Dec 2008

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Very enjoyable read, QV.
Posted 07 Dec 2008

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Rapunzel said:

Mere Khawaab Meri Kahaniya
Mere Be-Khabar Tujhe Kya Pata
Teri Aarzuo ke Dosh per
Teri kaifiyat ke Jaam mein
Mere Khawaab'Meti Kahaniya
Mere Zaiche'Mere Raastein
Mere laikh ki Ye Nishaniyaan
TERI Chah mein hai Ruki hue
Kabhi Ansuoon ke Kitaar mein
Kabhi Patharo ke Hisaar mein
Kabhi Dasht-e-Hijar ki Raat mein
Kabhi bad naseebi ki Ghaat mein
Kai rang Dhoop se jal gaye
Kai Chaand Shaakh se dhal gaye
Kai tan sulag ke pighal gaye
Tere ulfato ke Qayaam mein
Tere Dard ke Daro baam mein
Koi kab se Sabt-e-Saleeb hai
Teri kainaat ki Raat mein
TERI Azdhaam ki Shaam mein
TUJHE KYA KHABAR MERE BE-KHABAR



A beautiful work, very enjoyable Rapunzel.
Posted 07 Dec 2008

Topic: Judayi

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Miss mine said:

Suno
Hum toot jaein gay
K doori seh na paein gay
Judai maar dalay gee
Suno!
Yeh aankhein bojhal hain
Inhein kis tarha behlaein
Suno!
Hum so na pein gay
Kabhi khush ho na paein gay
Judai maar dalay gee
Suno!
Ye dil tumhara hai
Na tum bin ab guzara hai
Suno
Kuch waqt do hum ko
Bana lein dost iss ghum ko
Humein maloom hai aakhir
Judai maar dalay gee..





Bahut khoobsurat MM.
Posted 07 Dec 2008

Topic: Judayi

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Rapunzel said:

juda hona hi thehra to
gilay kaisay shikayat kya
juda ho jayen chupkey se
na tum bolo na main boloon
hamare bol perne se
judaayi phhail sakti hai
hawaun main
fizaaaaon main
judaai zaat main bher lein
chalo ham is terha ker lain
kisi sunsaan raste ke
kisi bhi morre per dono
juda ho jayen chupke se
na tum bolo na main bolon
hamare bol parney se
judayi phhail sakti hai...!!


Wow, what a wonderful work, Rapunzel.
Posted 07 Dec 2008

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kOoLeSt1, A very enjoyable collection.


Rapunzel, bahut khoob.
Posted 07 Dec 2008

Topic: Phr

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Rapunzel said:

Phir wohi main,wohi tu
Phir wohi shaam, wohi tanhai
Phir wohi geeet,wohi jankhar
Phir wohi baat,wohi raaz
Phir wohi din,wohi raat
Phir wohi gham,wohi aass
Phir wohi rang, wohi roop
Phir wohi agaz,wohi anjam
Phir wohi main,wohi tu
Phir wohi sur,wohi sangeet
Phir wohi jaan,wohi pahchan
Phir wohi log,wohi khuda
Phir wohi main,wohi tu
Phir wohi shaam,wohitanhai
Phir wohi yaad,wohi naam
Phir wohi paal,wohi lamhay
Phir wohi tum,wohi main
Phir wohi ruthna,wohi manana,
Phir wohi aakar ,wohi dur jana
Phir wohi hansii, wohi rona
Phir wohi main, wohi tu,
Phir wohi sham,wohi Tanhai



A lovely collection of thoughts.
Posted 07 Dec 2008

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Beatiful, Rapunzel.
Posted 07 Dec 2008

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Bahut khoob.QV.
Posted 07 Dec 2008

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Beautiful, MM.
Posted 07 Dec 2008

Topic: Nazm

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Bahut achi Rapunzel.
Posted 07 Dec 2008

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Subha poetry nahi parni chaiye. Dekhna hai din kaisa ghuzzrta hai.

Bahut hi khoobsurat and sad. Great addition here MM.
Posted 25 Oct 2008

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Beautiful nature.
Posted 25 Oct 2008

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madgirl said:



Great poem and lovely image, bas aurr kuch nahi kehna.
Posted 25 Oct 2008

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Bahut achi hai Sunshine.
Posted 25 Oct 2008

Topic: EID ASHAAR

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QUEEN VICTORIA said:











Jitni baar paron phele se achi laghti hai, sab ye collection.

Barri Eid bhi aa rahi hai. Do lafzon se to Eid ka mazza nahi aye gha.
Posted 25 Oct 2008

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Congratulations Tasha, well done
Posted 25 Oct 2008

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great headgear.
Posted 25 Oct 2008

Topic: Sweet jewelry

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Sugar round your neck, sweet idea.
Posted 25 Oct 2008

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Clarity and crystal or is it the other way around. Beautiful, Tasha.
Posted 25 Oct 2008

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Thats news for me.
Posted 25 Oct 2008

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Men in white suits? well what can I say. Good luck to the bride and groom.
Posted 25 Oct 2008